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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#771

So...sorry for the wait. The last chapter's been uploaded. An epilogue will also be up shortly.

PMs will be sent soon.

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pink_rose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#772

It was one Dhamekedaar update. A fitting end to a wonderful story. The last fight between Maithali and Abhiya and their friends were mindblowing.

Feeling sad that it has come to an end. Looking forward to the Epilogue. Hopefully you will also include what happens to Luke and Dishu (Reina)

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cuteariya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#773

very emotional & dhamakedar update
poor misha almost lost her life
from where luke came to save misha 😕 😕
anyway he saved her life & took her & kabir at him home 👍🏼 👍🏼
kabir was shocked to see misha's condition
Natalya help luke 🤗 🤗
so abhiya sid chand haseena & alina going to fight with maithali 👍🏼 👍🏼
poor pia thinking abt her parent's death 😭 😭
oh god so many witches from maithali side
wow sid confess his feeling to alina before going for battle❤️ ❤️
fight scene was really dangerous
oh no chand & haseena lost their life in bettle 💔 💔
poor abhay was shattered seeing his parent's death 🥺 🥺
that bitch maithali having fun for killing everyone disgusting😡 😡
finally they killed all most from maithali's side 👏 👏
so reina helped abhiya 👍🏼 👍🏼
when she came from shadow pia was shocked maithali was more shocked
OMG maithali killed Mikhail just for power 😡 😡
he is none another then reina's husband 😲 😲
maithali just didn't killed Mikhail also killed reina's unborn child so disgusting 😡 😡
bcoz of her reina lost everything & suffer a lot 🥺 🥺
sid & pia was so shocked & felt disgust 😲 😲
reina torture with hell fire but she deserve more then that 👏 👏
maithali pleading for forgiveness 😒 😒
reina told maithali that pia is none another then her friend piyali
she got shocked & asked forgiveness & told her she will make it up for everything
pia remember everything whatever maithali did it
she wasn't ready for forgive her 👏 👏
so pia let abhay to kill maithali 👍🏼 👍🏼
uff maithali still thought that abhay wont kill her 🤪 🤪
finally maithali's chapter got finish from their life 🥳 🥳
wow sid came to hug abhay bravo 🤗 🤗
OMG the most shocking revelation reina is none another then dishu 😲 😲
is there any hope for luke & dishu 😕 😕
got to know that this was the last part feeling bad 🥺 🥺

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#774

PMs have been sent. IF your name is on the list and you haven't received a PM, please contact me. :)

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#775

Originally posted by: pink_rose
It was one Dhamekedaar update. A fitting end to a wonderful story. The last fight between Maithali and Abhiya and their friends were mindblowing.

Feeling sad that it has come to an end. Looking forward to the Epilogue. Hopefully you will also include what happens to Luke and Dishu (Reina)

Thanks for the comments :)

Luke and Dishu will be there in the epilogue, so you'll get an idea what happens to them :)

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#776

Originally posted by: cuteariya
very emotional & dhamakedar update
poor misha almost lost her life
from where luke came to save misha 😕 😕
anyway he saved her life & took her & kabir at him home 👍🏼 👍🏼
kabir was shocked to see misha's condition
Natalya help luke 🤗 🤗
so abhiya sid chand haseena & alina going to fight with maithali 👍🏼 👍🏼
poor pia thinking abt her parent's death 😭 😭
oh god so many witches from maithali side
wow sid confess his feeling to alina before going for battle❤️ ❤️
fight scene was really dangerous
oh no chand & haseena lost their life in bettle 💔 💔
poor abhay was shattered seeing his parent's death 🥺 🥺
that bitch maithali having fun for killing everyone disgusting😡 😡
finally they killed all most from maithali's side 👏 👏
so reina helped abhiya 👍🏼 👍🏼
when she came from shadow pia was shocked maithali was more shocked
OMG maithali killed Mikhail just for power 😡 😡
he is none another then reina's husband 😲 😲
maithali just didn't killed Mikhail also killed reina's unborn child so disgusting 😡 😡
bcoz of her reina lost everything & suffer a lot 🥺 🥺
sid & pia was so shocked & felt disgust 😲 😲
reina torture with hell fire but she deserve more then that 👏 👏
maithali pleading for forgiveness 😒 😒
reina told maithali that pia is none another then her friend piyali
she got shocked & asked forgiveness & told her she will make it up for everything
pia remember everything whatever maithali did it
she wasn't ready for forgive her 👏 👏
so pia let abhay to kill maithali 👍🏼 👍🏼
uff maithali still thought that abhay wont kill her 🤪 🤪
finally maithali's chapter got finish from their life 🥳 🥳
wow sid came to hug abhay bravo 🤗 🤗
OMG the most shocking revelation reina is none another then dishu 😲 😲
is there any hope for luke & dishu 😕 😕
got to know that this was the last part feeling bad 🥺 🥺

Awww. thanks so much for the comments dear. As for Luke and Dishu...well, we'll see.😳

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#777

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Sorry im late. really sorry but i wanted to read again before commenting and I finally did. well this is one of the best last chapter I have read in any book. I think last time i liked some last chapter so much was HP book 7. hats off to you.

