Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

wow superb update!!!!👏
abhiya's meeting was described beautifully. i read it twice n cried while reading it...it was so emotional...i felt their pain n joy of their togetherness.
brilliant piece of writing!!!!⭐️


Thanks so much dear 😊

Originally posted by: darkcocoa_renu

How can u manage to portray emotions so beautifully tanzi?!misha's trust on abhay is enuf to mark the depth of abhia's love..i so liked james here.I mean how hez wondering and straightforwardly accepting abhay's 'anything-for-pia' things,just like an adolescent.Abhia's reunion..gosh i wonder if anything is left for me to speak on that.Pia's hard acceptance to abhay's presence,assurance of abhay,those kisses..uff..hats off mahn!!i mean u made it so realistic!der eyes spoke volumes n tats the thing i loved da most!dat hairwala dialog was so cute..pia ka supermodel gene express ho raha hai..means sab normal hai..lol..i just cant wait 4 chand's encounter vd abhia..cntinue soon:-)


Thanks so much Renu. Misha's identification can have either positive or a very neg impact on AbhIya relationship. lets see. James is just being human - typical. thanks so much. i literally felt my heart was drowning when i wrote their reunion part. Chand will know next update but wont meet abhiya any soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

tanziee ufff i cant describe in words yar ...too emotional update...fab update...the way piya felt aout abhay and how she fought with arnab and then misha cried and the way abhay shown in front of james and asked in cold voice ...the way piya felt abhay a dream and said i die peacefully and how abhay chanting her name and the face to face teary talk of abhiya tooo gud ...great part...cont soon now


Thanks so much Beenish for the wonderful comment...im glad you liked it 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
When do you plan to update both ff of yours?
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Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

When do you plan to update both ff of yours?


my vacation will start from wednesday so once it starts I can start writing...before that not possible
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Posted: 12 years ago

Eid mubarak to u too dear 🤗 I totally get it when u say u dont get the time Tanzie Trust me even I am going through the same, thats y I decided to take a break. When u start writing u lose track of time, surroundings n u get involved in it to an extent where u lose out on many things in life like health, catching up with other important tasks in ur life n most importantly as u said sleep I remembered staying upto 4am to post an update n got up at 7am the next day as usual for office. Anyways back to the update, I wouldn say its ur best so far but it was written very well n I mean it 👏 There can never be any update which u will screw up n I can vouch for it anytime The update was short though but I totally understand 😳

This time again I am gonna break my analysis on specific characters:
Eric - What he saw there was nothing astonishing for him, nothing new he hadn seen before though he is a human after all n he did feel a lil bit bad for his best friend when he was shot dead right before his eyes by his master But he wouldn dare to question his master abt it as he doesn want the same fate meted out to him as well. Like James he is selfish n his survival instincts will come above everything else 😭 I am sure Chand could not hold Abraham responsible for Abhay breaking out coz even he knows how capable his best assassin is. After all it was him who made him into the killing machine 😆 But I suppose he killed Abraham as he does not want to deal with liabilities Anyways in his present state Abraham wouldn have served him any purpose. Thats how the world functions. I am sure had Chand thrust the gun into his hand n asked him to do the deed himself he would have done it
Chand - Wat shd I say abt this man? He is scary, intimidating n there r times when I even feel pity for this ruthless, callous man 😕 U must know y though. At one point in time he was just like Abhay. But unlike Abhay the woman he fell in love with was nothing like Pia who was willing to believe a man like him also deserved a second chance in life. He is a man who cut himself from all forms of human bonds or he likes to assume that is the case. But he forgets that even hatred is a bond that ties people. Like his hatred for the woman who walked out on him. U can only ever hate a person whom u have loved before. U can forgive a person who doesn mean anything to u but u can never ever forgive anybody close to ur heart for having wronged u He denies feeling anything for his daughter but does he really not care for her? 😕 Nope thats never the case. The fact that he doesn want Abhay in her life as he is wrong for her proves that. But does he want to kill Abhay just bcoz he's wrong for his daughter? I have a feeling that envies Abhay here. He always saw himself in him n now he sees Abhay getting the chance to lead a normal life that destiny never gave him. He didn get it, so naturally Abhay shouldn either according to him. He thinks Pia will forget Abhay n move on? 😡 Dream on dude, she's ur daughter after all! Just like how he couldn take Madhu out of his heart, Pia will never be able to take Abhay out of her heart no matter wat 😆 He wants to track down Abhay n kill him n the kid for good 😡 I kinda dread Abhiya's future 😭 These lines from the song 'Yeh Jism' suits him perfectly:
Raza hai kya teri dil-o-jahan tabah kiya
Saza bhi kya teri wafa ko bewafa kiya
Madhu - I can never blame Arnab for giving the ultimatum to chose between him n Pia to Madhu. I totally get his point here. I had said Madhu was a coward for not being able to stand by Pia Arnab had accepted her at a point in time when her family had probably disowned her But wasn it her fault here? She definitely isn strong minded here. Love is blind n this suits her perfectly. Had she been a lil bit sensible she would have realised wat she was getting into before falling in love with Chand. Lets say u didn know him well but still I wonder how can u fall in love with a person whom u dont know? 😕 Strange for me 😕 Anyways she gladly accepted Arnab's offer but she should have thought abt her child then. True Arnab would give her a name but did she really think after then, THEN WHAT? I guess not 🤢 She should have thought that she was being unfair to Arnab by accepting him n also to Pia. He loved her madly, so he was willing to accept her n give her child his name. I agree in a society such as ours if a child does not have a father's name its tough for it to face the world. But is tat the only thing tat matters? Wat abt the love n care ur supposed to get? She could see Chand in Pia n she also knows y Pia became tat. Couldn she now realise y Chand became like tat? Just like Pia he faced rejection On one hand she blamed Arnab thinking that had he loved her, Pia wouldn have become wat she was now n on the other she also realised that she was no one to blame Arnab when she herself hadn been a good mother to her despite having given birth to her 😭 Now she wants to keep tabs on Pia. This might be a small step on her front of being a mom but now its too late for tat
Abhay-Pia - It was so emotional to see Abhay getting connected to his child 😭 😳 Pia saw tears in his eyes for the first time n this shocked her to the core. Coz this was the same man who told his tale to her w/o showing any sign of emotion on his face Abhay was crying bcoz he feared he would turn into something or rather someone he loathed the most? 😭 But tat was natural. But he shd also understand he isn at fault here. Unlike his father he had never abandoned Pia. Had he known she was bearing his child he would never have left her He could see a mirage of his mother's past when he saw Pia in the hospital. How could he not feel bad? 😭 It was nice to see both of them relay the events of their life in the other's absence to each other 😳 It was really nice to see Abhay take a firm decision to walk out on the dark world for the sake of their child but tat is wat Abhay would have done 😳 Abhay is one smart fella 😎 Chand will assume they r on their way to LA n bcoz of this distraction they will get a chance to escape n move out to a place where they can start anew but I am sure its only a matter of time before Chand catches up with them 😭 They have suffered so much n I cant bear to see them suffer anymore Chand hasn seen them together so far n I really wonder wat impact it will have on him when he actually sees Abhay n Pia together n sees wat they feel for each other. I am supposed to dread it but I am actually eager to see the face off b/w Abhiya n Chand 😊 Awww my Abhay proposed to Pia? But in his own ISHSTYLE 😎 n loved the way Pia asked him if she will get to be in his arms n loved Abhay's answer even more 😳
Dont u dare to call ur own updates bad 😡 coz I dont write my essay for nothing 😛 The length of my comments is directly proportional to the brilliance of the update 😎
BRILLIANT update n this is for Chand n Madhu 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by mandy1024 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ammmaaazzziingly awesome update Tanzie!

