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Posted: 12 years ago
cOMMENT ON PG 40😊
Edited by koli97 - 12 years ago
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the update was grand and your way of writing just broke all the limits...ur updats never cease to amaze me!!! nw I really have no idea how grand and epic it can b in future..trust me...i mean 20yrs down the line,i dnt think ur writing will stop to amaze ur readers! its profound,splendid n always grand!! ā­ļø nt a single word that I said is false..i honestly mean it!!!

Ok now to the updat- every character here shined!! no matter hw small part it occupied it made its mark!! every turn of events is more important nw as the story is getting closer to its end and so in the last minute the emphasize on characters..their decision..their move..their thought process everything needs extra care..to give a lasting impression that will stay with us forever..and your way of explaining each character so carefully only ensured it.. nw am sure they are engraved in our mind forever!! n thats what's special about your writing!! bravo!! šŸ‘

the first part- Eric,a character nt so important yet made its mark even in the small space tht was allotted to him! his pov was apt for a man working in the underworld for his master. true, emotions,feelings are uninvited here,its the place of blood n bullet,or better say its the heaven of inhumanity..which only reflected through eric's pov! wonderful!! šŸ‘

Now chand- hm.. sometime you know it surprises me to think that chand is one inhuman,cold, brutal master of underworld,the reason he is far from being hollow or a person who has no understanding of emotions and feelings, is that he surely does have a better understanding and we saw that in his thoughts where he knew xctly what made him mad and also, that to abhay more important was pia,yet it didnot change his decision nor the way he is because thats sumthng which isnt possible after so many years or maybe it could have if..only if he had gotten the support of madhu..then mayb..it might had happened but thats a distant dream nw,so its nt much surprising on chands part but still as readers we have got so attached that on a certain level we do expect chand to show humanity atleast once though remembering his story I dnt think its possible bt still I hope..him to do sumthng that wud really amaze us n make us happy!
again a brilliant part!! šŸ‘


now madhu-
you know tanzie, three characters specially in this update, I found were indomitable in terms of nerve..just like steel from outside and in a deeper level emotional,vulnerable from inside, that could go to any length if he or she so wishes... and that makes each of them incredible n memorable.! n the credit goes to you!! šŸ‘ about madhu..um..lets say we dnt know her,i mean we dnt knw her as pia's mom ,and keeping aside the feelings for pia..i would say her pov neither made me love or respect her nor it forced me to hate her..because in certain ways she is right in her place n in certain places she isnt! true that she got the support of her husband arnab,who never really cared for pia or showered any love on her which I feel is no lesser than pia's track record infct its more low compared to it! and am nt saying ths becoz I adore pia i'm saying just becoz I felt it wasnt right on arnab's part to do so coz in all dis pia was innocent and I dnt see how a man who doesnt accept madhu's daughter n rather humiliates r nw n then can be a true man! so according to me madhu's pov is flawed! later though she decided to give a last try of being a gud mother bt still her thoughts which shows she knws, undrstnds everythng yet at the end that cud nt change her just like chand, leaves no place to appreciate her,becoz as a character there's hardly any upliftment we saw.. ! rather we saw a women who may have lead a more controlled lyf than pia bt is at fault in many ways! and yes a big round of applause for pulling the mental conflict n inner termoil of characters so well!! šŸ‘


pia- now here I dnt need to say much as we all knw already what really she is! her character here always portrays the toughness,sincerity,crazyness,recklessness. no nt becoz she is 1of my fav8 here bt becoz whatevr she might have been before in her early days has nothng to do wth today. though she was never really a bad persn at heart bt what I mean is after abhay came in her life she has changed n she has changd for gud!! 😊 her love her faith,madness for abhay only grows wth each passing day n we love her for that..n we always will! 😊 and thanks to u for coming up wth such a remarkable character,remarkable coz I think its easy to portray a character that is thoroughly gud bt hard to portray a character that slowly travels to light wth adamant difficulties n yet manages to garner the love n support of readers thats nt an easy task! bt you made this look so easy!!! wonderful!! šŸ‘




Abhay- ah..what should I say about him? he is just amazing!! lets forget he is the abhay whm we knw frm d show yet still we cannot help bt admire him! true he is nt flawless here bt what makes him n pia diffrnt frm chand n madhu is their improvement as humans. just like pia abhay has changd infact his change is more important considering his past though there was humanity buried sumwhere deep inside hm whch we saw many times frm saving pia to james n later when pia mentiond a grl in china town whom abhay had savd once that itself shows tht he wasnt what he was.. bt yes pia's appearance in his lyf brought back the old abhay that was lost sumwhere and this what makes these two characters truly memorable n fantastic!!! and again ur wonderful piece of writing made ths possible!! ā­ļø bravo!! šŸ‘


and ya I loved that part where abhay proposed pia,it was written so beautifully! abhay the killing machine was blushing and pia saying, was tht a way to propose, to whch abhay had showd hs inability to propose diffrntly n pia undrstndng at nce n to lighten the moment the thing she said next was even more sweeter that, cn she sit on hs lap even wen they grow old., n abhay smild n instantly nodded. beautiful!! 😊
oh..wait there's mre I shud mention before I end my essay(coz am sure it is), that is the part where we see abhay's guilt for nt being there for pia n their child. I luvd dis part coz of two reasons, one is for pia getting hm out frm hs insecurities and helping hm regain faith n hmslf as a human who has nt lost hs humanity nd was nthng like hs father. and secondly I luvd it becoz the way u describd everythng...ur painting of abhay's insecurities,hs pain,hs fear n later pia xplaining why he shudnt think abt all these..hw he isnt anythng n nthng lyk hs father..the depth..the conflict..the emotions,everythng that it showd was wonderful. ā­ļø truly a pleasure to read!! thanku tanzie. 😊 I must admit I had a wonderful time reading it. 😳 nw awaiting the next part..i knw u'r getting less time so updat when u can.. 😊



