Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

superb update

it was written so well...lvd it

thanks for pm

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Polly.P

@Polly.P

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Amazing update !👏👏👏👏👏
Awww...Abhay came back for pia !😳
But when she saw abhay's reality she told him to get away !!😭
Why did you make me cry ??😭😭😭
Continue soon and thanks for the pm ! 😊

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

wow an update after such a long time. But it was worth the wait. So Pia saw abhay in his true form. But still her heart earns for him. So will she be able to tame the beast. Waiting

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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

awesum update indu👏

loved it

aww after dat harsh reality pia asked him to go😭

continue soon

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Again???? 😡 Not fair 😭 I even kept a watch 😭

😆...we posted at the same time...but i'm still quicker😆 😉

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
😆...we posted at the same time...but i'm still quicker😆 😉

😛 😆 🤣

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

OMG Indu dat was purely Awesome!
After reading d update i felt it wud take another lifetime when i will be able 2 write something like this! Dat too conditions apply😆.
Every word was screaming abt d title of this OS! Purely magical.It is this forbidden element which is d charm of Abhiya n made me use this term 4 our page too!
Abhiya moments were out of d world!
Eagerly waiting 4 further story!

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

its perfect scean what i wish in pkyek... par dil mange more so update soon indu...:-)):-D

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lamha

@abhiyarockz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

wow amazing, awsome and mind blowing update and emotional too...👏

pia want abhay to come back but she left after knowing his reality that is bad...😭

continue soon...

thanx for pm!🤗

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sonali

@--sonali--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Indu...Big Hug for a fantastic update...u alwys rock!!!
The update is awesome,thoda emotional,thoda sad...but bhot hi Chotu hai...mera pet nhi bhara...!
Really,alwys loved the way u descibed all feelings of abhiya...tht was Awesome!

Pia gasped, her eyes big..petrified...slightly confused, remained fixed at the nature's cursed creation. Her hand stopped midway, trembled. She tried to say something but words did not come out. On the other end his hand loosened, yet the lightening gaze, reflecting from his flaming red pupils remained unaffected, they Continued to blaze with the same intensity. For a moment there was complete silence except the sound of deep breathing coming from a bewildered...terrified...Pia, waiting her unsettled heart to be soothed at the mercy of her predator. The next thing happened too fast, before she could kill the silence with her love filled words and feel the perfect fair contour that reflected silvery beam thus making him an entity who does not belong here, or before she could blink her eyes he was gone..!..Her saviour...Her demolisher..the beast, was gone, before she could comfort her ailing heart...before she could surrender her thoughts..feelings of her agonizing heart...he left her...Yes once again he had left her, to go through the excruciating pain of separation all over again...'No..wait..!...please don't go..do not leave me..please..!! ' a soft pleading whisper came out from her trembling lips, when she murmured to herself again 'yet again you leave me here to die a thousand deaths. ...

It shows all emotions of pia n abhay...jane kya hai...they can't get...but they know very well...what a bonding of SoulMets!The black sentenses are just Fabulous n Fantabulous!

she sat there, waiting for him. It was almost after an hour or so when a movement was heard and before two cold hands pulled her into its iron clasp, her heart knew who it was. And the next instant she felt herself encased into a steel grasp and was thrust into something hard, and the moment she looked up,
...whr did you find those words...!!!

She was still in his embrace with her soft hand resting on his chest, underneath that felt cold and hard as stone, and with the faint moonlight flickering through the open window, two figures one representing light and the other darkness stood close to each other with passion erupting through their every fibre. It seemed as if his moments absence has made her oblivious of everything else, her beautiful brown eyes gleamed with boundless love, and slowly her hand touched his chin, gently caressing she murmured 'don't leave me...please...if you wish to kill me...do it Here n Now..Yes Now...but please.. don't leave me...i will die...!' two drops of tear slid down her cheeks,...Just Fab writing.

The beast closed his eyes, her touch having so much affection changed his contour , and the next moment when the deep indigo eyes looked at her again they blazed but with the same familiar longing and profound emotion that one moments gaze was enough to appease her bereaved heart. ...E.P.I.C WORDS!

The real emotions of Abhay...the last in his lifetime...SHE!!
then the most emotional part...M feeling bad for Abhay...

No..!..No..No...No! ' She closed her mouth with her hands, her entire body shaking enormously...On the other end his face showed no alteration of emotion at first, except dreadful longing flickering through his intense eyes, but then slowly confusion and then inexplicable firmness shadowed his sapphire eyes and his dark figure started advancing towards her. Pia kept receding And He kept advancing towards her. As He reached near her, Pia slumped against the wall, she felt his cold breath on her face n neck and tried to move away, but he with his both hands blocked her path, her big brown eyes had no glint of fear except sadness and pain and as he raised his hand to touch her again, Pia's voice protested fiercely 'No...do..not..Touch me..! ...Please...don't..! ' And she took a deep breath and said in a tone of distaste 'please leave me alone...!'
This scene reminds me of 2nd Feb 2011...Pia knows tht Abhay is Vampire when he saved her...

"then something happened which she had never imagined even in her wildest nightmare. He screamed what seemed like the roar of thousand wounded animals, and his eyes blazing thunder, about to destroy everything around with It's one look. Almost instantly making a dreadful sound His hands smashed the wall beside her in a moments flicker. Pia flinched, she was horrified but there was possibly nothing that could stop the monster, he was now uncontrollable, and then the room witnessed the wrath of hell, as everything turned to dust in just seconds...""

WHAT A SCENE MAN...how i was wishing it to show in serial...!

He then once again advanced towards her, his eyes threatening n hands held her both arms in it's steely grip, and it is then that Pia realised the tiny shells of the wall had pierced her skin and blood was oozing out from those fresh wounds. And then looking at those enraged eyes When Pia thought her approaching end was near he spoke in his steel emotionless tone 'this is who i am...this is who i was...then what's so different now?...tell me..!!.what has Changed...NOW..?' Pia closed her eyes, tears were sliding through her rosy cheeks and then she heard another crackling sound and opening her tearful eyes she saw him standing near the balcony, his face stiff turned to Pia, there was a cruel smile... yet sadness somewhere deep underneath was visible too...and then he was Gone..!

These lines are ...Mindblowing...Salute Indu...actually Reader can FEEL it...wht is happening...!

His face smeared with blood...the ruthless smile...lucid eyes..everything flashed in her mind...nothing of it was close to the imagination of her dream knight...yet there was something...something...that was...Inexplicable...Undecipherable...in those eyes...in that Sad smile...that grieved her...torn her heart into thousand pieces.....alas!!!

@Black-That is what I would like to say-Out Of The World!very very Well Done Indu...dont have words to express you wht a Wonderful Update isss!Egarly waiting for next part...do plz update soon na...!!

Love U darling!

Edited by --sonali-- - 12 years ago

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