Mini FF Bk2:My Beautiful Disaster(Last chapter,pg85,April 26) - Page 13

Originally posted by: flora212

wow tanzie...mind blowing!!! eid mubarak to u too.. .ah i am loving the way u r moving!!! but i felt crying fr bixie!!! poor her😭( wait bixie ladki thi na😕😆) that bloody b****ered!!! arrrggghh...oh abhay saying to pia that he is dead was heartwreaching!!! u hv really well described the emotions fr both abhay and pia... and chand..ah he can deny but i guess he stiill has soft corner fr pia!!! now waiting fr the real conversation of chand and pia... and ofcourse waiting fr interesting precape!!! update sooonnn 🤣

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Tanzie what r u made of yaar? 😲 Honestly I wish I knew. I always used to say that u should pen down a script for one of our shows but well this time I'd say u can pen it down for a hollywood flick 👏 This was definitely of an international standard n whether u believe me or not, I mean each n every single word I say The darkness about the mafia world was depicted realistically. I was reminded of Scarface actually. Now that was too much... you always have to embarrass me like this and 😕 i tried to maintain the essence of true mafia story.. all inspired from Godfather...

Right from the first frame u had me hooked. So I suppose Dami got into trouble for giving info to Pia 🤔 That could be the only explaination for her absence. Hope she's safe though. Pia surely has it bad Its tough for her to go abt her mission in her current state n her fears were justified too coz nobody will spare her if the truth abt her pregnancy is out in the open. As there's no way Abhay will ever think of leaving Pia if he learns about that 😃 Also nobody there will stop to think for a moment before killing anybody, such is the brutality abt being a part of it nope demi left because she was terrified. she knows the truth of this world a lot better than Pia so she was terrified she blurted out some secret to Pia for which she n her daughter could be killed so she ran away. Abhay will never think of leaving Pia after learning she is expecting his child...

Pia may have done a brilliant job trying to conceal her identity while looking out for Abhay but there was no way she could keep it a secret from them. When ur dealing with people from the underworld no amount of caution can keep u away from their radar for long n it was obvious they would catch up with her one fine day. Abhraham got to know that she is in China Town n he also knows she's been sick. But for how long can Pia keep her preganancy from showing up? I somehow have a feeling that will be out before them much before Abhay gets to know it n I am really scared for Pia now Hope Abhay elopes with her before they catch up with them again. Chand instructed him to not harm Pia. Hmmm. So does that mean somewhere deep down he does care for his daughther after all? 😕 The part abt Chand asking him to give out a warning was typical mafia style 👍🏼 Brilliant move but the outcome as expected was disastrous 🤢 Pia cant hide her pregnancy for long and abhay will be the last to know that. you are right and next update story will take another leap when her pregnancy will be more visible. and yes, having the blood relation work. chand has some soft corner for pia...

Poor Bixie 😭 Tanzie u know I love dogs 😭 Do u have any idea how distraught I felt on reading tat part? 😭 I cried for more than an hour after watching Marley & Me n ur update broke my heart 😭 I remembered all the moments Pia had spent with Bixie - when it got jealous of Abhay bcoz he got more attention from her, when it barked at him when he was leaving the place pleading him not to go for Pia's sake, when Abhay called him a lazy dog seeing him dozing off on the sofa when he came back from work, n when it had been Pia's only companion in her lonely world before and after Abhay Gosh, that poor animal had done nothing to deserve such a horrific fate 😭 But wat else can u expect from those b******s 😡? Arghhh, I hate them 🤢 I know pets are very important for people who nurture them, treats them as family Mandy and thats exactly why i showed how they can warn Pia starting from the pet then to family members. i was on tears while i wrote that part

Pia surely had guts to reply them like tat but I applaud her for that 👏 The part abt Pia n Abhay missing each other was heartbreaking 🥺 Pia is going through all the pain by herself when all she needed at this moment was the father of her child beside her who is suffering in his own hell 😭 Loved the way u portrayed them pining for each other 👏 Outstanding piece of writing ⭐️ thank you. abhay is going to compensate by taking extra care of her once he finds her... their reunion will be myriad of love and emotions.i will try my best to make it EPIC ❤️

Now that Chand realised Pia wont budge he targetted Madhu 😡 Arghhh I hate this man! He is so callous 🤢 But Pia made a smart move by fooling his cronies by feinting to move to LA. But her father is two steps ahead of her. Of course he knew his daughter was faking it yes chand already knows pia was faking...

Abhay knows Pia is looking out for him n I so wanted him to shoot tat traitor James 😡 But even if James hadn't given him away I suppose Chand would have eventually caught up with him Poor Abhay 😭 I am sure his heart broke into a million pieces when he asked James to tell Pia that he was killed. Its not so easy for anyone to let go of a loved one. I am only waiting for him to get to know about his child. Am sure after that nothing can ever keep them apart 😃 james is going to face the wrath of pia... wait and watch 😆

Pia finally encountered her real father? 😲 Waiting eagerly for their confrontation n its outcome. Am sure its gonna be extremely intense.

