Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 25

Originally posted by: mandy1024

YIPPEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Am first Gosh its race out here I tell ya n this being my fav FF here u can imagine

Ok so now whats with u n ur notes lately huh? 😡 Y do u feel u have not done well when everytime u give us such beautiful updates huh? I am not sure if I can agree to what u have said here. I can't say if its better than part 1 but its no less either Everytime I read ur updates the only thing I feel is it can't get any better than this but ur next update proves me wrong 👏 Before u call me biased I am sure all ur other readers will vouch for this as well 😉 You know being a perfectionist I cant stop rewriting it and not liking it... how can I do but still thanks.. you always boost up my confidence 🤗

Coming to the update, like u said I kept a bucket handy 😆 but this time I cried happy tears n for a change it felt good 😳

I totally understand Misha's POV here. One does not share only moments of joy n happiness but also their sorrow with their friends. How would Misha feel when her bestie never told her she was alone in NY pregnant, looking out for the father of her child who was absconding right now? She would feel hurt n betrayed to know her own friend didn trust her enough to share this with her 😭 I defo would if I were in her place 😭 She also gets to know that the man who was known to everybody as Pia Dobriyal's father is not her father in the first place 😲 Too much shock to take in for a single day Ever since u told me that Misha catching Abhiya together will play an imp role I have been eagrly waiting to know how u would show this in ur story. Now that Misha will identify Abhay for the cops will she still be able to think of him the way she did? I doubt tat No sane person would. It's very normal reaction right? I would be feeling betrayed, shocked too if my best friend do this to me.and likei said she will have a important part in knowing Abhay because she is the only person who has seen him but if she comes to know who Abhay is, she wont support Pia or Abhay any of them. it's normal reaction. no1 would support their friend/sister if they are in love with a assassin. it takes a lot to understand such complicated relationship AbhIya share here.. if everyone would understand it, their lives would be so easy.

I know majority of ur readers r mad at Arnab right now n so am I but I am not sure if I blame though Its not easy for a man to accept his wife's illegitimate child n love it like his own as its a living reminder of the betrayal 😕 To top it off his reputation was tarnished before the world when the truth about her pregnancy was out in the open. I am not sure anyone would stand that atleast not bcoz of a child tats not theirs in the 1st place But I am thoroughly disappointed with Madhu 😡 She is a spineless woman 🤢 Ok i get it that she can't be jumping with joy on learning that her unwed daughter is pregnant with the child of her lover who is nowhere to be found now but cant she realise that her daughter is going through the same phase as she had n empathise with her? 😡 I understand she cant raise her voice on Arnab but walking out like that was pure cowardice if u ask me Exactly, i have tried to put different shades of human beings in this FF. selfish, normal, betrayed, spoiled, self destructive everything. different shades for different characters. it's fun to explore the characters like this. Arnab is right at his part, he is not MAHAAN.. he is a normal human being who is not ready to take the pain of Madhu's child and his reputation being ruined. but he fails to understand only if he would have accepted her in the childhood.. Pia wont be like this today. and Madhu's pov will be updated next chapter which might help the readers to understand her.

I loved reading James POV as its realistic with a teeny weeny touch of humour added to it 😆 If u try to live by ethics n morals in this world I am sure one stands to lose everything they have now n thats how James is as well. Repaying Abhay by keeping his secret would jeopardise his family's safety. So was he so wrong in chosing his self n familly over the man in whose debt he was? 😕 Tough question. As he rightly said he's like an insect with human weaknesses. But I am glad that he could help Abhay for once n reunite him with Pia when he was the one who had been responsible for their seperation Liked the way u portrayed the whole part where he helps Abhay to break into the hospital n kidnap Pia right under everybody's noses 😉 James's pov is also very realistic for that matter. typical you might say and you cant judge him.. he is right and he is wrong too.. that's how it is 😆

