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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

The last Chapter. Its really hard to believe it. I will really be missing the updates 😭


And WoW !!!, what an update.

Piya's parents are dead and now so are Abhay's parents. It was really sad to see Chand and Haseena dead and especially Chand, who was always practical and cool not wanting to fight anymore because he had lost Haseena. But its a war and there would be loss on both sides.

There is no way to get around this. I didn't like killing them either. :(


The final battle was really interesting. The concept of the clones was really interesting. Yes, after Sid, Maithili would not want to place her trust in any other ally and so she acquired and used her powers to create clones.

Thank you.At the risk of sounding arrogant, I kinda like that myself.😆


The highlight of the episode is Reina's story. I knew Reina had a story and she wanted Maithali destroyed. I also felt that Mikhail's death would have been the start and some how Mikhail and Reina were related. Maithili had ruined everything for Reina. She had wiped off all the reasons for her existence - Reina's love, her unborn child and any hope of a happy future.

That explains perfectly why Reina did not attempt to kill Maithili immediately or whenever she got a chance. Reina had gone through immense pain and agony and she wanted Maithili to suffer.

Reina could not go the same way as Maithili did, by killing the ones Maithili loved. She might have realized that Abhayendra was the one who Maithali wanted to possess and not Siddharth. Sid was just a Mohra of Maithali. Maithali killed Mikhail to get his powers mainly to impress Abhayendra. And what could be a greater punishment to Maithali than having Abhayendra hate her. And its not as if Abhayendra would hate her just like that. He would hate her for what she really became - A Real Heartless Monster.

Piya, coming into Abhay's life, had given rise to the hopes of Reina to make Maithili suffer. It was not like as if she used Piya for her purpose. Piya had infact wanted her world to be with Abhay. But Abhay never wanted that life for Piya. And ofcourse he had foiled Reina's plan of turning Piya into a vampire. Though this was done unknowingly, he would not have done it even if he knew everything. May be some how help Reina in getting her justice but would never have involved Piya. But Piya was crucial , to make Maithili feel the loss of love.

When Abhay foiled Reina's plan by turning Piya back into a human, she had to find another way. And there Abhay had wiped out Piya's memories and was frozen for an year. Abhay wanted to keep Piya out of this, but Piya was adamant to get her answers and so Reina had made her plans to involve her and that really helped, esp in Sid- Piyali's bonding.
It was not like Reina wanted to use Piya for her purpose. Piya also wanted to get involved though she was not aware of the real reason. For both Reina and Piya - Abhay was the connect. And here even Abhay could not keep Piya away. No wonder that Reina was annoyed with Abhay 😊

Reina's story and her involving Piya, is told very beautifully. This explains all and its perfectly justifiable. Its justice Reina sought and not just revenge. Maithali could have been killed long back, but she had to realize, to suffer.

Maithili had gone to the point of no return due to her obsession for powers and for Abhayendra. And she had to pay for it.

Now Reina had got her justice and I really wish she would lose her bitterness by allowing Luke into her life - atleast as a friend to start with. She now deserves peace more than anything in the world.


Yes. Reina's story isn't over yet, though- some is still left to be explained.😳



More than Arnab and Madhu, I really feel sad at the death of Chand and Haseena. It would be a very great loss for Abhay and also a loss of family for Sid when he was actually becoming a part of the family. But the comfort is that Abhay and Sid have each other and Piya has Misha (atleast for some years).

Alina and Sid have found each other and it is well for them. And Misha has Kabir.

Abhay and Piya would finally get to be with each other without any kind of tension or problem,
It cant be the same for them especially having lost their parents this way. But atleast they would have a peaceful existence, together.

Wish Luke would succeed in winning over the heart of Disha (Reina)



hahaha what makes you think he hasnt already?😆


Almost all my questions are answered - much much more to my satisfaction and believe me, I really have the satisfaction of reading something to the end.

But as you know, I always have some questions left - here they are

Reina's involvement came as a surprise to Maithali, then why did Natalya fear for Luke. She had him indoors and only permitted him to be with Reina.

If Mikhail was Reina's love then he was Natalya's brother too. Natalya had equal reasons to have Maithili destroyed. But were Natalya and Reina on the same page for avenging the death of Mikhail or were they trying their own way?

So was it Reina - the lady in black, who gave the powers to Alina after she found her to be a survivor and a fighter? Reina might have transferred her powers to Alina, but how did they end up as soul sisters? I mean like how did it all start? Alina knew about Mikhail and also the story of Reina. How was it that Alina managed to win the trust of Reina that she could share her pain and agony with Alina?

I will end my questions with this.



Like I said, Reina's story hasn't ended yet.😛


Thank you so much for this FF, Shreya. Its like the void of the actual show getting filled. The satisfaction of getting to know a real story

But also feeling very very sad that its ended. Its really sad that good things have to come to an end.

But this FF is really a master piece 👏 Thank you once again for this. And all the very best for all your upcoming works.