Kudos for that brilliant update Tanzie 👏 Now that u have given a spoiler in the precap I am waiting eagerly for the next part n please please do update this as soon as u get time 😃 i will update tomorrow if possible... 😳

Originally posted by: luckdiya

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1st of all eid mubarak 2 u 2:))

another incredible updt

finally piya gt exposed in 4nt of dem ...i salutes her courageous act ...

d way she responded 2 d msg ws shocking 4 me😲 felt 2 bad 4 abhay😭 hw could he????...he mst b thinkin abt her only

dat frnd of piya😡 he gt wht he deserved hw dare he...?

u knw wht wht my mom read ur updt (dis 1 only)😆

she is really impressed 😃 i told her d whole stry wid edit version offcourse 😆😆 dat clearly means u hv gt a more fan in my mom😆

god bless u 🤗

Originally posted by: SheDevil

First of all Eid Mubarak 2 u too Tanzie😳

Awesome update.I so loved it.It was full action packed update.

Pia's pregancy will soon b visible & Abhiya r insane in love.Pia is leaving no stone un turned 2 find her Abhay & Abhay is begging 2 tell Pia he is dead months back.And last scene was wow.So Finally Pia met Chand.Lets c wht chand will do 2 his daughter.Cant wait 4 another update.

Love u🤗

Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya

hey taniz di EID MUBARAK!! 😊
thax fr pm!! nw cm to d update!! nice update!! poor pia & abhay!!😭 feeling sad fr them!! i hope chand pia ko kuch na kre!! bloody b*****d ryan!! 😡 chand ki jgh abhay hota na to uske andar ek boond bhi khoon nhi rehta!! bt i must say pia is so smart & brave!! 😊 next 1 update soon!!

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

o sweet tanzie i beg u let d lovers meet plz plz plz dey already suffered alot plz plz plz wow finally chand and pia meet but he knw again abt her and dis bas... ryan gud he diead and next part sound interstng dat abhay find abt his baby and want to meet her, u knw wat anythng happen to my love dan i becm crzy and kill evryon includng me but pia is realy bold i luv dis pia n abhay is in such pain want to make her beliv dat he was dead but she is strong soul plz dont make sad endng n reunite dem

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Tanzie you killed Bixie! How could you???
I kind of expected Eric to spill the beans to Abhay because he seems rather like.., well Ern from Enid Blyton's Mystery series, you know?
Oh I hope Pia shoots Chand right under Abhay's nose. Idiot kahinka... Thinking of telling her she is dead.

Oh and happy Eid Mubarak, and I can't believe I'm so late, congo on being a sizzler.

Originally posted by: -PX.FF.PM-

Now that was too much... you always have to embarrass me like this and 😕 i tried to maintain the essence of true mafia story.. all inspired from Godfather...

I honestly felt I was reading a mafia novel n not a fan fic n I truly mean it

nope demi left because she was terrified. she knows the truth of this world a lot better than Pia so she was terrified she blurted out some secret to Pia for which she n her daughter could be killed so she ran away. Abhay will never think of leaving Pia after learning she is expecting his child... Yep eagerly waiting for Abhay to meet Pia n find out about his baby 😳

Pia cant hide her pregnancy for long and abhay will be the last to know that. you are right and next update story will take another leap when her pregnancy will be more visible. and yes, having the blood relation work. chand has some soft corner for pia... Oh gosh 😲 So even Chand will get to know before Abhay is it? I hope he doesn do anything to Pia but knowing that man anything is possible 🤢

I know pets are very important for people who nurture them, treats them as family Mandy and thats exactly why i showed how they can warn Pia starting from the pet then to family members. i was on tears while i wrote that part Esp for a person like who loves animals 😭 For some reasons I prefer loving a dog over a human being 😛 U can love a dog for just a moment n show some kindness to it n it will be by your side for the rest of its life 😊 But u can love a human for all your life but it wont take a min for them to turn their back on u 🤢

thank you. abhay is going to compensate by taking extra care of her once he finds her... their reunion will be myriad of love and emotions.i will try my best to make it EPIC ❤️ I am 200% sure it'll be epic 👍🏼

yes chand already knows pia was faking... Aakhir beti kiski hain 😆

james is going to face the wrath of pia... wait and watch 😆 I hope she does a proper dhulai 🤣

i will update tomorrow if possible... Hope tomo comes soon

Originally posted by: koli97

Happy EID...wahooo lovely update😊Nxt update Abhiya meet...egarly wait 4 it😊...Xcited 4 wht happen Pia-Chand meeting😊sooo lovely😊