Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26 - Page 9

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

wow stay away mission chod kar i am taking u away from everyond wow cool...

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

fantastic update

its simply wow...the pull that both feel towards eachother.

pia's longing for abhay even though she do realise that something is wrong and abhay keeps distance from her but got too jealous when she was kissed by rohan...the last part was awsum...the way he holds her and commanded her...it was too good.

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: --sonali--

Awesome update Indu-loved it!

its so Dark,passionate one...loved abhiya dark bonding!!
well written it...salute to ur writing!yr muze words nhi mil rhe...kaise batau how i loved this OS a lot...such nice n amazing piece of writing!! aww..thank you sonali...😳

i thinking Rohan care for Pia n He loved Her a lot na...he is nice to her to...but our piyu nhi na...vo to abhay k liye hi bni hai...n abhay too...

when she witnessed a pair of blazing eyes burning with rage looking straight at them. Pia shuddered with fear, though happy at heart for having what her heart yearned for...

Abhay get jelous by Rohan...aisa bhot dino bad kisi update main read krne ko mila n m loving it!!!! me too loved writing this part..😳


n loved this a lot-

t was past midnight when pia felt sudden uneasiness, she felt stifle and breathed deeply but that could not lessen the suffocating feeling, instead it heightened and Unable to ward off the discomfort , Pia opened her eyes and the next moment the very sight before, made her heart soar high into an ineffable ecstasy. The poison...the passion...everything was there...the eyes...those.. eyes...how can she forget...but the pupils had changed their hue and were blistering Red.. there was something else too...and that was anger...desperation. Pia raised her hand, her expression unafraid; she spoke in her trembling voice 'where were you? Why did you leave me? Why this punishment..?' why? What have I done?!!' she pleaded, her hand reached his chin but before it could touch the perfect marvelled contour, his hand held her tender wrist in its steel grip, and 'ahaa.'..a soft sound of pain escaped her lips yet pia continued to look at him, with eyes full of love and compassion. But the beast manifested with new human feelings those were alien to him, seemed uncontrollable and roared in indomitable rage, his hands as strong as iron enclosed her waist viciously in its tight grasp and pulled her up close to him, his eyes fiery, ready to inflame anything and everything in its vicinity, seemed unshakable by her pain

n Indu...were u STOPPED YR...AB AAGE KYA HOGA??? hmm..lets see..you will know soon..😊
plz update soon na...yes Loved Abhay's Words-"
'You...Are Mine..!..No One but Mine..!.. I will take you away with me..away from everyone...' "

plz update soon na Indu...thank u for u ppl...missing Badly AbhIya bt coz of u ppl...they are still Alive with us...god bless u all...love u.

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

awsm update

Originally posted by: mandy1024

U n ur chants 😛 I wish I could chase u with a danda right now 😡 but lets make do with this for now: aww...its sooo cute.😳.thank you mansa dear...🤗

This is what I call a true dark story in its gloriest form 👏 U have brought out the essence of the story really very well 👏 What can I say? This is ur best work till date 👏 than you dear..😳you always praise me.😛 but still your words mean a lot. 😳

Haseena is right - the beast has already fallen for the beauty n its only a matter of time before the beast will destroy himself in love 😳 but this is what I would say a beautiful destruction 😳 hmm..cant say...but whatever the end is will surely heartbreaking...

The part where Pia felt a chill that had nothing to do with Dehradun's cold weather was written marvelously 👏 I could almost feel what Pia was feeling. A girl who was once bubbly n cheerful is pondering over something that her mind cannot recollect but her heart feels 😳 The forbidden pleasure of a desstructive love 😳 thank you. i tried mybest,glad i could please you..😳

So here also u have a lover boy who craves for something that is never meant to be his 😆 hmm..but rohan is not just any regular cute boy dear,you will see that in the coming updates..😉

Of course nobody can ever stand a chance against Abhay 😉 yep..true!! 😳

Pia on the other hand cannot share wat she is feeling even with her own best friends n this is something new both for her n for her friends 😕 yes its hard for pia,she is having a hard time,specially hiding things from rohan is quite painful for her.

How can Pia evade those soulful icy blue eyes that had her captivated ever since it held her gaze 😳 Rohan did pour his heart out in the scene but how can Pia ever feel for anyone else other than Abhay? 😆 Abhay was meanwhile watching this from a distance n I am sure every nerve in his body must have been urging him to rip Rohan into pieces 😆 absolutely.!!.😆.he was boiling actually ..ready to burst any moment..you see..it isnt easy for him to see his pia with someone else..

The last scene Ah, the pull of the forbidden 😳 But Pia also got to see Abhay's true face I so hope it wasn Rohan whom Abhay killed hmm...lets see..but why do you all think its rohan..😕 well u will know soon..😛

Please do continue soon 😃 It was amazing Indu 👏 I wish u would have made an SS or FF out of this 😳