Tanzie what r u made of yaar? 😲 Honestly I wish I knew. I always used to say that u should pen down a script for one of our shows but well this time I'd say u can pen it down for a hollywood flick 👏 This was definitely of an international standard n whether u believe me or not, I mean each n every single word I say The darkness about the mafia world was depicted realistically. I was reminded of Scarface actually.
Right from the first frame u had me hooked. So I suppose Dami got into trouble for giving info to Pia 🤔 That could be the only explaination for her absence. Hope she's safe though. Pia surely has it bad Its tough for her to go abt her mission in her current state n her fears were justified too coz nobody will spare her if the truth abt her pregnancy is out in the open. As there's no way Abhay will ever think of leaving Pia if he learns about that 😃 Also nobody there will stop to think for a moment before killing anybody, such is the brutality abt being a part of it
Pia may have done a brilliant job trying to conceal her identity while looking out for Abhay but there was no way she could keep it a secret from them. When ur dealing with people from the underworld no amount of caution can keep u away from their radar for long n it was obvious they would catch up with her one fine day. Abhraham got to know that she is in China Town n he also knows she's been sick. But for how long can Pia keep her preganancy from showing up? I somehow have a feeling that will be out before them much before Abhay gets to know it n I am really scared for Pia now Hope Abhay elopes with her before they catch up with them again. Chand instructed him to not harm Pia. Hmmm. So does that mean somewhere deep down he does care for his daughther after all? 😕 The part abt Chand asking him to give out a warning was typical mafia style 👍🏼 Brilliant move but the outcome as expected was disastrous 🤢
Poor Bixie 😭 Tanzie u know I love dogs 😭 Do u have any idea how distraught I felt on reading tat part? 😭 I cried for more than an hour after watching Marley & Me n ur update broke my heart 😭 I remembered all the moments Pia had spent with Bixie - when it got jealous of Abhay bcoz he got more attention from her, when it barked at him when he was leaving the place pleading him not to go for Pia's sake, when Abhay called him a lazy dog seeing him dozing off on the sofa when he came back from work, n when it had been Pia's only companion in her lonely world before and after Abhay Gosh, that poor animal had done nothing to deserve such a horrific fate 😭 But wat else can u expect from those b******s 😡? Arghhh, I hate them 🤢
Pia surely had guts to reply them like tat but I applaud her for that 👏 The part abt Pia n Abhay missing each other was heartbreaking 🥺 Pia is going through all the pain by herself when all she needed at this moment was the father of her child beside her who is suffering in his own hell 😭 Loved the way u portrayed them pining for each other 👏 Outstanding piece of writing ⭐️
Now that Chand realised Pia wont budge he targetted Madhu 😡 Arghhh I hate this man! He is so callous 🤢 But Pia made a smart move by fooling his cronies by feinting to move to LA. But her father is two steps ahead of her. Of course he knew his daughter was faking it
Abhay knows Pia is looking out for him n I so wanted him to shoot tat traitor James 😡 But even if James hadn't given him away I suppose Chand would have eventually caught up with him Poor Abhay 😭 I am sure his heart broke into a million pieces when he asked James to tell Pia that he was killed. Its not so easy for anyone to let go of a loved one. I am only waiting for him to get to know about his child. Am sure after that nothing can ever keep them apart 😃
Pia finally encountered her real father? 😲 Waiting eagerly for their confrontation n its outcome. Am sure its gonna be extremely intense.
Kudos for that brilliant update Tanzie 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Now that u have given a spoiler in the precap I am waiting eagerly for the next part n please please do update this as soon as u get time 😃
Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago
