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Posted: 10 years ago
It was such a dhamaka dar update
Happy to c that Misha was safe Sid confess his feelings finally
Chandeena lost their life feeling bad for Abhay he was soo sad
PiYa n Maitheli convo was written very well
Finally Maitheli chp is over n Abhay n Sid hug to each other aww
Superb ending Dear Will miss this story keep writting Luv u ❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey i m almost (joined 2 months ago)new in if...i liked dis ff a lot... ur ff is fabulous ...i read till chap 47 in a week. i m getting curious of wat wud happn next..bt i m nt getting d odr parts :( ... can u plz tl me where i wud gt d odr parts... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

hi new here...

read this ff and its awesome story so going to miss it very much..

please write more stories on abhiya...

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Posted: 10 years ago
i have gone through the chapters but couldn't comment as i am not on wattpad... and abt IF i though u will be not avaiable... sorry...updates were superb... do pm me further...thanks...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Fantabulous end shreya 👏 Not having enough words to express myself. Everything abt dis makes readers awe struck . It was a relief to c misha alive. Sid's confession of love to Alina on field ryt in front of maithli was worth . Felt really bad for chand haseena death , I thought at least abhay parents wud b alive but every victory has its own price . Both abhay pia paid with der parents sacrifice. Reina was da biggest suspense of dis ff n now wen u clearly unveiled , all da wait was worth . But her past n how maithli killed her love n child brought tears literally. Truly da greed of power made maithli blind n her greed brought her dis kind of death. She had loved abhendra n she was killed by his hands. A truly painful death. Finally da brothers embraced each other but m unable to accept raichand family with out chandeena . Reina was in hiding coz of maithli n now she vil b free . She cud b with Luke without any fear. Amazing end shreya , lots of kisses on ur hands for writing such a beautiful update. It was pleasure reding it. I don't know how r v going to survive without dis ff. I was too attached to dis 1 . Keep on writing , u r really great wrter. Thanks again




Aww Mahi thanks so much. I actually debated killing off Abhay or Alina, then settled on Chand and Haseena. I did feel bad myself I am so glad Reina was worth your wait. Her story is something I have been waiting to write for a long time now. I too was extremely attached to this one. I actually cried after writing the last chapter, that's what happens when you plan a story for years, lol. Thank you so much for sticking through all this while.🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

the last update with all the action sequence was a roller coaster ride shreya.


the most shocking thing for me was definitely disha as reina..coz i never really saw that coming though i always wondered about disha's character playing some important role in the ff but her being reina was totally unimaginable for me. so i must say u have indeed managed to kept up the suspense regarding reina till the last update and 3 books now that is incredible👏👏👏

Ah! Thank you so much Megha...this is the biggest achievement for me! Honestly. thank you😳I am glad I could surprise you😳


luke was in time to save misha and glad that atleast one family member of pia has survived. natalya has arrived on time to lend him a helping hand.

it really is ironical that both sid and abhay w/o caring for their lives went to save maithili 200 years ago and today they are going to kill her but she brought this upon herself. the entire fight scene was fabulously written and in detail as to how they fought with so many clones of her's and was indeed amazing to read. i could literally visualize that.


I was worried about that, I wondered if it was too much or too little😆 Good to know you liked it😳


maithili has turned too evil that she didn't even for once flinched while going on a killing spree. pia was determined and fought well for herself and abhay but sadly they lost chand & haseena and they couldn't even see them for one last time... that was really sad!

Yes.


reina had planned her own tale of revenge and she was the creator of this game where everyone else was just a pawn for her though i don't dislike her for that after all she was instrumental in doing many good things too and most importantly everyone wanted maithili dead. her entire planning and how abhay ruined it for a year must have been so frustrating but she was patient & smart enough to send pia in time to understand and study maithili more.