p.s. you knw usually it takes one and a half hour for me to comment in ur updats bt today it took two and a half hours!! unbelievable indeed!! šŸ˜† anyways sorry for writing an essay and once again magnificient updat, loved reading it. šŸ¤—
Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I had come to comment for your previous update but you are already planning for the next one. I must say my timing is wonderful šŸ˜†
So I will be brief..it was fantastic update and you are saying it wasnt good ?! Abhiya scenes are always heart touching..glad they are together now <3
Want to see chand's reaction when he comes back.

RES for next chapter šŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
what should i say Tanzie. the way you described everything was beautiful. I somehow don't have it in me to forgive madhu much, but i know sometimes a woman may be trapped like this. but still, i cant sympathize with her.
chand, chand, chand. is he out of his mind thinking of killing not just abhay but abhiya baby too. 😔
Tanzie, pls pls pls i request and order you both not to have a tragic ending for this one as abhay and pia have already gone through too much in their lives and now deserve the happiness which has always been denied to both of them. so no tragic endings please
Edited by ..dishu.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter updated page 38 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update tanzie. I lke it.Oh Eric was all scared.He shuld b coz chand is not in mood 2 forgive & forget. Abhiya r going Chand-Madhu way & still chand wnts Pia 2 choose path her mother chose which actually let him 2 become a underworld king? Pia followed her heart & if she would have been lke her MOM,Abhay would have become chand part 2. I dont know y chand wnts Abhay 2 suffer same pain lke he did or why he wnts her daughter 2 cry whn somewhere evn he know who crazily Abhay loves Pia. I agree Madhu was not able 2 prove herself as gud mother & this wht act as bridge gap b/w her & Pia

Oh poor Abhiya i felt bad 4 thm.Bothe never got chance 2 b loved by their respective father. They alway craved 4 love & hence find solace in each other arms still ppl r after him,after their love.I hope they both flew far away.Abhay is quite smart I must say with all GPS system + his Pia is also crazy. Oh they both deserve each other as both r equally passionate & crazy. Oh Abhay blushed while proposing Pia so cute .I loved tht last part
Plz cont..
Love u & eid mubarak 2 u toošŸ¤—
Edited by SheDevil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy eid tanzie.

wonderful update

how chand's men were scared of him speaks volume about his evilness and fear that he has instilled in his men.he did not even blinked once and shot abrahm and eric he knew he had to look out for himself even though he was hurt by his friend's death.

Madhu blames herself for turning chand into a heartless person but i think she did what a sane person would have done and arnab is totally right in his place...i don't hate him.You can't expect him to love pia unconditionally but still he could atleast have been a bit nicer to her.

I thought may be chand would care for pia after all she is his own daughter and he indeed was worried for her but now as i assume he wants to kill both abhay and pia even after knowing she is pregnant...he is such a cold hearted person...no wonder he has been lonely all his life. He did appreciate abhay though for beating him twice but was too biased saying he isn't good for pia...if only he knew that he is the best thing for pia.

Pia had indeed beaten abhay by miles in pulling of such dangerous stunt...they both desreve each other as they both are reckless, fearless when it comes to the other one.Poor abhay he wouldn't have thought that pia would do that to get him out...he surely underestimatd her courage and luv for him...he was so mad at her...and so cute too when he said plz don't do it again. Abhay made a basement in their house and pia was so surprised that she did not even knew about it.
The part where abhay cried was too emotional...all the emotions he had burried from a long time have came out in the form of tears and he can no longer controll them...it also tells how pia had affected him deeply.Pia consoling him and getting angry at him was sweet.He surely has got a firecracker of gf/would be wife.the proposal was typical abhay style...it was simple and indeed looked real...he was blushing proposing it to her and pia wanted to take that oppurtunity to tease him ...it was too cute. Pia understood him and pacified him and i lvd it when she said i will marry u if u agree to keep me like this.it was too beautifully written.

i hope they are able to get away from chand because for the time being he has been lead to LA but he will soon find out and will be more vengeful than before and yeah i do hope james survives and chand doesn't kill him.

i have written such a big comment...i guess its the longest i ever wrote ...thats only coz u wrote another fab update of another fab ff.
it was superb, brilliant,awsum.

thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I was 100% sure dat u will definetly update dis today as i was surely expecting it as a eid gift from u.thanx a lot for pm.it was really a big treat.wish u a v happy nd blessful eid.nw coming back to da update it was amazing to see abhyia re union.chand nd madhu r going through an emotional turmoil.chand is v cold hearted he didnt take a second in taking a life.seems like we r going to have abhyia marriage wow.cant wait for next update.continue soon.nd thanx a lot for pm. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eid mubarak tanzie šŸ¤— Marvelous update yar...madhu choose arnab over pia nd chand..he killed abraham nd nw wants to separate abhiya😔 no precap...? koi nai yar...anyways it was amazing ch😊

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