Coming to Abhiya part ⭐️ Ur an ace at that 👏 The lion has finally broken free from his cage n he will go on a murdering rampage if anyone tries to stop him from getting back to his fiesty lioness 👏 Loved the way Abhay broke out fighting his way out n finally reached out to Pia 😳 Thank you, i love Abhay in this FF... it's my pleasure to write him in this FF. not just him.. in this FF, Abhay n Pia are both like my assets and will always remain one of my most fav characters i have ever written 😳

U gave a glimpse into Pia's state of mind before she tried to take her life n it was THE most beautiful part abt this update 👏 Kudos to u 👏 Only u can write something like this ⭐️ She didn wanna live her life without Abhay but she didn wanna kill her baby or lose her baby in the process n live her life 😕 True she is gutsy enough to raise a baby on her own n she didn need Abhay for her child alone. She wanted him bcoz she knew he too deserved his share of happiness after having endured so much of suffering I wanna know about this in detail as to what happened exactly before she did that n I will wait for ur next update 😳 She thought she was hallucinating seeing Abhay n was willing to embrace death? 😭 Gosh that hurt so much. Loved the way u expressed Abhay's emotions on seeing Pia in this state U depicted everything so realistically esp Pia's appearance n beautifully the part where he holds her lying next to her not wanting to sleep so that he could just see her 😳 Finally they're back again This is what I wanted n u portrayed it so well 👏 The last part where Pia keeps his hand on her abdomen making him feel their child growing inside her was so poignantly beautiful 👏 Finally Abhay is back to his Pia n his baby n from the title of ur next chap I guess I can figure out wats next 😉 I wanted to make it clear as saving Abhay is not because Pia is bearing his child. she can raise up the child alone but that is not the question. she has seen the person in Abhay no1 else ever has. his misery, his goodness and she has freed him once from that just like Abhay freed HER from Pia's trapped life in bottle of alcohols and loneliness. so why can't she free him again when he deserve it and she loves him so much. if he can destroy himself for saving her then so can she. her love is no less stronger than Abhay's. if he can fight with the world she can fight with life and death too for Abhay because he is worth it. being such a impossibly irrational personality Pia is here, she risked her life in most dangerous way to bring Abhay back to her and she is successful. there's a lot to write how abhay escaped and what happened to Pia and most importantly what Abhay felt in 12 hours when Pia was unconscious... his misery to see her like that and his exact feelings about knowing he will be a father... that is a very important part here and why he cried after so long..it will be in next update.

FANTASTIC Tanzie 👏 I wont use adjectives coz I know wat u will say but hopefully this should say it all:

Hats off for penning it down thanks so much 🤗

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

tanzie how can you say it was not good...that was a beautiful update a heart touching one ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ pia's state was described so well how she is feeling without abhay...it was really a beautiful update...waiting to see others reaction when they will come to know that pia has been kidnapped😆😉

Originally posted by: luckdiya

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oh my god!!!!!!! its remarkable updt tanzie

poor misha it ws shockin 4 her her bst frnd hide d truth 4m her dat she is here & d biggest RAAZ of her lyf hs been exposed in 4nt of her lik dat i nvr xpected .. i love her confidence the way in she took abhiya side was commendable... she cn easily distinguish between fake & true luv dat scene really touched my hrt

mR. Dobriya😡 hw dare he????? dnt wnt 2 comment abt him😡

im happy finally he (james) hs been hlpin him (abhay)

d way piya touched his face & tryin 2 feel him ws adorable & touchy moment i felt i m actually seeing dat moment , he took her in his lap & tried to soothe her...wow!!!!! 4 dat scene only u deserve a hug 🤗a big hug

lst bt nt d least finally dey met after crossin all d hurdles of lyf

thx 4 pm ...updt soon

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Tanzie!! I am literally jumping up and down after this. Like seriously! He came he came he came!! Wheee!!!
Sorry got carried away.

