Abhiya SS - The Forbidden--New Chap updtd-PG 74-AUG-26

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Wow indu...this was gripping...plz make it an ss or ff.. Amazing...

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Indu were u trying to give me a heart attack? Uff uff uff. So beautiful!
I love the way you portrayed the feelings between Piya and Abhay...
Abhay was going to kill her but he didn't... And piya...she would rather die than have him leave... And yet...he still healed her and left. I love love LOVED it.
Please write more such OS. I just read this the third time... Going to read again :D

aww...thanks shreya dear...😳 that really means a lot..thank you for ur appreciation dear...😳 will try to but this type of ideas rarely come...😛 but will try to give one or two updates more...😊

Originally posted by: Dikshi92
Reading an AbhIya OS after a long time.. and it's beautiful 😊

thank you...😳 and thanks for reading! 😊

Originally posted by: arshi4ipkknd
It was awesome and r u updating more

thank you dear.😳 ya will try to give 2 or 3 updates more...😊

Originally posted by: Princess_jiya
Amazing update and thankz for the pm.

thanks dear..u'r welcome. 😳

Originally posted by: pkyekfan
This was written soo well!! 😊

thanks for reading dear.😊

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: koli97
wahooo lovely,superb,awsomeee👏...purna din yaad aa gayi...pkyek the jungle meet,everything remind me😊awsomeee concept👍🏼

thank you dear..😳 ya while i was writing even it reminded me of those wonderful epis...😳

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
That was a superb OS Indu...absolutely brilliant..loved it 👏 thank you tanzie..that means so much..😳
You portrayed the essence of forbidden relationships, their passion, the pull and the strange but strong attraction superbly. true dark love story should be like this. Loved it

thank you for the comment...i always look forward to them...😳

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
amazing dark story... plz write more

thank you dear. will try to...😳

Originally posted by: miss..chalana
It ws seriously an amazing os...
Beautifully written...

Omg... I just loved it... 😊

thanks a lot dear. happy to know that you loved it so...😳

Originally posted by: luckdiya
omg!!!!!! its amazing indu... superb
abhay ws evil bt dnt knw wht forced him 2 save her ????????
its wriiten straight 4m d hrt ... 👏 👏 👏 keep writing 🤗

aww... thank you diya...😳 that means a lot dear...😳 n thanks for commenting...🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: ilove99
heart touching!

thank you meera! 😳

Originally posted by: abhiya_kapi
I was stunned reading this OS. Absolute fantabulous. 👏 Forbidden name itself is so dark and everything is so fab. Good work. 👍🏼

thank you dear. am so glad you liked it. 😳

Originally posted by: vmpy
First of all take a bow for writing such an awesome os.brilliant.i was just lost in it while reading feeling piyas emotions and abhays helplessness.great job.thanx for pm.

thank you dear...i am happy that you liked it so much. 😳u'r most welcome. 😊

Originally posted by: ashu1909
nice update

thank you. 😊

Originally posted by: Priya46
nice

thank you...😳

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sukugeny
indu darling...it was ZAKASSS... U KNOW...EXCELLENT...JusT TUMHARE TYPE KA..awesome written each feelling of abhay...a vampire..n pia too..wow...loved it very much. .mere dil ko chhu gya...suprb...heart touching...tera jwab nhi..LAJWAB.. aww...thank you so much dear...very happy to know that you liked it this much...it means a lot...😳

plz cont.krogi...kuch bhi chalega in second part..plz.. ya...i am continuing...but only 2 or 3 updates probably...for all of you! 😆 😉

Indu...u know..u r fantastic Writer...love u.

thanks for this wonderful comment... love you too dear..🤗

Originally posted by: hema_rawat
lovely os

thanks hema...😊

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani

Simply beautiful Indu 👏 was engrossed in your writing , simply amazing so wish it was SS ya ff 😃

thanks roshni. 😳 will try to give few more updates...😊

Originally posted by: meerubzara
really really awosome os
very well written
wish that it was an ff
thanks for pm

thanks dear...will try to give few updates more.u'r welcome..😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sukuvivu
awesome...dark love story of abhay pia.plz conti.

