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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: ifians
unres...
hmmm... a really very different genre of story... liked it...😊
there was a mysterious environment throughout the whole first chapter... be it the first appearance of pia... the huge manor in which she is so alone and almost prison... the man with blue eyes who despise beautiful stuffs everything has a touch of unknown mystery which hooks me to it...
pia's past story, her feeling about her father was so amazing part... i liked the part most in the story..
the huge manor, the unknown husband suddenly remembered me about my fav fairy tale beauty and the beast...before some years i saw a russian movie <font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">'panna a netvor'</font>... based on beauty and beast.. this os reminds me about that movie...
and lastly thx for another wonderfull story di...
take care..
ria😊

thanks so much for the praise Ria.😳
am glad u liked that part.😊
well all i can say right nw is-this story has no similarity wth beauty n the beast. I know the surrounding might seem similar bt other than that it will have nothng in common!
I just hope the concept i have in mind doesnt seem too idiotic or vain. I hope it dosnt dissapoint you. bt thanks again for such a lovely comment. They make my day!🤗u too take care..

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..
thanks for this OS indu and will wait for the other updates too.

welcome Dishu!
Ya..Will update soon!😊

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: devilish-grin
quite a gripping story
so pia is married to abhay but she hadn't seen him...
abhay has all the self loathing stuff n thinks that beautiful things r all evil n bad...hmmm
lets see how they fall in love😳

self loathing?..umm..well am nt so sure abt that! U will knw things soon!
Abhay is different here. He has a lot going in his head!-thats all i cn say for nw.
n glad u liked it. thanks a lot for commenting dear.😳

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86
awesome , feeling sad for pia , the man who married with her ( pia ) still she not married becuz he never give love to pia n man is none other than abhay , waiting for nxt update , thanks or pm n continue soon

yes u are right dear. Pia is in troubled state. Am glad u could feel her helplessness.
Welcome! Will update this week.😊 n thanks a lot for reading.😳

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: barki
Awesome story. PM me pls.

Thanks dear. Will soon update. Sure..Will pm u!😊 thanks for reading.😳

Originally posted by: karamjeet
Awesome OS dear...i also apply u soon in ur other OS nd ff's too dear at now own i'm little busy with my exams...nd Thanksss 4 PM 4 all links of ur work...

thanks very much.😳its ok. Study comes first.read whenever u can.😊
you'r welcome! n best of luck! :)

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya
Awsm os. Next part jaldi update krna. Thax fr pm.

thanks for liking.😳u'r most welcome! Will update this week. 😊

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal
Waiting for Like ur writing skill forever Dear🤗

thanks a ton dear...🤗

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: abhaylovepia
omg its looking great i am so much excited
very well written plz updater regularly and so so so early🤗

I will try to update soon dear n complete it as soon as i can. :)
n thanks a lot for the appreciation.means a lot.🤗

Originally posted by: sukuvivu
its amazing...wud love to read all parts soon.. y abhay is like that n y pias condition like tht..i dnt want her alone.when abhiya getting togethr...waiting/..

thanks dear. I hope u will like the story further as well.😳
dear,let them meet first..😆 for nw i cnt disclose more..😉

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
interesting concept.

liked the start.

felt bad for pia not only she lost her father but also sacrificed her dreams for her family only to get more and more pain..wonder why abhay wouldn't even talk to her or see her??it seems something has happened in his past that made him like this but still it's not an excuse to treat someone this way.

waiting to read more

thanks for reading n appreciating megha.😳
well..yes abhay does have a reason. Bt like u said it's no excuse to hurt someone n you'r completely right!
And In next chapter we shall see what past does he actually bears to behave this way.!

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
My god Indu, why is this not an FF :(

beautifully done. I love love love this masterpiece and PLEASE update soon!!!!

nope.definitely no more FF right nw. :P
This story doesnt have that long concept to make it an ff! Besides its very tough to manage so many stories so cant bring more ff's until i finish the one's i already have.😊
will update very soon. n thank you. 😳 well..i dnt knw what is it...😆 bt i do hope it turns out nt as anything vague..at the end..! 😛

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harinisriram39

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

[I][/I]Oh Indu, Thanks a lot for another OS. The starting is very interesting. So is Pia a young girl married to a 34 year old man as a conditional marriage? The marriage proposal was initiated by the grooms parents right? So they dont stay in the same house? This reminds me very much of Beauty and the Beast, the difference being that the Beast actually wanted the girl in the tale but here this doesnt seem to be the case from the first chapter. Eagerly waiting for your next update.

And thanks for the link of your other works. This way I wont miss your works :-)

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