Now:
I wanted to smack the Dogriyal. How dare he call her that... I'm glad she threw it at him. If Abhay had been there he would have probably thrown him instead :P
I hope she doesn't recognize him! Oh gosh.
And and... I like the little match that went on in the hospital. You wrote it so beautifully!
Next chapter: are they gonna get married??? Or is it a red herring :s

Originally posted by: SheDevil

Awesome update. I loved it tanzie.Sorry 4 late reply but maine tera update pehle hi padh liya tha😆

Oh I love the way u showed Abhiya's yearning,their longing & desperation 2 b wid each other. OH Piya sleeping in Abhay's lap all time & Abhay feelinh hwe warmth after ages was well show. I hope ab koi inke beech adanga na daale😳. Will police recognize Abhay as assassin ? Oh I hope not.Plz cont...

Love u🤗

Originally posted by: Pavi.Dravid119

Yeh lo ! It was jus after the second last update that i said that u keep getting better n better and its true 👏

I had tears in my eyes BUT truly an out of the world update it was ⭐️ Totally epic... Am glad i joined IF n could have the pleasure of ur works 😊

U rock Tanzie 🤗

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

OMG!!
I loved this chapter sooo much.
Finally ABHIYA are together...
MY heart wrenched in pain to see them suffering sooo much.
I'm so glad that they united now.
Piya's condition was so much heart-breaking..
Poor girl had a hard time believing that Abhay is finally back to her.
Abhay felt so bad for getting Pia in such a condition.
I still can't digest the fact that Piya really tried to commit suicide.
Gosh!! She loved Abhay soo much...
I wonder what Chand will do now.I hate Arnab.His daughter was sick and he was cursing her badly//I felt so bad for Pia.
Misha was so confused.I wish Abhay may not get into trouble coz of Misha.
Tanzie you are a marvelous writer dear.
Plz update the next part soonest Tanzie and plz do update Till the end of time as soon as possible.
love u
Take care!
Asma

Originally posted by: -BlackBeauty-

Tanzie🤗

I'm so happy James decided to help Abhay with Pia's kidnapping. I understand where he was coming from and everything when he betrayed Abhay but I'm happy he got it off his shoulders now, to some extent. Call me biased but seeing AbhIya in such a pathetic condition does make me cringe and it was very very tough for me to be fair to James. I hate what he did but I cannot hate him for it and that required some effort on my part. Thanks darling 🤗 call it James conscience call and he is just being human... a normal selfish human who saved his/her neck first over everyone else. Like Katherine said, "better you than I" 😆 and I know how difficult it is to forgive him but your explanation works... 😳

As much as I love AbhIya, I felt for Misha here. The total change which Abhay brought about in Pia was for the better and I'm sure she must've been relieved to see her BFF leave her darkness behind but I'm sure she never expected Pia to be so insanely in love with Abhay that she would take such an extreme step. She didn't and it's a normal feelings of a best friend who came into shock that she doesnt know anything of her so call best friend... i would have reacted the same

To a third party, the depth of AbhIya's feelings for each other is not only crazy but SCARY. It's scary to what extent they can go for each other, it's scary to think how much they can harm themselves for each other and above all, it's scary to see how they can forget the entire world just to be with each other. Misha has every right to freak out about what Pia was doing because she didn't think twice before lying to her best friend and putting herself in danger. If seeing a love which drives AbhIya to the point of self-destruction is not scary then I don't know what is. Their love IS self destructive and also unfathomable to other people... everyone is not supposed to understand them. they donno what they have been through and what they can be for each other and to each other... if everyone would have understood and accepted them.. then their lives would be so easy.

Pia's life depends on Abhay's happiness, she cannot be happier if she sees Abhay live a life he deserves to lead with her. She can't live with herself knowing that Abhay is suffering so much. Threatening to immolate herself if Abhay doesn't come back to her doesn't seem like such a big deal for her because she doesn't want a life with no Abhay in it. Abhay, like any one of us, wants to live. But his every breath depends on Pia's heartbeats. The day Pia's heart stops beating, Abhay stops breathing. He runs to Pia not only to save her life but HIS as well. It agonises him to see Pia in so much of pain.