thank you dear. 😳

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
amazing OS Indu👏

thanks prima..😳

Originally posted by: devilish-grin
sorry 4 late reply
busy in xams its alright dear.. no probs..😊
fab os dear
loved it

thanks dear..😳 have you changed ur id btw? 😕

Originally posted by: bellaaa
sorry for late replying its alright dear..
amazing os glad you enjoyed it..😊
loved the first meeting of abhiya when he pinned her to the tree remembering when piya meet in serial to abhay in jungle and he drag to the tree☺️ while writing it also reminded me of that scene dear.😳
hahhah poor arnab
wow again abhay hold of piya and like the line you r beautiful thank u.😊
like the way u describe the abhiya scenes
and how rude chand is ordered abhay to kill piya no ,not ordered but seeing abhay restless he only gave him permission dear which he was not giving before...
ohh abhay suck piya blood but as true abhay healed piya
memorizing lines of piya in weak state
awsome os thanks a lot for this big n wonderful comment beenish...😳

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
awesome fairy...u deserve a standing ovation👏 👏...u keep getting better and better..this os has everything..love, passion...darkness..the temptation of the forbidden fruit...and u've depicted all this so beautifully...so much in so less words..yet so deep and beautiful⭐️ thank you princess.😳..and you always embarrass me...😳 but thanks a ton..you know your appreciation means a lot...😳

i just loveddd abhay here😳.thank you..😊..he has every trace of that dark beast he is, the vampire that is his nature...yet somewhere deep deep down, he has a conscience, and an inner goodness...which ultimately stops him from harming piya...😊 yes,he is a complete beast here in true sense...umm...can't say inner goodness because he hardly had ever witnessed humanity but yes...you can say its pia..she and her proximity had forced him to do something which he never did in his entire existence...😊
and piya..the innocent firefly lured by the flame...yet she can't help fall in love with abhay...the blue-eyed mysterious boy she had met only twice...already her heart is his to keep..😳 yes pia is already drawn towards the beast unaware of his true nature though even if she knew it would have hardly mattered...

their meetings were so well-written and so impactful.👏loved the encounters...and the last part...where piya is already turning to abhay for comfort..even in those two short meetings, he has become her world...and his decision...to leave her..knowing they can never be...knowing that for her sake he will have to stay away from her..that shows already the depth of love that is alraedy forming between them...⭐️ thank you..hmm...yes there is lots more that will explain how deep n strong the thread between them really is...😳
awesome job..would love a second part to this😃

.huge demand...so am trying dear...😆 😛 and thanks you once more for this beautiful comment...🤗

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987
OMG it was SIMPLY SUUPPEERRBB!
Man, how do u manage 2 come out wid such soul touching ideas everytime? I am already not over ur previous work;everytime i think abt dat OS i find myself in tears!! oh..you liked it that much..!.i am really overwhelmed dear..😳.and thank you...it means a lot...😳

This was amaazing! I m speechless!
Perfect Forbidden love story,fatal attraction n finally "tere hi liye tujhse hu juda" ending.Every emotion touched deepest strings of my heart n i felt it alive! thanks..again..😳

So Abhay was never a human here ,a born predator,so no ques of feelings bt love of an innocent fragile human ignited or rather gave birth 2 new emotions unfelt,unheard by him.Predator felt...n these feelings overpowered all his basic instincts n he finally submitted bt sadly"jab bana uska hi bana" thoughts of Abhay when he wished 2 be an ordinary boy were d essence of this forbidden love story! I loved d convo of Abhiya n their all encounters were simply intoxicating! thanks for this wonderful comment dear...😳

Thnx a ton 4 sharing ur spectacular piece of writing wid us!

you'r welcome. dear..glad that i could please you...😳

Originally posted by: SPNnIPKKNDlover
nice

thank you..😊

Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu
omg its beautiful n lovely n superb n fabulous
it too good too awesome thank you dear...thst matters a lot..😊
i don't have words to describe it. write more like this OS maybe a sequel to this one. am so happy to know that i could please you ...😳 ya i will try to give few more updates...😊 um..sequel...cant say..dear..! 😕
sorry for late reply. its alright...😊