FF-Time and Again[Book 3]COMPLETE!Epilogue now up.PM list page 74* - Page 81

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

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Sorry im late. really sorry but i wanted to read again before commenting and I finally did. well this is one of the best last chapter I have read in any book. I think last time i liked some last chapter so much was HP book 7. hats off to you.

Almost fainted when i read that.😲

Thank you😛bas I dont know what to say😆

now before anything.. damn Dishu is Reina 😲 thats something I never imagined. I always thought Alina is Reina but when Reina started talking about herself I realized Alina cant be Reina. and this is the best thing in all the writings you have done till now 👏

hahaha I am very happy that it was a surprise till the last chapter...coz I made it clear in the beginning itself that it wasn't Alina.😆I waited to write this for years.😳

The fight scenes were too good. Sadly all dobriyals except Misha are dead and so are haseena and Chand. I realized some will be dead so wasn't surprised much.

Well, yes. I also seriously considered killing off either, or both, Abhay and Alina.

Every action thing detailing was very good. and you made maithili really really evil. Cant imagine she stoop so low. be it killing without any remorse and what she did to Mikhail. everything. but everyone unitedly wanted her dead so finally it happened. and her shock on Piya and Piyali being same was too good. she really liked Piyali isn't it. perhaps her real friend or one of the few people she wanted to care about. so it came as a real shocker but finally she is dead.

I wanted to show what Maithali could have been if she had made some right choices. At that moment, she was broken completely and she wanted badly someone to love her. so yes she did like Piyali in that twisted heart of hers. but she knew or rather hoped that Piyali would never hurt her.

I was wondering who will kill her Abhay or Sid but you did justice to her death completely. and Abhay Sid hugging scene was beautiful. finally truce. they needed it.

Abhay was always going to kill Maithali. That's why I stressed on Piya being the one to kill her in the previous chapters, lol.😆

I like that scene. It came out of nowhere and it fit.😳

Im glad Luke helped Misha. and what more to say, i always liked this FF and I guess you know it. it's supernatural and mystery content I have always appreciated but ending and Reinas mystery - you have outdone yourself. keep writing. you will go a far way. and thanks for ending it so phenomenally. 🤗

Thanks a lot Tanzie. I guess Reina's mystery is my greatest achievement writingwise till date and also my most difficult writing😛Thanks so much for sticking with the story till the end😳🤗

Originally posted by: BLUEPARROTS

Great ending. U should write again.

Thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.

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so finally the story got a closure and a very good one. it was a great story to tell and one you wanna remember a long time. the plot and twists were really brilliant as i always told you. for me you are really remarkable to write such a story in such young age. so kudos to you 👏

Thank you. I'm honoured.😳

finally lots of unanswered question got answered by Reina. she wanted Piya to know what Alina did for her. yes they were not really best of friends but doesnt it make Piya a bit ungrateful?

Well...Piya was never supposed to be a paragon of virtue. She will have her little faults. like abhay does.

Piya wasnt really rude to Alina either but i guess their relationship was distant and now she will know what Alina did for her and everybody. I hope Luke will find Disha one day.

Some because of their differing natures but mostly because Piya resented Alina for interfering in her life. So yes now she will know and they will have a better relationship. maybe.

As for Luke, in my head he does find her.😆

Abhay and Alinas fight was cute and good to see Abhays positive changes. and offcourse Misha proposing Kabir, why im not surprised 😆

misha proposing kabir should have been expected 😛😆

thanks for the amazing story Shreya.. you have a long way to go 🤗

Thank you so much.😳

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Nice epilogue. Now it's sinking in my mind dat dis ff is over , omg I vil miss it a lot. U really had us glued to dis ff. amazing job shreya . Thanks for writing such a beautiful ff.

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing epilogue.

the best part was the letter that disha wrote for pia..she definitely must have pulled her hairs thinking about the same. she explained everything to her so well and i kind of expected her to keep distance from luke after all she has spent most part of her life in trying to avenge mikhail. so it wouldn't be easy for her to let in anyone and especially someone close to natalya.

Bang on Megha, absolutely correct. Hence her distance from Luke since the beginning.

it's hard to imagine misha blushing and her proposal to kabir wasn't surprising. she was always the opposite of others. misha , kabir , piya convo was fun..just like old times.

No it wasn't...I'm sure it would actually be expected😆

finally sid-alina & luke met abhay& pia after one whole year. happy to see pia as a fashion designer . loved luke snapping at abhay

Ah, yes. I like that bit myself😆

disha wanted pia to be friendly towards alina. it was a nice attempt from her side to tell everyone how alina never cared for her life too. their bonding was really good. no wonder they are soul sisters.

Which is how there was the whole mystery in Reina's identity😆

sid surprised not only disha but everyone. he was like a dark horse..nobody expected him to pull of such an act on maithili . abhay-alina spat was hilarious..they both have lot of similarities , the most common being controlling others but fortunately both their partners made sure to drove them nuts. they both acted well to trick sid and spoiled his fun..it would have been awsum to see sid -pia enjoying their fight.

Well they got a happy ending so guess sid and piya can catch up on their fights for years now😆

pia luke scene was good even though it was small. luv their friendship and also how luke shut abhay up.

abhay is finally happy and smiling and credit to that goes to pia for pushing his barriers and entering there.

it was a nice story to read shreya and finally it's over uff i would really miss it.

thank you so much megha🤗

lastly thanks for your kind words🤗

Aww. You deserve it😳

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

I cant believe this FF is over , i will miss it , this is one of the best FF i have read in IF nd u r truely a wonderfull writter Shreya .👏

That is such a great compliment, thank you Hema for liking it so much😳

i didnt comment on last chapter ( i m so soory for that😔 ) so i m commenting for both chapters here .

i loved last chapter ... full of action ...

i m happy that Luke saved Misha on time but Chandeena

oh Disha was Reina ... i didnt suspect that ... maithli was so evil...

she destroyed Reina completly ... bt finally she met her end ..she deserved it...

Yes chandeena had to go Glad I could surprise you with Reina!😃

Yeah Maithali deserved what she got.

Pia -maithli convo was nice . for once i thought may she cared for Piyali .. bt no maithli loved only herself ...

She did care for Piyali...but her feelings were twisted. More than caring for her, she wanted Piyali to care for her. she was too obsessed with herself.

i love abhay-sid hugging scene ...

Epilogue was nice

Pia-Misha convo was too cute ... i cant believe misha proposed kabir 😃

every thing was gud in everybody life in end ... sid have alina and abhay and pia are togather ... nd sid and piyali are frnds again 😃

Well, yeah. happy ending😛

hope Luke find Disha ...

Disha's letter part was gud ... she explained her story and reasons to pia...

i will miss this FF..

I hope so too😳

I'll miss it too. 😭