She has become a pain for all & also it was personal. As they say revenge is best served cold and this is exactly what reina has done to maithili...attacking her when she least expected and she deserved every bit of pain she got. she was a monster. she not only killed mikhail ...her lover but her unborn baby too😡 that was inhuman and even sid didn't knew anything about that. maithili was so blinded by her ego & ambition for power that she never realised that she is actually on her own path of destruction. loved the way reina and alina kept on hitting her through the trees and also that hellfire spell which must have given her the same amount of pain which she had caused to abhay earlier.


Thank you Megha. I guess it all makes sense now, doesn't it?😳


the final nail in the coffin was reina telling her piyali and pia are same and i am glad pia didn't forgive her afterall u can't trust her but i wonder if maithili really loved piyali that much that she would be feeling the pain of piyali killing her😕she had used everyone and killed everyone who got in her way . Pia rightly gave the stake to abhay as even i feel he deserves to kill her as he failed last time coz of some feelings but this time it was pure hatred for her.she never thought abhay could kill her.



Maithali is twisted. somewhere she wanted someone to adore her, to love her always and that moment she thought Piyali, her friend would never desert her and all. she never really expected Piya to kill her and she didn't expect Piya to ask Abhay to kill her either.

finally the nightmare maithili is over for them but at a great cost. abhay hugging sid was beautiful scene. finally they have crossed that bridge and are back to being brothers again. sid and pia too embraced their old friendship and sid- alina confessed too at such testing time. sometimes in death we realise the importance of our loved ones .

it was my fav ff of your's shreya and i am so gonna miss it. waiting for epilogue but kind of sad coz we won't have any more updates on this story .


great job on this one👏👏


Aww thanks so much Megha. It's going to be horribly difficult for me too, have so many memories with this one. Thank you so much for sticking with the story for so long. Your comments always make my day🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya-4ever

It was such a dhamaka dar update
Happy to c that Misha was safe Sid confess his feelings finally
Chandeena lost their life feeling bad for Abhay he was soo sad
PiYa n Maitheli convo was written very well
Finally Maitheli chp is over n Abhay n Sid hug to each other aww
Superb ending Dear Will miss this story keep writting Luv u ❤️


Thanks a lot Noor. So glad you liked😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rinkyrina01

hey i m almost (joined 2 months ago)new in if...i liked dis ff a lot... ur ff is fabulous ...i read till chap 47 in a week. i m getting curious of wat wud happn next..bt i m nt getting d odr parts :( ... can u plz tl me where i wud gt d odr parts... 😊


Hello. See the thing is...not many people were interested enough to comment , so I shifted the story to another site. Once it's done there, it will be posted in IF.
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Posted: 10 years ago
The last Chapter. Its really hard to believe it. I will really be missing the updates 😭

And WoW !!!, what an update.

Piya's parents are dead and now so are Abhay's parents. It was really sad to see Chand and Haseena dead and especially Chand, who was always practical and cool not wanting to fight anymore because he had lost Haseena. But its a war and there would be loss on both sides.

The final battle was really interesting. The concept of the clones was really interesting. Yes, after Sid, Maithili would not want to place her trust in any other ally and so she acquired and used her powers to create clones.

The highlight of the episode is Reina's story. I knew Reina had a story and she wanted Maithali destroyed. I also felt that Mikhail's death would have been the start and some how Mikhail and Reina were related. Maithili had ruined everything for Reina. She had wiped off all the reasons for her existence - Reina's love, her unborn child and any hope of a happy future.

That explains perfectly why Reina did not attempt to kill Maithili immediately or whenever she got a chance. Reina had gone through immense pain and agony and she wanted Maithili to suffer.

Reina could not go the same way as Maithili did, by killing the ones Maithili loved. She might have realized that Abhayendra was the one who Maithali wanted to possess and not Siddharth. Sid was just a Mohra of Maithali. Maithali killed Mikhail to get his powers mainly to impress Abhayendra. And what could be a greater punishment to Maithali than having Abhayendra hate her. And its not as if Abhayendra would hate her just like that. He would hate her for what she really became - A Real Heartless Monster.

