Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

First of all I'm really happy that u continued it😳 Lovely update indu... Abhay getting jeolous😉 I'm loving it😆 waiting to see what will happen nw😛 continu soon😳

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

beautiful indu. i wonder whose blood was it? i hope not rohan's

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zara

@meerubzara

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

its fabulous update
eagerly w8ng for next part
thanks for pm

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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

its a superawesum updte indu

i m just loving this o.s of urs

beautifully written

loved abhay's-u r mine

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

wow stay away mission chod kar i am taking u away from everyond wow cool...

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

OMG this was again a wonderful n poetic piece of work!! I M SPEECHLESS!!!
The whole atmosphere change,a strange longing 4 something missing In Piya,encounter wid Abhay n lastly d bedroom scene everything was dripping wid intensity n a charm dat s forbidden!
So Rohan has feelings 4 Piya bt Our Lover turned beast clearly didnt like it n IS he really going 2 take Piya wid him? Or do something drastic?
Also Haseena has an inkling of wat s going on in Abhay's mind.
I m loving this story.Plz continue soon.

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

indu...that was just WOW!!!!! superb update👏 loved every bit of it...the way pia's feelings r described...how she feels somethng uncertain nd missing...she didnt feel comfortable with the way rohan kissed her even though jst for an act...and the last part...where abhay say-u r mine...no one bt mine!!! mindblowing update indu...i m short of words to desccibe❤️

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

fantastic update

its simply wow...the pull that both feel towards eachother.

pia's longing for abhay even though she do realise that something is wrong and abhay keeps distance from her but got too jealous when she was kissed by rohan...the last part was awsum...the way he holds her and commanded her...it was too good.

thanks for pm

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kanya007k

@kanya007k

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Update was dark,full of passion & above all beautiful

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Seema

@...Seema...

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika aaay.im dancing coz i wished u continue it and u did.bundles,bundles and bundles of thanx for continuing dis intense and passionate love story.nw coming to da update it was fabulous.beast is falling for da beauty awesome.thanx for pm and continue soon.

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