::SEQUEL BOOK 2::ETERNALLY YOURS::June 2013 pg 55 - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

amazing update!!!!!
so grams is hiding something big from pia...hope its for her sake only
liked the way abhay tried to console pia...he is her rock..always there for her
n abhay , diana n pia went into the past...who was that man in the past?

Grams has the weight of the world on her shoulders. Secrets she's kept to herself Its a little scary because some truths are best left unsaid
As for Abhay he knows how to wrap Pia round his fingerBut Pia is tough to break eventually she'll search for her ansers alone if she has to I guess being wrapped in cotton wool isn't always a good thing nor is being babied.

I am so in need of a stress ball Its difficult to maintain a steady pace and then WOW my readers. Can be overwhelming at times Hopefully i can make U all proud So i don't feel like i have forced U guys into reading stories fit for crazies.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update Ayesha... im so late, sorry. I 'm pretty messed up with work now but deadline is coming soon so hopefully will settle myself down calmly again.
coming to the update, the hybrids parts was really good. i love how your story contains main characters and parallels side by side👏. Pia is in deep guilt for something she hasn't done. nice to see Abhay supporting her. and looks like Grams has secrets about the past. Pia's past and present both going darker with every update. and wont she know she was Pia in previous life?
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 update ayesha
story getting interesting even more
cant wait 4 next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Amazing update Ayesha... im so late, sorry. I 'm pretty messed up with work now but deadline is coming soon so hopefully will settle myself down calmly again.
coming to the update, the hybrids parts was really good. i love how your story contains main characters and parallels side by side👏. Pia is in deep guilt for something she hasn't done. nice to see Abhay supporting her. and looks like Grams has secrets about the past. Pia's past and present both going darker with every update. and wont she know she was Pia in previous life?

Yeah i have been flexing my brawn's ala brain
Don't worry about replying late as i have come to discpver i seem to make a late entry everywhere. I barely have time to write a short reply to everyones FF. BTW ur SS is amazing sorry for not replying. I will try ASAP. I am a little slowwhich reminds me to do this ASAP.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update I loved it ayesha.So Pia-Abhay & Daina went 2 past.I so wnt u show Abhiya's past of how Pia died in his last birth & she is pia?.And I guess tht magical child they r talking abt is Pia😳.Oh O can't wait 2 know kya hoga nxt.plz cont..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx for d pm
gr8t awesome 👏👏
so all d kids having fun
updt soon
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

awesome update I loved it ayesha.So Pia-Abhay & Daina went 2 past.I so wnt u show Abhiya's past of how Pia died in his last birth & she is pia?.And I guess tht magical child they r talking abt is Pia😳.Oh O can't wait 2 know kya hoga nxt.plz cont..😳

There are more twists to the past. For such power to be harnessed there are magical beings scattered across America. So Pia is the last of the lot. Unfortunately it is her powers that are unstable thanks to her Mother. I can't say any more😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
:::Part 21:::Secrets unveiled:::

The time displacement was quite a whiplash for the three of them. To Abhay it was outlandish but for Pia and Diana it was rather weird to view their town so different. There were some building work going on at a construction site Pia knew at the DEN a place where most of the youngsters hung out playing video games, a coffee club, juice bar a place to come and chill was only being built. Then there were a strange aftershock of seeing some of their neighbours almost seeing through them like they'd felt some presence. They had the wiccan blood in their bodies even if they neglected to acknowledge their powers for the sake of keeping the peace with their elders.

Diana picked up her pace to follow the magical trails their spell was leading them in some local town hall. She was deeply disturbed by the way their mission was shaping up because it meant something bad was going to happen sooner or later. It was the morbidity of the situation she dreaded the most. Diana's heart was racing like crazy with all the suspense. What were they all doing here? Abhay kept himself busy making sure the girls were safe because he had inkling something terrible was going to happen. As soon as they'd arrived the doors closed behind them. Pia had tightened her grip on Abhay holding his hands for supports. She was feeling a little nervous because the truth may deliver some bitter, harsh reality she might not be ready to accept, if Abhay wasn't with her she didn't know what she'd have done.

The hall was dimly lit for a mysterious black hooded guy. Pia felt like this was some cult. The dark figure had such an intense aura about him. She'd send an inert affinity in the way he displayed himself to a politician running for some campaign. As soon as he spoke, not a pin dropped, he used his authority over these teenagers before him. Pia admired the spunk, the passion he had towards his craft and used his magical prowess in order to maintain his plight.

The man was staring right back at Pia aware of her presence divulging some secrets on purpose-This emergency has arisen from the imminent dangers headed our way. We must fight using our powers. To protect our future, some of U are vulnerable but the strength U possess is inborn. I can't command U to do anything but as your leader it is my responsibility to protect U all (Pauses for a second then in an unyielding manner) I will use all of my powers if I have to. All I ask is your cooperation.

