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Posted: 12 years ago
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part-3



Morning time..


piya was in deep sleep...dreaming about abhay...
her face was bright and happy...she was smiling in her sleep...

suddenly her cell rangs...

P- ha- hallo..who is it!!

it was jay

J- hey Angel!! whats up!! its me ur one and only Handsome hunk!!

Piya jumps from the bed in excitement

P- J its u?..how r u? where r u? why did nt u call me? when will u come to meet u?

J- relax relax madam! i cnt ansr ur 100 questions at a time...uff u r still the same angel...missed u so much

P- r u in dehradun? u didnt contact me for 2 years!! ur number was out of reach...what is all this haa?

J- sorry angel..really sorry...i m coming..my flight just landed...i will stay here for a long time..i m sorry that i didnt contact u...i hv my reasons angel..wait for me...i m coming to meet you in ur hostel.

Piya was shocked...What will abhay think...how will i handle him...and jay how will he react...i didnt tell him thati m in love with abhay...


P- wait j...i m not in hostle...come to meet me at youth corner cafe...

J- AS U WISH madam

Piya was thinking what will she tell abhay

she called abhay

P- hi abhay!! listen.. i hv an urgent meeting...pls meet me after cllg...

A- what?? which meeting love!! i was coming to pick u for cllg...is there any guy in that meeting...where..i will go with u..

p- shut up abhay...dont start again... i m not a kid...stop disturbing ur mind with insecurities dear!! i will meet u after cllg..trust me i will tell u evrything after cllg,,ok!!

A- but pia.. I..

P- abhay..just go sweet heart...ok just for u i promise that i will not talk to any stranger and u dnt hv to b jelous!! i am only urs...now go...luv u bye

A- ok love...just for u..i m going..bye..

p- aaj main apne life ke do special insaan ko ek dusre se milwaungi!! god hlp me!!



in cafe


Jay saw piya and he hugs her

J- oh angel!! missed u so much!! look at u!! are u the same girl... icnt blv my eyes...u r more beautifull now...wow!!

P- jay stop flirting..its not gonna work...save it for others girls mister...i m sure this city will be ur entertainer...where were u J...no calls...i missed u too J...but i think u were very busy with ur girlfriends...thats why you forgot ur best friend!!

J- no no no..angel...its not true...how can i forget u!! sorry yaar...pls maaf kardo...i will tell u evrything angel...pls calm down...

P- only in one condition!!

J- Anything sweety!!

P- I will tell u smthing important..but promise me you will support me and be happy...

J- okay...but angel...what do u wanna tell...its sounds a little creepy...

P- i will tell u...but first ur turn...tell me ur story first...

J- okay madam...angel do u remember u used to tell me about love...but i was like naah...love dsnt exist...remember...

P- yeah J...but why r u saying this now!!...wait wait dnt tell me...r u..r u in love jay!!

J- hmm..dekhaa!! u know me very well...

P- who is the unlucky girl j!!

J- shut up!! she is the most lucky one...after all she is the love of my life...none other than Jay khurana...he smirks...
now tell me ur story angel...

P- its the same story...jst like urs...

J- what?? u too!! who is he? do i know him?

P- relax jay!! why r u looking angry?

J- its obvious piya!! u hide it till now... i want to know who is he? how could you u pia...u were dating...that too without let me know about the guy...u did nt think for once...what will i think!!

P- i was nt dating j..and about my heart jay...i dnt know how to stop it from loving someone...i will introduce u to him..okay!!
now tell me who is girl...

Jay was very hurt and angry...his heart was broken...he cant show this to pia...he cant say that its pia whom he loves...:((

P- what happened!!

J- nothing...i did nt tell u the full story...the girl dont love me pia...she is with sumone else...i cnt brk her happiness...this was my first and last love...
thats why i used to tell u that love is all rubbishh...

P- oh my god...i m so sorry jay...dnt be sad...its ok..i undrstnd...the girl is truly unlucky..she dnt hv u...

J- she will hv me forever...i dnt expect her love...i will love her allways..

they hug and piya consoles him...

after sometimes they broke the silence...

