::SANDS OF TIME - Book 2:: Note and Request on Pg 46

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

awesome updt Tora & Indu

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

luved it

indu & tora gud job grls...

really impressed ... abhay dnt wnt 2 hurt her dats y he is keep maintaining a distance

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

awesumm update indu n tora

just loved it

abhiya moments were awesum

n dat dream invaded part was also written beautifully

datw as rocking n loved abhay's possesiveness

continue soon

n pplz pm me the next time u update

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

comment updated on page 24

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ilove99

@ilove99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

amazing guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!just loved it esp. the bro's👏so finally sum1 is with pia...

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Its been a while since I have read this fanfic and another thread has also come up. I had to catch up with the story. I should say it is turning into very interesting plot.Pia is now a mere human but the angles still hold a power over her and is there going to be rift between them because of Pia. she might have given her heart to a vampire but by reading the story I feel The angels did have a big hand in turning Abhay into what he is today. So will they see that as a wrong done in the past to let go of Pia. Or is it that Pia will have to come back to them for Abhay. It seems to be tragic situation any ways.Waiting to see how the story is going to build up. But loved the tranformation of the beast / monster Abhay into something else. shows he does have traces of the old Abhay. So Pia has succeded in one way I guess. But the emotional turmoil of the human was well portrayed in the last part. Something which she never must have felt before.

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

it was breath taking. I was transported into the story itself. I felt every emotion both Abhay and felt. U girls are rocking this FF. I must admit i am feeling like i have big shoes to fill in now because the standards are so high. I just hope my update is half as good as yours.

Both of U did an ACE JOB!!! The way you've portrayed Abhay's angst right down to Pia's dreams and those Dark Angels are right on their trail.

Its a breath of fresh air having new BLOOD in this FF. Makes it more interesting to drop by and read epic works from writers i have had no contact with before.