Piya, coming into Abhay's life, had given rise to the hopes of Reina to make Maithili suffer. It was not like as if she used Piya for her purpose. Piya had infact wanted her world to be with Abhay. But Abhay never wanted that life for Piya. And ofcourse he had foiled Reina's plan of turning Piya into a vampire. Though this was done unknowingly, he would not have done it even if he knew everything. May be some how help Reina in getting her justice but would never have involved Piya. But Piya was crucial , to make Maithili feel the loss of love.

When Abhay foiled Reina's plan by turning Piya back into a human, she had to find another way. And there Abhay had wiped out Piya's memories and was frozen for an year. Abhay wanted to keep Piya out of this, but Piya was adamant to get her answers and so Reina had made her plans to involve her and that really helped, esp in Sid- Piyali's bonding.
It was not like Reina wanted to use Piya for her purpose. Piya also wanted to get involved though she was not aware of the real reason. For both Reina and Piya - Abhay was the connect. And here even Abhay could not keep Piya away. No wonder that Reina was annoyed with Abhay 😊

Reina's story and her involving Piya, is told very beautifully. This explains all and its perfectly justifiable. Its justice Reina sought and not just revenge. Maithali could have been killed long back, but she had to realize, to suffer.

Maithili had gone to the point of no return due to her obsession for powers and for Abhayendra. And she had to pay for it.

Now Reina had got her justice and I really wish she would lose her bitterness by allowing Luke into her life - atleast as a friend to start with. She now deserves peace more than anything in the world.

More than Arnab and Madhu, I really feel sad at the death of Chand and Haseena. It would be a very great loss for Abhay and also a loss of family for Sid when he was actually becoming a part of the family. But the comfort is that Abhay and Sid have each other and Piya has Misha (atleast for some years).

Alina and Sid have found each other and it is well for them. And Misha has Kabir.

Abhay and Piya would finally get to be with each other without any kind of tension or problem,
It cant be the same for them especially having lost their parents this way. But atleast they would have a peaceful existence, together.

Wish Luke would succeed in winning over the heart of Disha (Reina)


Almost all my questions are answered - much much more to my satisfaction and believe me, I really have the satisfaction of reading something to the end.

But as you know, I always have some questions left - here they are

Reina's involvement came as a surprise to Maithali, then why did Natalya fear for Luke. She had him indoors and only permitted him to be with Reina.

If Mikhail was Reina's love then he was Natalya's brother too. Natalya had equal reasons to have Maithili destroyed. But were Natalya and Reina on the same page for avenging the death of Mikhail or were they trying their own way?

So was it Reina - the lady in black, who gave the powers to Alina after she found her to be a survivor and a fighter? Reina might have transferred her powers to Alina, but how did they end up as soul sisters? I mean like how did it all start? Alina knew about Mikhail and also the story of Reina. How was it that Alina managed to win the trust of Reina that she could share her pain and agony with Alina?

I will end my questions with this.

Thank you so much for this FF, Shreya. Its like the void of the actual show getting filled. The satisfaction of getting to know a real story

But also feeling very very sad that its ended. Its really sad that good things have to come to an end.

But this FF is really a master piece 👏 Thank you once again for this. And all the very best for all your upcoming works.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Aww Mahi thanks so much. I actually debated killing off Abhay or Alina, then settled on Chand and Haseena. I did feel bad myself I am so glad Reina was worth your wait. Her story is something I have been waiting to write for a long time now. I too was extremely attached to this one. I actually cried after writing the last chapter, that's what happens when you plan a story for years, lol. Thank you so much for sticking through all this while.🤗


Oh God, Shreya, were you really thinking of killing off Abhay. How could you even think like that 😆 Wont we all trend day and night to #BringbackAbhay 😃. Please please dont ever think of separating Abhay and Piya and thank God it was not Alina either. Now I wont complain about killing of Chand and Haseena. Thank you so much for saving Abhay and ofcourse Alina too 😊

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Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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