Abhiya OS--'Heart of Darkness 'updtd-MAR27 PG-15 , Note on Page 20--

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captainplus

@captainplus

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

interesting concept 😛

egar 2 kno y abhay hates beautiful tings 😡

continue soon ...

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

unres...

hmmm... a really very different genre of story... liked it...😊

there was a mysterious environment throughout the whole first chapter... be it the first appearance of pia... the huge manor in which she is so alone and almost prison... the man with blue eyes who despise beautiful stuffs everything has a touch of unknown mystery which hooks me to it...

pia's past story, her feeling about her father was so amazing part... i liked the part most in the story..

the huge manor, the unknown husband suddenly remembered me about my fav fairy tale beauty and the beast...before some years i saw a russian movie 'panna a netvor'... based on beauty and beast.. this os reminds me about that movie...

and lastly thx for another wonderfull story di...

take care..

ria😊

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

thanks for this OS indu and will wait for the other updates too.

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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

quite a gripping story
so pia is married to abhay but she hadn't seen him...
abhay has all the self loathing stuff n thinks that beautiful things r all evil n bad...hmmm
lets see how they fall in love😳

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Sh_Abhiya

@Sh_Abhiya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awesome , feeling sad for pia , the man who married with her ( pia ) still she not married becuz he never give love to pia n man is none other than abhay , waiting for nxt update , thanks or pm n continue soon

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

interesting concept.

liked the start.

felt bad for pia not only she lost her father but also sacrificed her dreams for her family only to get more and more pain..wonder why abhay wouldn't even talk to her or see her??it seems something has happened in his past that made him like this but still it's not an excuse to treat someone this way.

waiting to read more

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Awesome OS dear...i also apply u soon in ur other OS nd ff's too dear at now own i'm little busy with my exams...nd Thanksss 4 PM 4 all links of ur work...