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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Nice update !👏
Aww...feel bad for abhiya !😭
Thanks for pm .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
nice update
omg pia is dead
now what will happen?
will jay save pia?
continu asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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jey is not evil here...he loves pia...and he respects her...abhay will learn a lesson...in future he will not dare to hurt pia like thst :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Super-Awsome Update yar!Loved it very much!❤️
Abhay is really crazy.But I love his craziness and love him this way more.😆
Waiting for the next part..Pls Update Asap...
And Hey Why didnt you pm me..?Pls Add me to your buddy list and always pm me whenever you update. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry janvie!! i frgot to pm...will surely pm u nxt tims
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg last update is really a interesting one... abhay is such a crazy one but how will jeh save pia... precap sounds interesting too... omg abhay try to harm himself...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 5- Mailon- pia's creator...father and the allmighty power and god of supernaturals!! Mailonicia- pia...its her supernatural name or identity!! Jason- Jay..Abyssiac- Abhay.. Abhay ran away from there...he was unable to take the pain anymore...he was gone in darkness... J- piya!! piya whay did u do this!! now what will I say to Ur Highness!! only he can bring u back piya!! Jay did some rituals to call great Highness and Pia's creator..his Father Lord Mailon.. after sumtimes the area was filled with a heavenly energy.. a powerfull aura was slowly becoming visible...time stood still there...only jay was in sense...cause he was the one who was doing the rituals...The aura was visible now...he was there...the lord...the god of supernaturals... J- I soul Mailon!! jay bow down in front of his God!! J- please punish me ur highness!! i dnt deserve to be in ur service my lord!! I failed to protect Mailonicia. my lord!! punish me!! but pls save her!! i m ready to give my life for her...take mine!! pls save her!! lord- My soul!! clam down!! dnt forget she is a part of me!! this was her destiny!! she will come back!! but a great sacrifise is needed for that... J- I m ready for anything my lord.. Lord- Mailonicia will be back!! just go through the korijak rituals.. J- pardon me..my lord..but how my lord!! I cant!! Mailonicia will be hurt because of this my lord..i cant destroy her faith upon me and she dont know anything my lord!!... Lord- its all destiny my soul!! none can fix it...she will be fine...time and faith will keep her safe..but for that u have to do that dark ritual Jason!! and you will need help of the vampire Abyssiac... J- BUT MY LORD That leech vampire is the main reason of Mailonicia's death.. Lord- My soul!! dont forget the prophecy cant be changed. Go now... gather all the wolfs and vampires and witches..u will need all the supernaturals power for this..I will appear in perfect time with all the god and godessess!!after this big ritual Mailonicia will be back in her proper godess self...you may soul mailon!! the lord vanishes...Jay broke in tears!! pia plss forgive me...i have to do this...will uforgive me pia!! i have to do this ritual pia!! i m sorry pia..i m bound to ur highness..jay called all of his wolf pack and order them to gather all the supernaturals tomorrow...Tomorrow is the biggest day in this universe...the most powerful ritual will happen... somewhere in the dark forest...abhay was with the vampire supiriors...he was trying to kill himself with a stake!! supiriors- stop it Abyssiac!! u cnt kill urslf...u knw that... A- then pls kill me...i cnt live this tormentful life..pls kill me.. Supiriors- Abyssiac u have to undo the sin u have done...The lord ordered us to join the korijak ritual for her child. She is the most powerfull soul Abyssiac!! u have to live and only she can punish u!! we all r mere vampires!! U r nothing!! how can u love ur would be goddess..its the unforgivable sin..only she will punish u!!.. A- i was unknown about it...she dont know it either what she is...she wont punish me...cause she loves me...and i dnt feel guilty about loving her!! i dont deserve her!! i know she wont punish me...i m begging for my death..pls kill me!!... Supiriors- shut up Abyssiac!! did u forget she is Mailonicia!! she is ur goddess...how can u think of loving her... A- pls kill me...my evry sin..this love..evrything will be finish...then u all will be free frm the fear of God Mailon's punishment..supiriors- u have to join us...for the ritual...we need ur powers too..Jason..that werewolf will guide you...now go...its the only thing we can do to undo the sin...go now!.. Jay was waiting for abhay!!.. J- here u r mr bloody mouth!! let me tell u what we all r facing bcs of ur sin... A- jst skip the dramaa...and tell me Jay!! what is this ritual and why do u need me?... J- bcs of ur grt creation pia is dead!! and we have to do the most powerfull dark magic ritual to get her back!! FOR that we need ur blood and powers...cause u r the so called Abyson's blood!!.. J- stay in ur limits!! dont drag my family in this..they r dead..i will do whatever u wnt for this ritual...only for her life.. J- listen carefully!! this ritual is very risky!! i m the holder of her soul..so i will have to gather evryones power and then after the ritual i will transfer all the energy and power in her body in the form of a new soul a new life...A- u mean this is the Korijak ritual!! no way... i wont let u do this with her!! she will hate evryone...she wont be able to bear the pain...u dog...i knew it...u wnt to make her urs...thats why u want to make her ur child's mother!! no i wont join this ritual...nvr... J- shut up monster!! do u think i m a b...d like u!! its only for her life...we dont have any other way!! its our destiny!! i dnt want to do this...i know she will hate me...but without this ritual and this new life she wont come bck!! u love her naa!!so u have to do this ...abhay was speechless!! what else in his destiny!! what more he have to bear!! sumone elses child in pia's womb!! no...he cnt handle it... A- ok !! i will come!! now get lost..Abhay in his mind! i cnt handle this!! pia cnt hv that dog's child!! no..she wont be able to take the pain...i know i did hurt her...this is too much for her..oh god what have i done!! its all bcs of me!! why!! why!!... p.s- jay will perform the ritual...he is main holder of pia's soul..so the child will be a wolf...this is abhay's punishment he will have to love pia with jay's child only for pia's sake..this will change Abhay!! he wil learn how to trust and respect sumone!!... PRECAP- the biggest ritual...but something is wrong...Alina the Witch queen is upto something evil...will pia survive?pls comment and hit like
Edited by samanthawllms7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Awsome Update!
Jeh is doing all this to save piya...I hope piya will forgive him later...
Abhay have to accept Jeh's child,Now he wont ever dare to doubt or insult pia like that.Hope everything gets fine soon.
Pia is supernaturals queen...Thats interesting...Alina is upto something evil...lets see what happens next...
Hey,Is Jeh going to be left alone and lonely here..Pls bring someone for him...And where is Misha and Kabir...Are they not going to be in your story...?
Edited by janvie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
what the hell 😡 ..piya would be mother of jeh's baby..grrr..no way.. 😵 ...pls dont let it happen.. ...i cant see abhay in so much pain 😭 ..pls pls pls... 😒
Edited by ririrararaatry - 12 years ago

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