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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
nice update. i wonder y Asad cant walk straight, i mean he knows how clumpsy Zoya is but still he has to bump into her, every now n den. hmm.. so Asad knows da builder Zoe's looking for. i know she'l make him tell her da abt the guy but i guess Asad's accompanying her, haina? next time plz thora lamba likhna, itne se mein maza kum ho jata hai.
love,
Nimra.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Hi guys, I'm back and I've brought you all part 10.

Enjoy ;)

Part 10:

Zoya: …..Mr. Khan! Mr. Khan, please mujhe bataye na!

Asad closed his eyes in frustration, the whole afternoon she was after him, asking the same question over and over again….

Asad: I said NO.

Zoya: par kyun? Sirf aaphi meri madat kar sakti hai

Asad put down the book he was trying to read.

Asad: Aapko Qureshi sir se baat kyun karni hai?

Zoya: Held a confused face

Zoya: Aapne unhe Sir bulaya hai?

Asad: Voh, He's my role model

Zoya: Toh bataye na, aapki role model ki address kya hai?Asad: For the thousandth time why do you need it

Zoya crossed her arms

Zoya: it's personal, but very important

Asad hesitated for a while

Zoya: Please, Please! It's important, bohot important

"If I say no, she'll eat my head, if I say yes…she'll still eat my head."

He looked at his watch, 6:30

"If we go, we could be back by 8:30 or so"

Asad looked at Zoya who had a pleading expression.

Asad let out a sigh

Asad: Fine…

Zoya smiled

Zoya: Yes!

Asad: But...

Zoya: Oh no, but?

Asad: The drive there to the destination is long...maybe an hour or so, and you don't look like you're in the state of driving

Zoya's smile turned upside down

Asad picked up the book he was reading again

Zoya smiled again

Zoya: Mr. Khan

Asad made an annoyed expression

Asad: Now what?

Zoya: Could you drive me there

Asad: Haha...NO

He stood up

Zoya: Why?

Asad: I said no

Zoya attempted to stand up

Zoya: I-

She collapsed because of her foot.

She was so close to fall, but Asad couldn't let that happen, he caught her

His strong arms held her close to him, their eyes stuck on each other

Asad was lost in her eyes, he didn't know what was happening, but it felt good

But paradise lasted as much

Zoya: Mr. Khan

She whispered

Zoya: I don't think I'm at the risk of falling anymore; you could stand me up now…

Asad realized his situation and pulled her up

Asad: Are you okay?

Zoya: I'm fine, now...aap mujhe leke jayenge ya nahi? C'mon we don't have time.

Zoya started limping ahead

Asad: Wait…who told you I was taking you?

Zoya shrugged

Zoya: No one, par you wouldn't let a temporary disabled girl drive...by herself… this late at night?

Zoya made a sad face

Zoya: What if something terrible happens?

She smiled and started walking again

Asad clenched his jaw. She knew how to deal...Very well

Asad: Nautanki ke award jitney chaihiye inko...

He said to himself. He too started walking out the door.

When he walked outside he found Zoya leaning on his car and tapping away in her pink covered iPad. She looked up to find him starring at her.

Zoya: What… chaliye?

He walked to the other side and got in she too sat in.

He started driving and soon the non-stop banter began.

……………………

Zoya: Oh my god, kya aapne kabhi bunjee jumping ki...ya sky diving…bohot maza hai…ek dim meh aur meri friend Mary skydiving ki aur uski-

Asad: I don't care…I don't care if you went to a club, I don't care I Mary was riding a horse...I really don-

The one who cut in, was cut mid sentence himself

Zoya: How rude, Mary is a very loyal friend, aapko aise nahi kehna chaiye…

She turned back to face in front

SCREETCH!

The car stopped

Zoya: Allah Miya, what's wrong? Gaari kyun rokhdi?

Asad: Mehne nahi rohki

Zoya: So what happened?

Asad: Maybe, the car doesn't want to drive, maybe it wants to bungee jump.

He said sarcastically, while Zoya rolled her eyes

Asay looked out the window

Asad: And the area too is deserted

He got down and Zoya did the same

Zoya hugged herself

"So much for no sweater..."

Asad: I'll go see, if there is anyone up ahead

Zoya: Wait!

Asad: What?

Zoya: You're going to leave me here

Asad: No one's stopping you from following…

She nodded and he locked the car doors.

………...

Zoya: Why is this place so empty?

Asad: Because we're at the end of the city

Zoya: Ugh! Where does Mr. Qureshi live?

Asad: We could've gone tomorrow, but you had to go today

They were walking along the edge of the road close to the woods.

Zoya: Mr. Khan, it's really creepy here

He had to walk slower, because of her injury

Zoya: Mr. Khan! Look ahead, I see lights

He looked ahead a mile or two away there were lights

Asad: I guess there's a person ahead….

He started walking faster…

Zoya: Mr. Khan, slow down!

He turned seeing her hold her food and a painful look on her face.

All of a sudden he felt guilty. He knew..But…

Asad walked back to her

Asad: Are you okay?

Zoya nodded and attempted to walk again, but was about to fall, he held her.

Asad picked her up in his arms surprising her. He started walking; with one hand she clutched his collar and another around his neck. Her eyes were glued to him.

Getting closer, they heard music

They stopped in front of the source of the music

Lucky Singh's Dhabba

Asad + Zoya: you've got to be kidding me

...

Precap: Entry of Asad's Best Friend

...

I hope you all enjoyed that, I haven't revised it, so please don't mind my mistakes. Once again I'm sending PM's to all. Thank you

Farhana <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Wow I loved it!!!! It was great I cant wait until ur next update and the entry of Asad's best friend maybe he will tease Asad?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
awsm update

loved it.

specially their car journey :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
This is getting so interesting with each chapter
Wonderful...
Loved their nok-jhoks on their way to Qureshi's house
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
dats was a gud part. i knew Zoya wud drag him along n man she knows v well how to play wid his thoughts. good now dey r deserted at da city end, now wat? Asad felt guilty n picked her up, dats soo sweet of him. lets see who his best friend is.
love,
Nimra.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Awesome part
Looved it
Lucky Singh's Dhabba...hehehe this will be fun
New entry...wow waitiing for the next part
So update soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
hye nice part
dhabbe me Ka ker re wo..I mean karenge...wink
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Nice Update!
Thanks for the pm!

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