Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26

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Raatry

@forever.alone

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

really nice update... 😛Loved the last part..when abhay said 'u r mine..' 😳 I am so happy that u cntnwd it.
Last time i didnt comnt cause i thought u seperated abhiya. 😭 😆
I know i'm so silly.. 😃
Update soon... 😉

Edited by ririrararaatry - 12 years ago

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sonali

@--sonali--

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Awesome update Indu-loved it!

its so Dark,passionate one...loved abhiya dark bonding!!
well written it...salute to ur writing!yr muze words nhi mil rhe...kaise batau how i loved this OS a lot...such nice n amazing piece of writing!!

i thinking Rohan care for Pia n He loved Her a lot na...he is nice to her to...but our piyu nhi na...vo to abhay k liye hi bni hai...n abhay too...

when she witnessed a pair of blazing eyes burning with rage looking straight at them. Pia shuddered with fear, though happy at heart for having what her heart yearned for...

Abhay get jelous by Rohan...aisa bhot dino bad kisi update main read krne ko mila n m loving it!!!!

n loved this a lot-

t was past midnight when pia felt sudden uneasiness, she felt stifle and breathed deeply but that could not lessen the suffocating feeling, instead it heightened and Unable to ward off the discomfort , Pia opened her eyes and the next moment the very sight before, made her heart soar high into an ineffable ecstasy. The poison...the passion...everything was there...the eyes...those.. eyes...how can she forget...but the pupils had changed their hue and were blistering Red.. there was something else too...and that was anger...desperation. Pia raised her hand, her expression unafraid; she spoke in her trembling voice 'where were you? Why did you leave me? Why this punishment..?' why? What have I done?!!' she pleaded, her hand reached his chin but before it could touch the perfect marvelled contour, his hand held her tender wrist in its steel grip, and 'ahaa.'..a soft sound of pain escaped her lips yet pia continued to look at him, with eyes full of love and compassion. But the beast manifested with new human feelings those were alien to him, seemed uncontrollable and roared in indomitable rage, his hands as strong as iron enclosed her waist viciously in its tight grasp and pulled her up close to him, his eyes fiery, ready to inflame anything and everything in its vicinity, seemed unshakable by her pain

n Indu...were u STOPPED YR...AB AAGE KYA HOGA???
plz update soon na...yes Loved Abhay's Words-"
'You...Are Mine..!..No One but Mine..!.. I will take you away with me..away from everyone...' "

plz update soon na Indu...thank u for u ppl...missing Badly AbhIya bt coz of u ppl...they are still Alive with us...god bless u all...love u.

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Tanvi Pareek

@tanvipareek

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

interesting story fren😊

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Wow indu awesome yaar. I love tht possessiveness & dominance of Abhay 4 Pia & Pia was all drowned in his love & passion.

But God now will Pia hate this side of Abhay ?

Plz cont..

😳

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

awsome update
piya feeling so may emotions and never forget that blue eyes
loved the last dailogue of abhay you are mine ufff too gud
poor piya suffering and waiting for abhay but now what will happened?
cont soon

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sadia

@Sukirticious

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Very nice dear thanks for pm but link is not working

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dreamyjennice

@dreamyjennice

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Hey indu what an ss. U r a brilliant writer and I almost wait for all ur updates...loved this one though...abhay is the actual beast here and piya has fallen for him hook line and sinker.. Poor rohan...fallen for a wrong girl...abhay lines...you rmine onlymine ...gave me goosebumps...I always wanted toabhay to lay claim on piya...jealousy.. Wow loved it and do pmme whenever u update any of ur stories.

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
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Wowww Indu... that was an outstanding piece of work 👏 👏 Im absolutely loving this OS or SS, whatever you plan to make it. The passion, darkness element is outstanding here. oh..thank you so much tanzie..it really means a lot..😳
The beast is helplessly attracted towards Pia knowing it'a forbidden and the pull he has is so strong, passionate and raw. loved it. thank you. yes they both are helplessly attracted towards eachother..and they cannot avoid it anymore..😊
Pia's feeling of something missing and the presence of cold, dark something unknown she doesnt know what, explainable was mesmerizing. 😳 i tried my best to create that feel ,glad you liked it..😳
So rohan loves Pia i guess and the way he kissed Pia even between the act explains it and Pia feeling awkward means she doesnt. yes rohan loves pia and pia..well its hard to explain..actually she had always felt something deep towards him,but before feelings could have formed completely abhay came..n though their love is doomed...now...it's..obviously..him..you see..😉
last scene was too good. it was sizzlingly dark and intense, soo much passion Abhay has for Pia. and I assume the blood has a part to play here. too good. thanks,yaa..for abhay pia is somone or rather say something which he had rarely or most probably never came across in his long dead life..so she has become her need now!
the way he said you are mine... i had goosebumps reading it and Pia is helpless attracted and besotted by the forbidden beast.she shouldn't and yet she does. i loved writing this part! 😊
I cant wait for next part. I feel like telling you please update tomorrow.. 😆 sorry tanzie,i kept you waiting but what to do,my exams were going on. but will try to update it within tomorrow..😊
amazing ⭐️ and I love Othello 😳 me too! that's the reason i included it here! 😃 it fits abhiya perfectly! 😳 and thanks for this wonderful comment once again..🤗

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great os plz update soon
what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm

thanks alsia. will update tomorrow. 😊

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Mindblowing update Indu.I'm super excited to see that u r continuing this OS.Pia's confused and vulnerable state of mind is perfectly described.She feels lost...craving for the forbidden.Abhay seems possessive about her...he hated that boy kissing Pia.Uff the last part...it was too gud..nd a ttl cliffhanger.Continue soon

thank you monami..glad you liked it..😳 yep,will update by tomorrow hopefully..😊

Originally posted by: .rumki.
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hey Indy this part was awesome superb. You have described Pia's state of mind perfectly. Pia missing Aahay badly and Abhay's jealousy part was superb. At last he couldnt stay away and went to Pia to confront her. Ending was gr8

thanks rumki..glad you liked it..😳

Originally posted by: Punith...
Awsm update
Continue soon...

thanks dear..will update very soon..😊

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Oh oh my... Indu this has just become my most fav of your works... So please please try to finish this... This was awesome! thank you shreya..😳 oh..of couse i will end it and you wont have to wait for more than 1/2 updates for that. 😛So abhay did not like Rohan kissing her... Guess he marked Piya as his own... Wonder what'll happen now... lets see...
This story is Passionate with a capital P... So kudos!!

thank you dear..😳 you know i love to read ur comments!! 😉 😊

Originally posted by: koli97
Wahooo Indu...supeb👏All I imagine but no words find I explain my feelings...just say its speechless,only feelings Abhay's love,his jealousy took pia with him😊,,,really love it..I thought its end in 1st part but u continue,love it dear...continue asap😊

thank you soo much for liking dear..will be updating very soon..😳

Originally posted by: shria
First of all I'm really happy that u continued it😳 Lovely update indu... Abhay getting jeolous😉 I'm loving it😆 waiting to see what will happen nw😛 continu soon😳

thank you shria..glad you liked it..😳 will be updating tomrw..😊