Gosh don't remind me yaar. I started a new FF just to fill my void. My first baby😭


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Posted: 10 years ago
Before you give me gaalis again and decide to hit..I thought lets just comment there 😆
I cant believe this Fic came to an end. This was one of my fav fic and trust me when I say this. I don't know what others feel but this has been one of your best. U have explored each and every character to its best..
I would start with Chand and Haseena becoz they have always been one of my fav! HOW THE HELL CAN U KILL THEM OFF?? They didn't deserve this. I felt so bad and at a point to shoot you off when I realised what you have done. But what worked for me was they both died together. Now they can be together. In peace.
Misha was strong. I am glad to know she lived. She is alive. Safe and Sound but what hurts me is that she lost her whole family. Piya is all she has now.
The best part was Reina. I always knew she had a story. But what I never realised was the intensity of it. The pain, tears, agony she went through. I cant even seem to imagine. I will also be honest. What Maithili did to her, I shudder to even think about it. I am happy to know that She finally received justice.
I wont even talk about Maithili here. She deserved it. Period.
Abhay and Piya can finally be together now. In peace. Together. Happy. Sigh! Something I always wanted.
Sid and Alina! I am glad they can be together too. I don't have much to say!
Something I would like to mention is the part where Abhay acknowledged Sid as his brother. That scene just brought a big smile to my face.
A.W.E.S.O.M.E ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
And I really look forward to epilogue. Plz update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --peehu--

Before you give me gaalis again and decide to hit..I thought lets just comment there 😆

I cant believe this Fic came to an end. This was one of my fav fic and trust me when I say this. I don't know what others feel but this has been one of your best. U have explored each and every character to its best..


I love this one the most.😆

I would start with Chand and Haseena becoz they have always been one of my fav! HOW THE HELL CAN U KILL THEM OFF?? They didn't deserve this. I felt so bad and at a point to shoot you off when I realised what you have done. But what worked for me was they both died together. Now they can be together. In peace.


Well, considering I was thinking of killing of either Alina or Abhay...

Misha was strong. I am glad to know she lived. She is alive. Safe and Sound but what hurts me is that she lost her whole family. Piya is all she has now.
The best part was Reina. I always knew she had a story. But what I never realised was the intensity of it. The pain, tears, agony she went through. I cant even seem to imagine. I will also be honest. What Maithili did to her, I shudder to even think about it. I am happy to know that She finally received justice.



And I have been waiting to write that story since...Idk, chapter 10?😆


I wont even talk about Maithili here. She deserved it. Period.
Abhay and Piya can finally be together now. In peace. Together. Happy. Sigh! Something I always wanted.
Sid and Alina! I am glad they can be together too. I don't have much to say!
Something I would like to mention is the part where Abhay acknowledged Sid as his brother. That scene just brought a big smile to my face.
A.W.E.S.O.M.E ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️


aww!thank you. 😳😳

And I really look forward to epilogue. Plz update soon :)


Epilogue will be definitely up by...26th.😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
So the epilogue's up. PMs have been sent. Belated Merry Christmas and wishing all of you a Happy New Year.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great ending. U should write again.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so finally the story got a closure and a very good one. it was a great story to tell and one you wanna remember a long time. the plot and twists were really brilliant as i always told you. for me you are really remarkable to write such a story in such young age. so kudos to you 👏
finally lots of unanswered question got answered by Reina. she wanted Piya to know what Alina did for her. yes they were not really best of friends but doesnt it make Piya a bit ungrateful? Piya wasnt really rude to Alina either but i guess their relationship was distant and now she will know what Alina did for her and everybody. I hope Luke will find Disha one day.
Abhay and Alinas fight was cute and good to see Abhays positive changes. and offcourse Misha proposing Kabir, why im not surprised 😆
thanks for the amazing story Shreya.. you have a long way to go 🤗
Edited by .SmokeySilence. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice epilogue. Now it's sinking in my mind dat dis ff is over , omg I vil miss it a lot. U really had us glued to dis ff. amazing job shreya . Thanks for writing such a beautiful ff.
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing epilogue.


the best part was the letter that disha wrote for pia..she definitely must have pulled her hairs thinking about the same. she explained everything to her so well and i kind of expected her to keep distance from luke after all she has spent most part of her life in trying to avenge mikhail. so it wouldn't be easy for her to let in anyone and especially someone close to natalya.

it's hard to imagine misha blushing and her proposal to kabir wasn't surprising. she was always the opposite of others. misha , kabir , piya convo was fun..just like old times.

finally sid-alina & luke met abhay& pia after one whole year. happy to see pia as a fashion designer . loved luke snapping at abhay

disha wanted pia to be friendly towards alina. it was a nice attempt from her side to tell everyone how alina never cared for her life too. their bonding was really good. no wonder they are soul sisters.

sid surprised not only disha but everyone. he was like a dark horse..nobody expected him to pull of such an act on maithili . abhay-alina spat was hilarious..they both have lot of similarities , the most common being controlling others but fortunately both their partners made sure to drove them nuts. they both acted well to trick sid and spoiled his fun..it would have been awsum to see sid -pia enjoying their fight.

pia luke scene was good even though it was small. luv their friendship and also how luke shut abhay up.

abhay is finally happy and smiling and credit to that goes to pia for pushing his barriers and entering there.

it was a nice story to read shreya and finally it's over uff i would really miss it.

lastly thanks for your kind words🤗







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Posted: 10 years ago
I cant believe this FF is over , i will miss it , this is one of the best FF i have read in IF nd u r truely a wonderfull writter Shreya .👏
i didnt comment on last chapter ( i m so soory for that😔 ) so i m commenting for both chapters here .
i loved last chapter ... full of action ...
i m happy that Luke saved Misha on time but Chandeena
oh Disha was Reina ... i didnt suspect that ... maithli was so evil...
she destroyed Reina completly ... bt finally she met her end ..she deserved it...
Pia -maithli convo was nice . for once i thought may she cared for Piyali .. bt no maithli loved only herself ...
i love abhay-sid hugging scene ...
Epilogue was nice
Pia-Misha convo was too cute ... i cant believe misha proposed kabir 😃
every thing was gud in everybody life in end ... sid have alina and abhay and pia are togather ... nd sid and piyali are frnds again 😃
hope Luke find Disha ...
Disha's letter part was gud ... she explained her story and reasons to pia...
i will miss this FF..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice ending
I'll miss this ff
Do write more...

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