Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26)

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Happy EID...wahooo lovely update😊Nxt update Abhiya meet...egarly wait 4 it😊...Xcited 4 wht happen Pia-Chand meeting😊sooo lovely😊

Edited by koli97 - 13 years ago

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

😔milke bhi hum Na mile ...poor abhiya fab update and ya waiting for next update ...
P.S how was ur eid

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

happy eid tanzie.have a grt one.

what an update tanzie...it was outstanding.it seems as if it was a roller coaster ride.

even chand and his men are impressed by pia's courage as they were literally shocked to see pia's message where she answered them back. she surely proved she indeed is his daughter!!!!

they r indeed such cruel ppl they killed her dog so brutally...thats disgusting.

ryan is such a moron i really did not think he would do something like this but u just cannot trust anyone out there and pia has learned that lesson hard way.

abhay knows pia is here for him and he wants her to know that he died just to keep her safe even though it would break his heart into millions of pieces.Both abhay and pia r extreme kind of ppl ready to go to any extent for each other.

the last part of update was simply fab pia meets chand...just can't wait to read about their first encounter. m sure pia would stun him more.

thanks for pm...it was awsum!!!!!!

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Eid Mubarak to u too tanzie🤗

coming to the update...absolutely mind-blowing...after each update u make me think it just can't get any better and with the next update u prove me wrong!! wow...u'r updates make each scene and character leap out fro the page...its an absolute pleasure reading ur writing...⭐️

wow...a super duper happening chapter...abhiya's telepathic connection always gives me goosebumps when i read them...and oh tanz...those parts were so so emotional!!!😭

finally finally...abhay knows that piya is in chinatown..in fact very near him...and as per ur precap, he'll know very soon that she is pregnant with his child...wow...can't wait for his reaction to that...

piya came face to face with chand...at last...father-daughter...can't wait to read their confrontation...

u give such a realistic picture of the underworld that i am speechless.⭐️...this is a perfect dark love story..hats off👏

Edited by ..tora.tangled. - 13 years ago

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Eid Mubarak 2 u too dear..
awesome update..
loved it..
thanxx for d pm..

Edited by Cute_Gal - 13 years ago

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

EID mubaraq to u too😳
coming to the update it was just mindblowing😎
omg the killed bixie i loved that dog... they are so cruel😡 atlast chand & piya met😉 i hope they do not find about piya being pregnent waiting for abhiya meeting😳 continu soon...

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

First of all eid mubarak ho, hope u enjoyed it. Thank u for giving us such a wonderful eid gift, actually not one, two, one this update and second the news that u are continuing writting, I am so happy can't explain u, how happy I am feeling now.
Now coming to the update don't know what to say yaar as always u made me speechless. It was extremely beautiful yet emotional. Just amazing, and perfect, the way it should have been. I feel so bad for abhiya both are in so much pain, I am happy finally abhay knows that piya is in china town but mil ke bhi nahi mile sach mein, hope they meet soon. Poor bixie, I feel so bad for that innocent animal, really u are showing us true glimpses of mafia world. Last part was thrillar wow chand and piya's encounter, and that ryan😡 good ke chand killed him, now I am eagerly waiting for next part. Finally abhay will know abt his child, wow I am just excited, plz update asap. Once more just brilliant work, hats off to u, really u are a god blessed writer.

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Eid Mubarak to you Tanz.. 🤗 May This Eid fill your life with lots and lots of Happiness..! 🤗

Coming to the update.. you made me cry once again..! 😭
Awww Abhiya.. they are so incomplete without each other..! 😭
Chand does care for Piya.. isn't it..? I somewhere felt it today..! 😳

And.. and.. and.. Abhay asked James to tell Piya that he is dead..!?! 😲 😭 I hope Piya doesn't believe James and do something wrong..!
And.. what did the poor dog do that those monsters killed him..? Awwh.. I loved Bixie re..!
The end was supposed to scare me I think.. 😆 but I was all 'awww' at Dad - Daughter encounter..! 😆 Afterall.. Chand saved her from Ryan.. 😳 whatever might be his real intentions.. but.. please.. don't make him do anything to Piya, her baby or Abhay.. please.. 😃

The Precap.. it made my day..!! 😳 Abhay getting to know about Piya and her baby and he going to her.. Awww... 😳

Can't wait any longer for the next update..!! Please Update soon..!

And.. THANK YOU for this wonderful Eid Gift..!!! 🤗

Once Again.. Eid Mubarak.. 🤗

Edited by Divya6696 - 13 years ago