Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arghhh Indu I wish I could chase u with a danda 😡
U stupid, idiotic, moronic woman 😡 Ur saying ur not happy after having written something so amazing? 😡 Honestly woman, if u feel this isn good then I doubt u ever read any of my crappy in ur sane mind 🤢 U call my lousy updates a masterpiece n call ur masterpiece garbage? 😡 Get a life 😡
The update was pure classic 👏 I can never ever dream forget write something so beautiful like as if ur weaving magic with words 👏 Breathtakingly beautiful 👏 It was maginificantly brilliant 👏 I wouldn want to use ordinary words to praise this beautiful piece of writing 👏 I wish I could even analyse this update but I defo dont think I am anyone worthy enough to do it. The forbidden attraction between the beauty and the beast was at its best in this update. Pia yearning to have Abhay around her, Abhay trying to sort out his messed up emotions which for once dominates over the beast in him. But one day the illusion had to break exposing the beast before the beauty and this is the deciding moment. But is the beauty willing to accept the beast in its gory form? How else will an innocent Pia react on seeing the monstrous form of the man who has captivated her heart? She is afraid, revolted n wants nothing to do with him. Abhay would have probably gotten over his feelings for her, had she not pined for him like a dying man wanting to hold onto his waning lifeline 😳 Her rejection unleashed the beast in him making him wonder what could have possibly changed now? When she had accepted him before, why cant she do the same now? For he had always been a beast n not the angel she believed him to be 😭
Indu I really wish I can use adjectives to praise this but sorry I cannot for even words will fail to express the true brillaince of this amazing update 👏
N next time u call ur work crappy, I swear I shall not bother posting my lousy updates anymore n I mean it 😡 Had enough of ur rants 😛 Now update the next part jaldi 😈
Edited by mandy1024 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Again???? 😡 Not fair 😭 I even kept a watch 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
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beatifully written indu👏👏
pia wanted abhay to to come back to her...and he came...
but after knowing the reality...pia don't wasnt to be with him😭😭
now what will happen...???
loved it so much ❤️
Edited by -juhi-lily- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
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ufff u girls 😵

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That was an outstanding piece of writing Indu.. im just speechless how to praise you 😲 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
So much emotion in the wording that I had goosebumps while reading it. i read it thrice in one go and twice now again 😆 perfect capture of forbidden relationship. Pia wanted Abhay to be with her, come back to her again - her forbidden attraction and he came but he is a monster. it baffled her without a doubt and the beast? his strange desire the pull towards the prey which changes his every fiber of emotions shoved him away seeing his true form so heartbreaking but beautiful. i wish i could ever write like you 😳
pleasure reading it and please update soon 🤗
Edited by Phoenix.Xeelan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
wow that was amazing indu. very very emotional. do continue pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
indu!!! i beg you. please please update this soon. jahanpanah tussi great ho!

what an update. mindblowing. *bows* and *bows again*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
I m not able to press like button
Oh I loved the way u described Abhay's unsaid pain & Pia's fear.along wid her love
Plz cont..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Very nice update Indu :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
wow great os plz update soon
it's awesome story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Simply mind blowing Indu. Thanks a lot for the PM. Abhay has all the reasons to stay away from her having seen her fear and Piya's love for him will overcome the fear. Waiting eagerly for your update to see how the story unfolds and how they become one accepting each other in their respective worlds.

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