::SEQUEL BOOK 2::ETERNALLY YOURS::June 2013 pg 55

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

wow great story pl\z update soon
it'a an amazing story to read

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

I am waiting on some inspiration. I am finding the plot a little bland so give me a few days to think or maybe i'll hit the jackpot tomorrow.

I am going crazy so i need to warn people before hand of any uncertainties. Or inconsistencies with the story🤪

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squirrel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

hey ayesha...i m late again....

training...tough week...

it was great update chap 20..😊..this pia's past is important ofcourse...

since u hv already started writing chap 21...i will just comment on it properly when u complete...

so ress for this chap...😆

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Dona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#234

amazing update..

thanx for the pm...

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sadia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

part 21 is just amazing ,you are just fine writer ...thanks for pm

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#236

wow great story pl\z update soon
it's an amazing story to read
thanks for the pm

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Rumki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#237

awesome update ayesh
u have described beautifully
now pia know the truth but she is very hurt right now
who was the hooded figure there in hall?is it any evil wizard?
at last para u said they r about to find her...what will happen now?cant wait 4 next part

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#238

awesome update the flash back was heartbreaking awesome update finally pia knows the truth about her birth and her family and the destruction to get her loved it well written perfectly done thanks for the pm