Abhiya OS: Action/Effect/Reaction :D

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Hello guyzz! 🤗
This idea just strike into my mind yesterday ... U will not believe that actually i was practising my science for a weekly test .. About topics Action/Effect/Reaction... 🤣 🤣 And look wat i did in the end .. Sachi abhiya are everywhere 🤣 🤣

Abhiya OS: Action/Effect/Reaction :D



She was just in front of me, across the road.

She is the most beautiful girl I have seen, my friends don't agree, they say the one who stays in hostel is better, but I don't think so.

It has been more than 2 years; we are just looking at each other, or I can say I am looking at her.

"Why need language, if you can talk with your eyes? "I thought.

"You don't even know her name" someone shouted, I don't know from where.

"Go ahead, she is alone, at least say hello" the voice repeated.

"Yes, at least I can say hello", I decided to go ahead,

Action: I was unable to put off my eyes from her. Showing a great determination kept my first step towards her.

Effect: suddenly the earth became smooth, like cream. As if I will fall down. A strange smell filled my senses.

Reaction: "Oh yuck, I hate cows, I will sue people who left their cows on street" I shouted. "Hell, my shoe itself smells like cow dung"

Next few minutes were wasted in cleaning the shoe. I looked up; she was still there thanks to the person, for whom she was waiting. Finally I was ready, started walking,

Action: I looked at her. Hairs floating in air, as if crackles in the sky.

Effect: I was feeling like walking on a beach on new year eve, in fact was able to hear a bang too.

Reaction: some people started running towards a biker, who was sitting on the road, his bike inside one of the shop. Someone shouted "catch that $#@&..." showing finger towards me.

But before anyone can notice me I had crossed the road and just was in front of her.
She saw me. I knew she knows me; after all I have spent more than 2 years looking at her.
I decided to go ahead,

Action: I gave a smile, she didn't. I said hi', she didn't.

Effect: I felt like she was a bit shy or she is afraid if I will directly propose.

Reaction: She started walking away. I tried to stop her by saying; I just wanted to say hi'.

She stopped; she turned, this time with a bit smile and comfort. I felt happy that she understood my feelings.

Action: I walked towards her and stood just a foot away from her.

Effect: She gave a smile and also a strange hint that I was not able to understand.

Reaction: A punch hit me. My left eye felt serious pain. My ears heard a strong and harsh voice "stay away from her" she is my girlfriend

I was left alone on the street. With my single open eye, I saw her moving away with someone on a bike.

Action: I took out my phone and called a friend, narrated the story and asked to take me home.

Effect: A huge laugh on the other side of the phone.

Reaction: from the other side "Didn't I tell you, she is having a boyfriend! Ooops..."

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ye kya tha lizo dear!!! 😆
I was laughing like mad action effect nd reaction 🤣 🤣
enjoyed reading it...
Edited by My_VivJaan - 10 years ago
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Ugh. Not the ending I like
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It was so good but WTH with the ending😡
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Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Ugh. Not the ending I like


Bar bar har fanfic mein i love you sun sun kar bore ho gayi thi so .. I canged it into punch 🤣
Sorry ha!
Next esa nahi karoon hi 😳
Edited by ---Lizo--- - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: flora212

It was so good but WTH with the ending😡


Bar bar har fanfic mein i love you sun sun kar bore ho gayi thi so .. I canged it into punch 🤣
Sorry ha! I will try to not do it again 😆
Thank u 😃

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Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

ye kya tha lizo dear!!! 😆
I was laughing like mad action effect nd reaction 🤣 🤣
enjoyed reading it...


Thank u 🤗
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

hilarious piece 😆


Thanks 😃

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