J- lets go!! i want to meet ur mr. lover..

P-okay lets go!!!


Abhay was waiting for her love outside cllg...then he saw her coming with J...he was furious...

A- piya...this was ur meeting...who is he? any of ur secret lover?

P- shut up abhay!! calm dwn ok!! i m not in a mood to fight now...

J- angel...what a choice of urs...kyaa duniya me aur koi nahi mila tumhe!!

P- shut up u both ok!..i m not a kid..i know what should i do...first of all dont be over pretective...i cnt handle too overposessive angry head man..chill..

P- abhay...this is J..my one and only child hood best friend and J he is abhay my one and only lover...
now u both shake hands...and dnt fight like kidss...

A- ok love...i will try not to eat him up...jst for u..

J- yeah!! i will also try not to burn him in ashes...

P- ufff...enough of u too...whats wrong with u too!! cant u both be happy for me...look u two r very special for me...I love abhay.. he is my soulmate
and love u jay...u r my only family since child hood..and my bestest friend...pls yaar undrstnd i m pissed off with this fights!!

A & J- sorry pia!!

P- look u both are my only support...pls smile and be friendly for me okk!!

J- accha angel...i hv to go now...i hv sum imprtnt things to sort out...will meet u later..ok..bye

P- u ok naa J..dnt be sad yaar!! evry thing will be fine...

J- yeah!!

A- love will excuse me for sumtime... i hv a call to attened..

P- ok...i m going to meet Rocker!! will meet u in 10 mins...

A- ok..

abhay stops jay

J- what??

A- dont u dare to love pia!! she is mine...only i can love her!!

J- listen..mr whatever dnt try to teach me...pia is with me since childhood..u r the second one of her life

A- u...i will sue u...I m silent cause of pia!!


J- what will u do haa!! u vampy what will u do!!

A- look woolf!! stay away frm her...she knows evrything about me...but what about u haan!! she dont know that u r a dog..

J- Look..blood suckerr...dont worry about it...she will forgive me...do u know why?? cause i m her first love!! so u know naa first love is allways special!! now get lost...


abhay was shattered...piya hide it from him..he was not the first guy of her life...he screams and run from their to the jungle...he kills 6 animals in rage...he broke evrything in jungle..


PRACAP- Abhay is lost...Pia is dead...jay was shattered..

What will happen...pls hit like and do comment..its important to me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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updt is in pg 3
Edited by samanthawllms7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
very nice update👏
here pia is really different by nature...
hawww...pia dead😲
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Abhay is really hell possessive abt Piya.Jay loved Piya?
OMG dangerous precap.Plz dont separate Abhiya😭.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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abhiya cnt be separated ever!! jst wait and watch
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome Update...Felt bad for Jeh...Hope he will find love again.And you mention some prophecy about some hybrid human-werewolf child in the begning whats that about.Hope Jeh dont turn negative later.
Precap sounds Super-interesting and Scary too.
Cant wait to read more..Pls Update Soon.
Thanks so much for the pm. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful update !
Jeh loves Pia ?
Precap looks interesting .
Thanks for pm and continue soon .

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part - 4


Abhay was inside jungle...running...screaming...destroying evrything...the pain was too much for him...pia hide this truth from him..why...no...she has to ansr him...

pia did nt find abhay anywhr..she was hell worried..she knew he was upset..she called Jay..

J- yeah..angel..what hppnd?

P- J do u know whr is abhay..did he met u again?

J- err..umm..yeah.. he did..

A- what was he saying J?

J- why? any prblm?

P- ansr me J!! what were u too talking about!! jst tell me

J- pia he was angry!! and he made me upset too..he was telling me to stay away from u..i was furious at this!! so i..

P- u what!! tell me pls..

J- I told him that I was ur first love and he is second person in ur life..okay!!

Piya cut the call and run from there to the jungle..Jay did the worst he can do..Abhay...how will she explain evrything..how!!

she called him endlessly...abhay..abhay..whr r u?
abhay...she was crying and screaming...the fear of loosing him was visible in her face.
abhay...pls cm bck...abhay

abhay did cm bck...

