::SANDS OF TIME - Book 2:: Note and Request on Pg 46 - Page 18

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Indu n Tora what stuff r u guys made of? 😲 Manasa salutes you both 👍🏼 No way on earth can anybody say u guys r doing the 1st update for an FF that has already gone past 21 updates 👏 Brilliant 👏 U guys literally rendered me speechless with this brilliant piece of writing 👏 Hats off to u guys 👏 Loved the way u guys caught onto the essence of the FF in the very first go ⭐️ Marvelous, stupendous, brilliant, mindblowing, outstanding - and man I have now exhausted all my adjectives as well omg!! stop..stop..dear..u flatter us too much mansa..😆.but thanks for this lovely comment...glad we could do justice to the story.😳

From the start to the end - it was WOW ⭐️ Loved Abhay's possessiveness over Pia n their lil moment 😳 followed by a passionate one ☺️ It was damn good. Expressed beautifully 😊 The part where the dark angels invaded Pia's dreams was penned down wonderfully 👏 Pia giving herself to Abhay and Abhay controlling his thirst was written superbly 👏 Then the last bit with Johan, Nolan n Ryan was rocking 👏 I hope Arriana will now be on Pia's side 😳 thanks mansa.😳 i hope so dear...well it depends on you all..😛

I can't say how proud I feel over myself for having convinced u guys to get on board for Sands of Time 😃 Thank u so much n welcome to the family 🤗 no need to thank us. it's our pleasure dear. 😳 n once again thanks for such a long n beautiful comment..🤗

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

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First of all, Indu and Tora you girls have done an outstanding job... 👏 👏 👏 thank you tanzie..😳 it doesnt even seem you wrote a chapter for this FF for the first time, its brilliant and perfect... so proud of you 🤗 well what can i say tanzie..that's really a huge compliment...😳

I am having tension again for keeping the standard of this FF which is written by such brilliant writers... I need to gear up myself and try better 😳 oh..com'on now u'r exagerrating dear..😳

It was a pleasure seeing the vulnerable Abhay for the first time, the Angel Pia has come a long way to see this day and now here she is. they are in love with head over heels with each other and since once Abhay has accepted Pia, the dark angels, demons everyone better watch out. because if anyone dares to cross the path of Pia, surely the angel in disguise of demon Abhay will rip them apart their love is so poignant and how beautiful you guys wrote is 👏 ya abhay cares for nothing but pia now..we tried our best..glad you liked it..😳

I felt so disgusted with the angels... politics doesnt leave anyone it seems 😆 and oh god, im afraid about Abhiyas privacy 😆 they keep sneaking on moments they shouldn't 😉 So arianna is gonna help Ryan, Johan and other brothers of Pia is it? I hope she does because there's good in bad in all the species. be it humans, angels, demons and even animals. so when on one side, there's angels who are manipulative and power hungry, there are others who are good and selfless as well... yaa...the angels just love to sneak in..😆 hmm..ya..i guess so. it depends on you all though. 😉

and you guys can reply everyone... wonderful job people 👏 thanks again dear..😳

Originally posted by: Monami_50

Superb update.Abhiya confession...awsm.Darn those dark angels

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

STUPENDOFABULOUS UPDATE!!!! thank u...glad u liked it😊..

Abhay's love 4 Piya n his desperate try 2 win over bloodlust reminded me of dat shirtless hug epi of d show n d dialogue"Mera pyaar mujhse zyada strong hai".

So Angels invaded d dreams of Piya 2 warn her of d consequenses of loving a demon.Bt Abhay's warning or threat was dangerous"they wud 4get lucifer n remember Abhay only!". yup abhay can do anything for the one he loves..

Johan will help his sister n Arianna will join him bt Is she truly concerned or is she only pretending?
lets see what ariana does..
d Lovestory has no doubt started bt Dangers hav also started coming bt THIS IS HOW D DARK LOVE STORY OF ABHIYA GOES! IT CAN NEVER BE SIMPLE N SMOOTH;DANGERS R AN INTEGRAL PART! yes this is how abhiya's story has always been...but this makes them more EPIC😃
Continue asap.

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Beautiful is how I would describe this. Indu and Tora, you guys make a superb team and how!

Loved every bit from the dream to the convos. So Arriana will help Johan to save her...I'm glad for that!

This is your first update here right? If so...you guys are really doing a fab job!!!!

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

u knw wat tora and indu its jinga la la update... really a great work... from long time waiting to see dis side of abhay... now hope ryan soon justify wats right and wats wrong and johan, nolan nd arrian is going to help pia... gud job duo...

Originally posted by: vmpy

Great work.actually im lacking in words to praise ur efforts.thanx a lot for pm and continue soon. ⭐️