Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read i love this story of your
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
seriously tanzie u r my fav. writer no doubt... and love its great, its miracle, its devastation, its solace and i dont knw wat not but its god who rule and give power to rule but i dont knw y this word is difficult in practical... persnal experionss... forget dis actully me in love wid dis ff and abhiya... thanks 4 dis beautiful story its box of emotions... full of abstract noun...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!
I loved this chapter sooo much.
Finally ABHIYA are together...
MY heart wrenched in pain to see them suffering sooo much.
I'm so glad that they united now.
Piya's condition was so much heart-breaking..
Poor girl had a hard time believing that Abhay is finally back to her.
Abhay felt so bad for getting Pia in such a condition.
I still can't digest the fact that Piya really tried to commit suicide.
Gosh!! She loved Abhay soo much...
I wonder what Chand will do now.I hate Arnab.His daughter was sick and he was cursing her badly//I felt so bad for Pia.
Misha was so confused.I wish Abhay may not get into trouble coz of Misha.
Tanzie you are a marvelous writer dear.
Plz update the next part soonest Tanzie and plz do update Till the end of time as soon as possible.
love u
Take care!
Asma
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tanzie🤗
I'm so happy James decided to help Abhay with Pia's kidnapping. I understand where he was coming from and everything when he betrayed Abhay but I'm happy he got it off his shoulders now, to some extent. Call me biased but seeing AbhIya in such a pathetic condition does make me cringe and it was very very tough for me to be fair to James. I hate what he did but I cannot hate him for it and that required some effort on my part.
As much as I love AbhIya, I felt for Misha here. The total change which Abhay brought about in Pia was for the better and I'm sure she must've been relieved to see her BFF leave her darkness behind but I'm sure she never expected Pia to be so insanely in love with Abhay that she would take such an extreme step.
To a third party, the depth of AbhIya's feelings for each other is not only crazy but SCARY. It's scary to what extent they can go for each other, it's scary to think how much they can harm themselves for each other and above all, it's scary to see how they can forget the entire world just to be with each other. Misha has every right to freak out about what Pia was doing because she didn't think twice before lying to her best friend and putting herself in danger. If seeing a love which drives AbhIya to the point of self-destruction is not scary then I don't know what is.
Pia's life depends on Abhay's happiness, she cannot be happier if she sees Abhay live a life he deserves to lead with her. She can't live with herself knowing that Abhay is suffering so much. Threatening to immolate herself if Abhay doesn't come back to her doesn't seem like such a big deal for her because she doesn't want a life with no Abhay in it. Abhay, like any one of us, wants to live. But his every breath depends on Pia's heartbeats. The day Pia's heart stops beating, Abhay stops breathing. He runs to Pia not only to save her life but HIS as well. It agonises him to see Pia in so much of pain.
AbhIya's love is characterised by eternal sacrifice, selflessness, agony and devastation but what makes it epic for me is that grey tint of selfishness it has. Harming themselves aside, they can harm any person who hinders them from making sure that the other person gets the life he/she deserves. I didn't mention it in the last update, but seeing Pia and Abhay bash up James and Abraham respectively made me realise that these two might be the light of each other's lives but when it comes to doing what is right for their soulmate, they still have their dark shades.
I think Pia's heavenly reaction to seeing Abhay after all these months was beautiful; that whole relief and disbelief. After all that they've been through, they've finally found peace in each others' arms. It's stupid but I suddenly feel a ton lighter on my shoulders! When they're with each other, it's different feeling; something divine, something ethereal. Everything seems so right and complete. They just seem so...meant to be!
Do update soon, 'coz i'm dying to know about what happened in that time lapse! It will clear up a lot of things and you deserve a standing ovation for the way you write and portray everything👏.👏.👏
Edited by PurpleFairy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG dat was one hell of an update Tanzie!,,,,. I M SPEECHLESS!!!
It touched d innermost strings of my heart! Everything right from d Piya-Arnab confrontation to Misha's reaction 2wards d Piya's condition,Piya's state of mind before attempting suicide,James' POV,Abhay kidnapping Piya n finally ABHIYA REUNION was so realistic dat i cud imagine everything happening in front of my eyes! HATS OFF TO U 4 WRITING SUCH A PIECE OF WORK!!! OR I WUD BETTER SAY CREATING SUCH A PIECE!
i m nt shocked at Arnab's rxn at Piya's condition.I mean every common father wud react like dat.Bt i m thoroughly disappointed with Madhu;she didnt have guts 2 say anything 2 him when he was insulting her daughter!
Misha as expected was disappointed with Piya's behavior dat she never trusted their frenship 2 share her pains.
Bt is there any chance dat Police may come out wid Abhay's photo n Misha might recognize it?
Loved James POV.So true his condition was like an insect with human weaknesses.He finally helped Abhay 2 kidnap Piya under d nose of whole security system😉 n ya loved his view abt Master's timing too as if he wud hav been here he wud certainly never let Abhiya reunite!

Last most Beautiful part;ABHIYA REUNION.Everything was soo realistic,immensely emotional,heart touching n sooo artistically depicted dat it brought tears in my eyes.Finally Piya's love brought tears in Abhay's eyes too!
Everything from Piya's hallucination 2 d overflowing emotions dat they felt after returning 2 their heaven dat is each other's arms was just Mindblowing.
Next Update Abhiya marriage! YAY! Already eager 4 it.
Edited by cutesukirti1987 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update tanzie, 👏
u portrayed evry1 feelings perfectly,⭐️
misha, james, arnab, abhay n pia,
fantabulous i must say , 👏
madhu- i can't imagine can mothers be lik dat shez horrible 😡
loved abhiya moments😳 n
off course m jst dying to know chand's reaction over dis😆
pls do nxt update quickly, m sure all ur reader r in same condition, jst dying 4 nxt update😉🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow superb update!!!!👏
abhiya's meeting was described beautifully. i read it twice n cried while reading it...it was so emotional...i felt their pain n joy of their togetherness.
brilliant piece of writing!!!!⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
How can u manage to portray emotions so beautifully tanzi?!misha's trust on abhay is enuf to mark the depth of abhia's love..i so liked james here.I mean how hez wondering and straightforwardly accepting abhay's 'anything-for-pia' things,just like an adolescent.Abhia's reunion..gosh i wonder if anything is left for me to speak on that.Pia's hard acceptance to abhay's presence,assurance of abhay,those kisses..uff..hats off mahn!!i mean u made it so realistic!der eyes spoke volumes n tats the thing i loved da most!dat hairwala dialog was so cute..pia ka supermodel gene express ho raha hai..means sab normal hai..lol..i just cant wait 4 chand's encounter vd abhia..cntinue soon:-)
Edited by darkcocoa_renu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
tanziee ufff i cant describe in words yar ...too emotional update...fab update...the way piya felt aout abhay and how she fought with arnab and then misha cried and the way abhay shown in front of james and asked in cold voice ...the way piya felt abhay a dream and said i die peacefully and how abhay chanting her name and the face to face teary talk of abhiya tooo gud ...great part...cont soon now
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Posted: 12 years ago
sry fr let comment! thax fr pm! & nw cm to d update! its superably awsm! finally abhiya mil gye! i luved it! hats off to u! feeling bad fr misha! amazing update! waiting fr next 1!

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