A- u said that trust is the main thing in love...what about u? you lied to me? i m not ur first love huh!! tell me do u still love him..or u r trying to make him jealous by dating me!!

Piya slapped him

P- this is the reason abhay!! u cnt undrstnd my feelings..u blv so easily what others say..but u dnt hv faith in me!! u r accusing my love abhay!! yeah i did nt tell u this..cause this was a past..

A- only a past!! wow woman!! what a nice lie huh!!

P- abhay u r crossing ur limits...tell me then abhay why did u hide about maithili haa!! i knw evrything about ur past..but i did nt ask anything..cause i hv faith in ur love..but u dont trust me...what is the point to dig into the past..i thought the love we share is imprtnt abhay..

A- accha...u know really well pia i hide evrthing for ur safety...but u..

P- just shut up!! thats a lame xcuse...u allways lie and name it my safety...it was a past abhay..jay nvr loved me..thats why i nvr gv it imprtnc...i knew it u cnt handle this truth thats why i did nt tell u...

A- oh that dog do hv feelings for u...hw cum u dnt knw !!

P- what! abhay pls dnt drag him in this..u r misundrstnding..its nt true

A- u r frgting that i can read minds...he do love u

P- what!! i dnw that abhay...he did nt tell me..how can u suspect me..u can read minds naa..so did nt u read my mind abhay!!

A- oh thats what i m unable of piya!! i dnt knw what did u do with ur mind

P- abhay u hv crossed all the limits today!! if u truly loved me then u should hv ask me first!! but u dnt know what love is abhay!! i m just ur obsession..u wnt to control me and my soul like a caged bird..u know what u dnt deserve to be loved..thats why u r alone till now..go away abhay first learn how to trust and respect...then show me ur face

A- no u hv to listen to me!! i cnt handle the mere thought of u loving sumone else..or be friend with sumone...why pia..why cant u be with me like that!!

P- go away abhay!! u promised that u will not distrust me again..but u did it again...and not just that, u accused me with such shamefull worrds..i dnt wanna see ur face..go away

piya run frm their...abhay was shocked to hear this words from her!! he run behind her...pia was in middle of the road now..suddenly pia hit with a rock and starred to fall and when she was falling a truck hit her..abhay was late..he saw her fragile lifeless body was in the road...he was dumfounded...he couldnt save her..he was like dead agin...he cnt see her like that...he called Jay

J- what!! what did u do with her!! i m comming...i will kill u bloody vampire!!

jay saw her lifeless body...he was shattered...what this is not reality!! abhay was beside her like a statue...Jay attacks him...he did not protest..

A- pls bring her bck J.. i dnt know why!! my powers are not working

J- u said u know her...do u know she is the most powerful super natural...a witch..she is the would be queen of all the super naturals...she is the daughter of lord Quelon..she is a Mailonic soul..but she will get her powers later!! ur powers wont work on her...i m her protector..its all written in a prophecy...just get lost..she dont knw about herself..only i knew it...u get lost..i wont let u touch her again..

A- she..she is the one?? the would be goddess!! oh my god...what did i do? i will go away...just pls bring her bck..pls...i wont cum near her...pls Jay i m promise u..i wont cum bck in her life...but i luv her...pls save her...

J- now get lost

abhay was begging to his king for death!! he cnt save his love..whats the point of this life then!! Jay was helpless...he have to do this...just to save her...but will she forgive him...pls pia i m sorry..

PRECAP- Abhay's was punishing himself...jay was scared...will pia cum bck to life again?



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Edited by samanthawllms7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me first [:D/] ss super update
Piya dead aww..poor abhay ...i'm liking this ziddi and crazy abhay...
Interesting precap..will jay turn piya a werewolf...nooo
Update soon

Edited by ririrararaatry - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update.
Piya dead😭.Abhay is punishing himself 4 this.All misunderstandings were created by Jeh😡😡.I dont want Piya to be ww.Will Piya come bak 2 life again?😲.
Update soon.

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