Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 10

Wish You a Very Happy Eid Mubarak Dear ,i am glad that you are back dear ,just amazing up date ,waiting for abhiya and piya and her father meeting thanks for pm

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read keep going it's really good
thanks for the pm

o sweet tanzie i beg u let d lovers meet plz plz plz dey already suffered alot plz plz plz wow finally chand and pia meet but he knw again abt her and dis bas... ryan gud he diead and next part sound interstng dat abhay find abt his baby and want to meet her, u knw wat anythng happen to my love dan i becm crzy and kill evryon includng me but pia is realy bold i luv dis pia n abhay is in such pain want to make her beliv dat he was dead but she is strong soul plz dont make sad endng n reunite dem

FIRST OF ALL******EID MUBARAK****** 2 U.

COMING 2 D UPDATE IT WAS SIMPLY INCREDIBLE TANZIE!
Piya piya piya what should i say abt her? Abhay's love has made her totally diff woman.She has reincarnated in2 a total TIGRESS.
Her every action is so desperate n foccussed on her very goal i.e 2 get Abhay back n she is literally going through hell 2 get him back.
I hate that Ryan😡 in fact i hate every male who treats females as a mere object of pleasure n use n through thing😡.
Poor bixie😭 i felt soo bad 4 her.Poor animal paid thru its life 4 no fault of it.But it is just nothing 4 those savages.
I knew it dat stupid traitor so called Abhay's friend who destroyed d Paradise of Abhiya in a sec. Bt how could Abhay do this 2 Piya? He knows she can never move on without him n if she lives it would be d life of a living dead.He still wants 2 convey d message of his death 2 her!

Chand's encounter with Piya;waiting 4 their confrontation.

Next Update has a ray of Light.Abhay will come 2 of his baby n go 2 meet Piya.wow! Can't wait 4 it!
Update soon!

Outstanding update tanzie !!

You showed the real face of mafia world.. The writing was just par excellence. hats off.. Why dont you publish a novel of your own ? I swear by the name of god that I mean it !

I felt so very bad for bixie ! Aww :'(
Why did you kill her ? :'(

My god.. Ryan turned out to be such a ba***** ! Yuck.. Why do such men take girls like a thing of pleasure.. :-/

Abhay wants piya to move on ! How can he even think of this. Mr abhay,he needs you damit..! But I know he is thinking only of her safety. Aww my abhay and piya are not so far. Still they cant meet.. :'(

So excited for piya-chand encounter. And wow..abhay will know that piya is pregnant ! Yippe..

Once again that was a fantastic update.. *hugs*
I am loving you more and more day by day..hihi :P

FIrstly Eid mubarak..i m also a muslim so i know so much fun we had today..
So,update is really really described..i really love the way u wrote i mean i m very very impressed by ir writing..i wanna become lile u..
Abhiya both r in pain they miss each other but it depends on their fait..all POV,s r amazing..so,chand is a villian or ??
Update sooon asap'
Precap seem interesting...nothing happen with my abhiya..

Tanzie you killed Bixie! How could you???
I kind of expected Eric to spill the beans to Abhay because he seems rather like.., well Ern from Enid Blyton's Mystery series, you know?
Oh I hope Pia shoots Chand right under Abhay's nose. Idiot kahinka... Thinking of telling her she is dead.

Oh and happy Eid Mubarak, and I can't believe I'm so late, congo on being a sizzler.

EID MUBARK TO U N HEENADI TOO...

Outstanding..brillient...awesome update tanzie...LOVE U.

aww poor bixie..hw could they yr...emotional..my poor abhiya..

nw abhay know pia is near him n chand also meet..wow.

waing fr nxt update egarly..

want to give u AWARD FOR BEST FF WRITER vTH all too..

u r jst MINBLOWING fr each n evry word of writing...love u tanzie.

Eid Mubarak tanzie