Abhiya TS: Being officailly mine <3 (completed)

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Hey everyone! 
I am back with some writing peice on abhiya which i penned a week ago, 
I am not fully satisfied with my work but due to my two school besties mahrosh and nazia encourged me alot so now i am here posting  it..




 
                                Abhiya TS: Being officailly mine  <3 

Part 1

She cudled her blanket over her sleepy face to protect herself from the hard sunrays falling from nearby window... 

SPLASH!! 

Piya jerked off the blanket! 
' misha! Please! Atleast not today! Its sunday! ' 

From the other side- 'And thats exactly what i am saying! Its sunday! Richands will be arrived till 12 pm .. And Dude! Its alread 11:15! And just look at you, sleepy head! '

'Richands! U mean uncle chand and aunty haseena and him! '
Piya almost yelled

'Duh!'
'Btw i am fully excited, Abhay! He will be back! (Laughs) remember him? We were kids when he left..
Anyway! Get ready and come quick! '

Misha left unknowningly while piya is still in some deep thoughts..

FLASHBACK

(She was 6 and he was 7)

'Abhay! U will never come back!'   She pouted

'No piyu! I will come i promise and i will marry you and then we will live together always like mommy and daddy! ' 

'Really?' 
She rose her baby brown eyes to ask him

'Yuppy!' 
He said with board smile

'U are my best friend Abhay! '
She yelled , she kissed his cheek and ran off! 

FLASHBACK  OVER


Piya , cuming to reality..

'Ahh! Come on! How can I be such a dumb! We were kids at that time! For him it must be a sillyest joke ever! How can expect that! '

Ignoring all the thoughts.. She rushed to the washroom! 


Soon Richands arrived! 
All the elders were greeted eachother with warm hugs and wishes.. While piya's eyes were continuesly searching for him..
The very next moment , he entered! 
Piya's heart skip a beat , he was there, wearing his most sexiest smirk on her! 

The last ting piya remembered was that she was wrapped in his arms foaming a tight hug from him , she was freeeze! Wild feelings were running through her..
She was not able to hug him back due she wanted it badly.. 

(Cough) (cough) 

'Do anyone bother to remember me too? '
Misha pouted

Abhay and misha  had a high- five! 

Abhay came closer to her and whispered
' I didnt expected you to grow up into so beautiful!' 
He gave her a small smile

'Thankss... ' she mumbled shyly


Time passed very smoothly, 
Arnab and chand having a breif disscussion on their bussnuiess while madhu and haseena were more interested in planning their next shopping.. 
On the other hand , youngsters were having most generous chat,  all this time Abhay didnt miss any chance to admire piya and which was probably not went unnnoticed by her! 


NEXT DAY

Piya's phone buzzed... 

'Hello?'

A fimilar  manly  voice- ' can i still call you 'piyu' ?' 

'Abhay! You! How did you got my number?' 
She almost yelled

'Easy! From ur dad , he gave it to me within seconds!
Other side replied

'Woah! He didn't ask anything?'   Piya mouthed

'Piyu! Do you think I am that much crooked to ask my girlfriend's father abt her daughter's number! Come on! I got it from misha.. '

A unknown thrill ran through her
' GIRL-FRIEND?' 

Abhay mumbled carefully..
'Look! You are a girl , right! And my friend too , right! So... Girl plus friend equals too girl-friend! Simple! ' πŸ˜›

'Fine! But not that one..! '
She demanded

'I wanna meet you! Lets have dinner, tonight? 
Just you and me! What say?' 

'Urmm... Ok! '
Piya was numb.. 

'Great! I will pick you up from ur place, 8:30pm sharp! '
'Bye'

(Call discontinues)
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Part 2

IN THE CAR

( piya wore a backless mahroon gown with all her curls tied up into a bun, while , abhay wore a black suit with white tie)

' u look so preety piyu! ' 
Abhay mouthed finally broking the silence btw them

'Thankss'... She mumbled shyly

THUD!!

'Abhay! What happened! '

'I dont know why car stopped! Wait, i am checking! '
He almost yelled getting off the car

Piya got out too

Abhay harshly kick the tyre!
'SHIT!' 

Suddenly they heard a thunder sound and  the very next moment heavy rain occured..

Both ran to the foot path under the shelter..

Piya was cudling her bare arms with her palms as weather was getting colder.. The other moment she felt something soft on her shoulders.. It was Abhay! Offering her his coat

'U will feel warm with it' 
He mumbled

Piya just nodded positive still lost in his blueish eyes..


Abhay moved backwards making a safe distance from her

Silence was filled between them...

THUD!!
Abhay punched his first harshly  on the nearby street - light pole! 

'I did everything to make this night beautiful.. Roses! Shamping! Music! Ring! Proposal! Everything! But now! Due to this awful car and this idiot rain ! Everything is vain!  SHIT! '


He kicked a nearby stone making it flop over the water in his fruatration. 

'Abhay!'...    She moaned and the other minute she found him on his kness infront of her , 

'Yes! I did it for us! Piyu.. I love you! 
Will you marry me? Will you be officailly mine?  Will you like to be Mrs Abhay Richand for rest of ur life? ' 

Unknown tears fall from her eyes, everything was running in her so fast that she just...

The last thing Abhay remembered was that her piyu was in his arms... He snaked his arms on her bare back making her shiver a bit

They parted,
She nodded vigrously, ' Yes! Yes! I love you too! And i would love to be Mrs Abhay Richand for rest of my life! ' 

Abhay brushed off her tears from her cheeks and kissed her forehead, 

' so is my piyu now officailly mine?'     He smirked 

'Ahaan...'  She chukled   ' But where is my ring?' 

' Uyeee!  I forgot! ' 
He took out the ring from his pant's pocket and slid it onto her finger..

Piya's eyes sparkle! ' I love you Abhay! ' 

   ' I love you too my piyu!' 


                                                                THE END


PS: if there is any mistake ... Plzz ignore it 

Edited by ---Lizo--- - 9 years ago
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Part 1 and 2 updated! 
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wow so romanticπŸ‘ keep it up
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 Oye ! Meri Nautanki !! Its really cute re πŸ˜³
 Continue karna πŸ˜‘ Its too good πŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: VI-SU

wow so romanticπŸ‘ keep it up


Thank u πŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: Abhiyan_SHREYA



 Oye ! Meri Nautanki !! Its really cute re πŸ˜³
 Continue karna πŸ˜‘ Its too good πŸ˜ƒ
 Thank u for pm πŸ˜† Update sooner πŸ˜‰


Thank you and its completed πŸ˜†
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Thankx πŸ˜³