AbhIya's love is characterised by eternal sacrifice, selflessness, agony and devastation but what makes it epic for me is that grey tint of selfishness it has. Harming themselves aside, they can harm any person who hinders them from making sure that the other person gets the life he/she deserves. I didn't mention it in the last update, but seeing Pia and Abhay bash up James and Abraham respectively made me realise that these two might be the light of each other's lives but when it comes to doing what is right for their soulmate, they still have their dark shades.

I think Pia's heavenly reaction to seeing Abhay after all these months was beautiful; that whole relief and disbelief. After all that they've been through, they've finally found peace in each others' arms. It's stupid but I suddenly feel a ton lighter on my shoulders! When they're with each other, it's different feeling; something divine, something ethereal. Everything seems so right and complete. They just seem so...meant to be! Beautifully said everything 👏 I wanted to made it sure it doesnt feel Abhay is just Pia's obsession or she is hell bent on saving Abhay only because he is the father of her child. NO. that man treated her as human, with love, respect and affection no1 else did even her parents. Inspite of what Abhay himself is, he told Pia not to ruin her life and freed her form the darkness once and Pia loved a man who is supposed to be hated because he is a killer. he is killing not only other people but himself with guilt for years and that's a hugely related to Abhay's father too. he hates himself because he became something his mother dreaded and Pia the only person who healed his wounds, washed his guilt with her undying love for him. showed him life so how couldn't they love each other and fight with themselves along with the entire world to be with each other, protect each other. they are selfish when it comes to each other because the entire world is selfish to them. I know and trust me, i waited so much to write the part where Abhay finds Pia back. when i read it after writing, it sucked up all my emotions and made me so sad. like i can feel everything... it drains my energy and emotion writing it making me depress for hours

Do update soon, 'coz i'm dying to know about what happened in that time lapse! It will clear up a lot of things and you deserve a standing ovation for the way you write and portray everything👏.👏.👏 I will surely explain the time span things to make it more clear. and next chapter will have Madhu and chand's POV too which would help the readers to understand their feelings. thanl you soo much... it means a lottt to me 🤗

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

OMG dat was one hell of an update Tanzie!,,,,. I M SPEECHLESS!!!
It touched d innermost strings of my heart! Everything right from d Piya-Arnab confrontation to Misha's reaction 2wards d Piya's condition,Piya's state of mind before attempting suicide,James' POV,Abhay kidnapping Piya n finally ABHIYA REUNION was so realistic dat i cud imagine everything happening in front of my eyes! HATS OFF TO U 4 WRITING SUCH A PIECE OF WORK!!! OR I WUD BETTER SAY CREATING SUCH A PIECE!
i m nt shocked at Arnab's rxn at Piya's condition.I mean every common father wud react like dat.Bt i m thoroughly disappointed with Madhu;she didnt have guts 2 say anything 2 him when he was insulting her daughter!
Misha as expected was disappointed with Piya's behavior dat she never trusted their frenship 2 share her pains.
Bt is there any chance dat Police may come out wid Abhay's photo n Misha might recognize it?
Loved James POV.So true his condition was like an insect with human weaknesses.He finally helped Abhay 2 kidnap Piya under d nose of whole security system😉 n ya loved his view abt Master's timing too as if he wud hav been here he wud certainly never let Abhiya reunite!

Last most Beautiful part;ABHIYA REUNION.Everything was soo realistic,immensely emotional,heart touching n sooo artistically depicted dat it brought tears in my eyes.Finally Piya's love brought tears in Abhay's eyes too!
Everything from Piya's hallucination 2 d overflowing emotions dat they felt after returning 2 their heaven dat is each other's arms was just Mindblowing.
Next Update Abhiya marriage! YAY! Already eager 4 it.