Abhiya OS--'Heart of Darkness 'updtd-MAR27 PG-15 , Note on Page 20-- - Page 5

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

amazing os indu👏 Looks like both abhay and pia are in pain...

Thanks a lot juhi. 😳
Well yes both are unhappy bt their reaction to the situation in this story is different. You will know what i mean-in the coming updates.😊

Originally posted by: anjali0111

nice start
seems interesting...wondering what could be wrong with abhay...is he human here?
both if them are in pain...one can understand pia's problem but whats with abhay?

thanks a lot for reading anji.😊
yes! Of course Abhay is human here! I think u missed the part where i have mentioned his age dear.😊 you will know Abhay's story soon. -but can that justify his rude behaviour?...we shall see..

Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

really lovely...

thanks for reading dear. 😊

Originally posted by: bellaaa

well written update ... like the concept
felt bad for piya she must be married to abhay ... liked the way you narrate the inner turmoil of piya how she get in this life ... abhay seems a rude person
will wait for to cont ...

exactly beenish, abhay is indeed an arrogant man. Pia is in the most terrible phase of her life where there is almost no hope. though still she is trying to see the brighter side.
will update this week n thanks so much for liking it.😳

Originally posted by: meerubzara

beautiful
continu soon
eagerly w8ng to read more

glad u liked it meera.will update very soon!😳

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#660066">Thanks a lot for a OS again Indu. its always, always a pleasure to read your stuff. 😃 I already liked it kind of. it seems different and the concept is different from your other works. though you are completely versatile and always comes up with different things its even different from show too. im already too eager to read next part. curious to know why exactly thn Abhay married Pia if he hates her this much and don wish to even see her. felt bad for pia. update soonish. eagerly waiting.</font>

thank you so much for the kind words tanzie. 😳 And its always..always a pleasure to read your comments!😳
yes..on that i can assure you-it is indeed diffrnt! 😊 At least i'm trying to make it..😆 lets see...
Pia's situation-to say better-is truly traumatic! She certainly dsnt deserve this.😔
however u will soon knw why abhay is behaving so...
Show u mean B&B? Oh..no definitely nt. The thing i have in mind has no similarity wth either the fairy tale or the tele show one. Bt ya It is something i just hope i can do justice to! 😕
sorry i'm late bt am trying to update as soon as i can. n thanks again for taking out time to read n comment tanzie.means a lot.🤗

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

[I][/I]Oh Indu, Thanks a lot for another OS. The starting is very interesting. So is Pia a young girl married to a 34 year old man as a conditional marriage? The marriage proposal was initiated by the grooms parents right? So they dont stay in the same house? This reminds me very much of Beauty and the Beast, the difference being that the Beast actually wanted the girl in the tale but here this doesnt seem to be the case from the first chapter. Eagerly waiting for your next update.

And thanks for the link of your other works. This way I wont miss your works :-)

thank you so much for the comment harini.😳 glad u liked it.😊
yes dear all ur guesses are mostly right!😆 😉
I knew dear, the moment readers read it, it will remind them of B&B 😉 bt no this story has nothing in common wth it. It will be completely different. You will knw as the story progresses.😊

It will be great to have ur comments in the other works as well.😳 thanks again for reading.😳 Update will be up soon. :)

comment updated on pg-1 😛

Originally posted by: withered

Another briliant OS 😆 , Pia is married to Abhay a marriage to which she agreed just to support her family and to make her Brother's future bright . Now after all these days seems like she is finally gonn meet her husband 😊 , how hard she had tried to not let the painful void inside her occupy her mind .
Eagerly , excitedly waiting fr the next update 😃

yes pia is suffering for the sacrifice she had made for her family. Well said dear-she is trying her best to conquer the sadness. Lets see how far she can survive. And thanks very much for the lovely comment.will update this week.😳 n dear if u dnt mind may i know ur name please..? :)

so so sorry for unresing this late
coming to the second. part
well it do cleared some of mine misunderstanding - So, here has to struggle for not losing her dignity in the ahnds of these horrible inhumans and the man who grabbed her hand wasnt abhay but his cousin . Nice developments and then there is her mother-in-law , is their anything special happened for which she is behaving so nicely an sweetly to her ?
love abhay and adonis track . but what is with this abhay , if he doesnt had to do anything with pia then why the heck he even married her ?😡
and from the convo of pia and her mother-in-law i suppose pia never roam aroung the house as for she didnt even aknowledged the presence of the huge library in their house . she has bounded herself to only some parts of the house and her lifeless room .
pia likes reading , great 😆 she shuld drown herself in reading to cover up for her loneliness . waiting for the story to proceed 😃

Well I am in office but still couldn help reading the update n commenting too 😉 Wanted to read this long time ago but my goal these past few days had been to finish my crappy update first no matter how long it took n hence the delay Am sorry

nice update ⭐️⭐️⭐️