now before anything.. damn Dishu is Reina 😲 thats something I never imagined. I always thought Alina is Reina but when Reina started talking about herself I realized Alina cant be Reina. and this is the best thing in all the writings you have done till now 👏

The fight scenes were too good. Sadly all dobriyals except Misha are dead and so are haseena and Chand. I realized some will be dead so wasn't surprised much. Every action thing detailing was very good. and you made maithili really really evil. Cant imagine she stoop so low. be it killing without any remorse and what she did to Mikhail. everything. but everyone unitedly wanted her dead so finally it happened. and her shock on Piya and Piyali being same was too good. she really liked Piyali isn't it. perhaps her real friend or one of the few people she wanted to care about. so it came as a real shocker but finally she is dead. I was wondering who will kill her Abhay or Sid but you did justice to her death completely. and Abhay Sid hugging scene was beautiful. finally truce. they needed it. Im glad Luke helped Misha. and what more to say, i always liked this FF and I guess you know it. it's supernatural and mystery content I have always appreciated but ending and Reinas mystery - you have outdone yourself. keep writing. you will go a far way. and thanks for ending it so phenomenally. 🤗

Edited by .SmokeySilence. - 10 years ago

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rida mahveen

@mahi4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#778

Fantabulous end shreya 👏 Not having enough words to express myself. Everything abt dis makes readers awe struck . It was a relief to c misha alive. Sid's confession of love to Alina on field ryt in front of maithli was worth . Felt really bad for chand haseena death , I thought at least abhay parents wud b alive but every victory has its own price . Both abhay pia paid with der parents sacrifice. Reina was da biggest suspense of dis ff n now wen u clearly unveiled , all da wait was worth . But her past n how maithli killed her love n child brought tears literally. Truly da greed of power made maithli blind n her greed brought her dis kind of death. She had loved abhendra n she was killed by his hands. A truly painful death. Finally da brothers embraced each other but m unable to accept raichand family with out chandeena . Reina was in hiding coz of maithli n now she vil b free . She cud b with Luke without any fear. Amazing end shreya , lots of kisses on ur hands for writing such a beautiful update. It was pleasure reding it. I don't know how r v going to survive without dis ff. I was too attached to dis 1 . Keep on writing , u r really great wrter. Thanks again

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kittu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#779

Fabulous ending I am gonna miss your story thanks for the pm...u r a great writer . waiting for epilogue.

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#780

the last update with all the action sequence was a roller coaster ride shreya.

the most shocking thing for me was definitely disha as reina..coz i never really saw that coming though i always wondered about disha's character playing some important role in the ff but her being reina was totally unimaginable for me. so i must say u have indeed managed to kept up the suspense regarding reina till the last update and 3 books now that is incredible👏👏👏

luke was in time to save misha and glad that atleast one family member of pia has survived. natalya has arrived on time to lend him a helping hand.

it really is ironical that both sid and abhay w/o caring for their lives went to save maithili 200 years ago and today they are going to kill her but she brought this upon herself. the entire fight scene was fabulously written and in detail as to how they fought with so many clones of her's and was indeed amazing to read. i could literally visualize that.

maithili has turned too evil that she didn't even for once flinched while going on a killing spree. pia was determined and fought well for herself and abhay but sadly they lost chand & haseena and they couldn't even see them for one last time... that was really sad!

reina had planned her own tale of revenge and she was the creator of this game where everyone else was just a pawn for her though i don't dislike her for that after all she was instrumental in doing many good things too and most importantly everyone wanted maithili dead. her entire planning and how abhay ruined it for a year must have been so frustrating but she was patient & smart enough to send pia in time to understand and study maithili more.

She has become a pain for all & also it was personal. As they say revenge is best served cold and this is exactly what reina has done to maithili...attacking her when she least expected and she deserved every bit of pain she got. she was a monster. she not only killed mikhail ...her lover but her unborn baby too😡 that was inhuman and even sid didn't knew anything about that. maithili was so blinded by her ego & ambition for power that she never realised that she is actually on her own path of destruction. loved the way reina and alina kept on hitting her through the trees and also that hellfire spell which must have given her the same amount of pain which she had caused to abhay earlier.

the final nail in the coffin was reina telling her piyali and pia are same and i am glad pia didn't forgive her afterall u can't trust her but i wonder if maithili really loved piyali that much that she would be feeling the pain of piyali killing her😕she had used everyone and killed everyone who got in her way . Pia rightly gave the stake to abhay as even i feel he deserves to kill her as he failed last time coz of some feelings but this time it was pure hatred for her.she never thought abhay could kill her.

finally the nightmare maithili is over for them but at a great cost. abhay hugging sid was beautiful scene. finally they have crossed that bridge and are back to being brothers again. sid and pia too embraced their old friendship and sid- alina confessed too at such testing time. sometimes in death we realise the importance of our loved ones .

it was my fav ff of your's shreya and i am so gonna miss it. waiting for epilogue but kind of sad coz we won't have any more updates on this story .

great job on this one👏👏

Edited by MS-meghasharma - 10 years ago