::SANDS OF TIME - Book 2:: Note and Request on Pg 46 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luckdiya

luved it

indu & tora gud job grls...
really impressed ... abhay dnt wnt 2 hurt her dats y he is keep maintaining a distance

thanx diya😊

Originally posted by: spn-abhay

awesumm update indu n tora

just loved it
abhiya moments were awesum
n dat dream invaded part was also written beautifully
datw as rocking n loved abhay's possesiveness
continue soon
n pplz pm me the next time u update

glad u enjoyed reading it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99

amazing guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!just loved it esp. the bro's👏so finally sum1 is with pia...

thanx meera😊

Originally posted by: kuttu

Hi

Its been a while since I have read this fanfic and another thread has also come up. I had to catch up with the story. I should say it is turning into very interesting plot.glad u r liking it..

Pia is now a mere human but the angles still hold a power over her and is there going to be rift between them because of Pia. she might have given her heart to a vampire but by reading the story I feel The angels did have a big hand in turning Abhay into what he is today. So will they see that as a wrong done in the past to let go of Pia. Or is it that Pia will have to come back to them for Abhay.let's see how abhiya's story is written here..

It seems to be tragic situation any ways.Waiting to see how the story is going to build up. But loved the tranformation of the beast / monster Abhay into something else. shows he does have traces of the old Abhay. So Pia has succeded in one way I guess.yes, abhay does have a beautiful inner self, and piya is helping in bringing that out But the emotional turmoil of the human was well portrayed in the last part. Something which she never must have felt before.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: matwamango

it was breath taking. I was transported into the story itself. I felt every emotion both Abhay and felt. U girls are rocking this FF. thank u soo much ayesha😳..we r soo glad that everyone liked the update..
I must admit i am feeling like i have big shoes to fill in now because the standards are so high. I just hope my update is half as good as yours.aww..don't say that...we r no match for ur fabulous storytelling capabilities😊

Both of U did an ACE JOB!!! The way you've portrayed Abhay's angst right down to Pia's dreams and those Dark Angels are right on their trail.glad we could bring the emotions out well😊

Its a breath of fresh air having new BLOOD in this FF. Makes it more interesting to drop by and read epic works from writers i have had no contact with before.thank u once more...we absolutely enjoyed writing for this fabulous ff😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Super duper update indu n tora 👏, hats off 2 u ppl 4n writing such a beautiful n outstanding update,

thank u😊

Originally posted by: masaf57

awesome update loved it thanks for the pm!

thank u😊

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal

awesome update..
gr8..
very well written..
thanxx for d pm..

thank u😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

wow awesome update!!!!!!!!
loved it

thank u😊

Originally posted by: Pavi.Dravid119

beautiful update Tora n Indu

thank u😊

Originally posted by: bellaaa

tora and indu superb update yar
loved the abhiya moments
hope johan and nolan save their sister
great work guys
cont soon

glad u enjoyed it beenish😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow wow girls what a update ufff
I can't believe that u girls are writing in this ff for the first time. Omg just amazing, brilliant, awesome, superb and don't know what more to say.
The way u both described everything just made me speechless yaar, simply too good. Loved the way abhay controlled the beast in himself, it was just b'fully written and expressed. Each and every abhiya moment was simply amazing. So now I guess ariana is gonna help the brothers to save piya, let's see what more twist and turns are coming on the way.
Update asap and once more gr8 job girls!!!
And I am really very sorry for commenting so late guys, plz pardon me for that
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Posted: 12 years ago
Looks like i'm next on the roster to UPDATE and i hope U guys like what i have in store for U. But this update will have to wait until the weekend i'm afraid i am getting the logistics down first plus i have 2 FF's pending after this i will definitely update for sure.

Romance and Danger is what's in store. So a little teaser for U all who is lurking in the shadows is it an Angel or the ...????????????😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

wow wow wow girls what a update ufff
I can't believe that u girls are writing in this ff for the first time. Omg just amazing, brilliant, awesome, superb and don't know what more to say.
The way u both described everything just made me speechless yaar, simply too good. Loved the way abhay controlled the beast in himself, it was just b'fully written and expressed. Each and every abhiya moment was simply amazing. So now I guess ariana is gonna help the brothers to save piya, let's see what more twist and turns are coming on the way.
Update asap and once more gr8 job girls!!!
And I am really very sorry for commenting so late guys, plz pardon me for that

aww...thanks a lot romi...glad you liked it. 😳 yes,abhay is trying his best,coz he loves pia beyond anything n everything else...😊 its ok dear. no worries. 😊 n thanks for this lovely comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Tora & indu.It was so damm gud.It was blend of romance,passion,sentiments,care,fear,evi.Wow
I loved Abhiya love confrontation.They were too good.Abhay kissing Pia twice & both time losing his control but Pia still has faith on her knight Armour .Dark angel intruded Pia's dream & Abhay seems firm 2 ruin all who will come b/w his love.
Oh love johnan & Ryan convo.One wnts 2 help his sister & other prefer duties over blood
Plz cont..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
U guys were brilliant!! Sorry for the LATE reply but I have come online after like a month I guess!! But u guys are amazing!! All I can say is PERFECT *Madhuri Dixit style*!
-Gauri

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

3 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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