So Abhiya r finally back 2 their home hiding in basement!OMG loved this surprise!!
Eric's POV clearly depicted his state of mind n at d same time conditions of this underworld.Chand killed d Abraham;dat showed his real reckless n scary face!

Abhay's presence of mind is just mindblowing;his planning abt decieving chand n party were just hilarious.
So madhu did feel 4 Piya bt she understands Arnab too.True what honour has Piya brought 2 them by drinking n driving,going 2 rehab n finally getting pregnant at wedlock? N how much Arnab is supposed 2 do 4 her after giving her a name og father?She will try 2 find piya by hiring a pvt detective?
Oh I so much loved chand's POV;it showed how much we humans r selfish; we always find flaws in others bt want perfect 4 us! I understand how does it feel 2 see ur own story repeating 2 ur daughter n also conditions wud hav been diff if madhu wud hav given him 2nd chance bt he must understand ABHIYA R DIFFERENT! neither he was similiar 2 Abhay n nor madhu was similiar 2 Piya!
I wonder what wud happen in chand n Abhiya confrontation?

Finally tears broke d big walls around Abhay's heart build due 2 atrocities dat he endured from childhood n flowed like a river in flood.I soo much loved how Abhay vowed 2 protect piya n their bundle of love 4ever n give his child everything dat they never got!
OMG ABBY PROPOSED 2 PIE! Sooo cuute! N loved pia's cute ans too!
Cntinue asap.

****** EID MUBARAK TO U TOO DEAR *******🤗.
Edited by cutesukirti1987 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update.Uff that Chand...i just hope he wnt b able to harm Abhay..Pia wnt b able to bear the pain.Abhay wants to get married to Piya...aww.I hope Abhiya will get their share of happyness in their life and no more tragedies
Edited by Monami_50 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
TANZIE WHAT A MINDBLOWING EPI👏! 👏SOO BEAUTIFUL! ⭐️LAST PART IS MY FAV..😳.I MUST SAY ABHAY IS REALLY INTELLIGENT!😎 PIA IS ALSO CRAZY!😆 UFF THIS CHAND.😲..😡I HOPE NOTHING HAPPENS TO ABHIYA AND THE CHILD! AND WHY CHAND WANTS PIA TO TAKE THE SAME DICISION LIKE MADHU? 😡AND WHATS MISHA GONNA DO? 😕SO 4I STHE MARRAIGE NEXT UPDATE? 😉AND I AM SORRY FR NOT COMENTING ON ANY FFS I AM SO BUSY WITH STUDIES! 😳BUT I PRESS THE LIKE ALWAYS.😳..UPDATE SOON.😛
Edited by flora212 - 12 years ago

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