Abhiya OS--'Heart of Darkness 'updtd-MAR27 PG-15 , Note on Page 20--

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Thanks a lot for a OS again Indu. its always, always a pleasure to read your stuff. 😃 I already liked it kind of. it seems different and the concept is different from your other works. though you are completely versatile and always comes up with different things its even different from show too. im already too eager to read next part. curious to know why exactly thn Abhay married Pia if he hates her this much and don wish to even see her. felt bad for pia. update soonish. eagerly waiting.

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sain (nick name)

@abhaylovepia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

omg its looking great i am so much excited
very well written plz updater regularly and so so so early🤗

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sukuvivu

@sukuvivu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

its amazing...wud love to read all parts soon.. y abhay is like that n y pias condition like tht..i dnt want her alone.when abhiya getting togethr...waiting/..

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

amazing os indu👏 Looks like both abhay and pia are in pain...

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

nice start
seems interesting...wondering what could be wrong with abhay...is he human here?
both if them are in pain...one can understand pia's problem but whats with abhay?

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

well written update ... like the concept
felt bad for piya she must be married to abhay ... liked the way you narrate the inner turmoil of piya how she get in this life ... abhay seems a rude person
will wait for to cont ...