Jake's Mother curtly retorted back-In my condition U expect too much. I won't harm my child with an overexerting my powers.

Pia zoned in on her Mother looking radiant, patting her tummy with affection staring into some strange woman she'd never laid eyes on but she was hidden away. Pia in a whispered curiously to Abhay-It appears as though several members may'

Abhay finished the sentence-Pregnant.

Pia wished she could speak with her Mother-Do U think she knows I'm here?

Abhay light heartedly quizzed Pia-Is this bringing some bad memories back?

Pia held Abhay's gaze shaking her head-No. Sorta. She looks so content. So happy but there's no sign of Dad. I know he has no powers but i'

Abhay softly explained to Pia-This is all top secret so only magical people allowed. Maybe they are protecting the people they love. Pia, the fact they can see us is a good thing. (Abhay had a bad feeling someone was already on to them. He kept his eyes firmly on the man leading the procession) It seems all the women are expecting a surprise from their body language.

Diana felt emotional upon seeing the way her mother was rubbing her stomach-So who is after them? What's with all the suspense?


This was supposed to be some historic event for the future, thought Diana, It all seemed jaded, a boring UP UNTIL THE SOUND OF TROUBLE.

Grams stormed in looking hale and hearty eyes looking thunderously at the teenagers. For a second Pia thought she was going to get a scolding. A quick diversion was'.Then she caught Abhay's icy blue eyes confirming Grams couldn't see her making Pia relax a little.


Grams was in showing signs of being pure magic towards the hooded man waving her hand in front of him in anger, bellowing at the top of her lungs-U dare to go against my wishes and bring my daughter to this forsaken path to destruction! U dare to tarnish their innocence with such evil powers hurtling their souls in your hands. If U think U can gain control then U are mistaken. No child of mine nor grandchild of mine will be raised by a tyrant such as yourself. (Orders the 11 teens out of the room) Everyone out of here before i bound all of your powers.


Another time leap and this time they were met with a secret they hadn't anticipated.


Pia gulped as she saw a woman looking into a mirror whose reflection was of another woman whose eyes were as dark as the night but her face was masked. Pia's mother was hovering behind her with a needle while Grams was chanting a spell knocking her out.


Grams resonated in an anguished tearful duty bound witch-I'm so sorry! (Her tears spoke of the hardship she had to endure) I can't allow U to influence my Grandchild in darkness. She must remain Pure to goodness than be inflicted by the evil U have to offer her.


Pia had cowered straight into Abhay's arms upon witnessing such a shocking act of betrayal-But...Grams is incapable of such hypocracy, of such duplicity...My mother isn't my mother. Is this why she resented me???

Grams delivered the baby smiling at the child-This is your rebirth my little one. Death cannot touch U and neither will they.

Then a light shone, Pia's Aunt took hold of the baby in her arms in light of the stormy night-Bless this child with a PURE SOUL to right what has gone wrong. Let her Lead but not follow. Anoint her as your wiccan daughter.

Grams had taken her Granddaughter naming her Pixie Petrove and relinquished all rights over to Nathanial and Sonia kissing her forehead-Take her away from this place. Somewhere nobody can find her. He has already infiltrated two covens we can't let him take over this one as well. Pixie deserves a normal life. A normal family. She must never find out about...

Sonia gave her mother a vow-Mom don't worry. Pixie will never know i'm not her mother and Nathan isn't her father. We will raise her as our own. I won't allow any powers to taint my daughter.

Grams bid her daughter farewell and tended to her unconscious-Forgive me!!! I had to do this. Good must prevail over evil. How could U do this to us? How could U let him tamper with us?


Diana was astounded by such a secret gaping at the concealed truth now creating such a mess mentally screwing with their emotions-This is heavy!!! Grams and such a cover up who'd have thought...

Pia was choked up by this-I did this. They all did this...(Stammering away like a child) How could they...


A dark figure arrived to visit Grams-Where's my daughter????

Grams gloated with glee-She's dead and buried. You'll never accomplish in your bid to overpower any coven on your own. U still need to complete your circle. I killed the one thing U needed. (Grams handed over her unruly daughter) U can take her away if U like. I disown her. She's all yours.

Pia in tears watching her Grandmother appear so heartless refusing to believe Grams could do this to her own daughter-She can't...Not to her own daughter.

The dark figure lurked forwards-U seriously think its all about gaining the upper hand. I love her but i also crave POWER. I don't believe my daughter is dead. U did something...(He takes the limp body in his arms) U think i won't comeback to reclaim what's mine?

Grams resilient and in complete control-U are evil to the bone. U are mistaken to believe that U can possess it all. To use these innocents for you're personal gain to be the alpha. U disgust me. You've poisoned their minds. Their magic is no longer in the service of humanity but to U...So far gone in your ego, you're delusional...Just leave here before i do something i regret...

The dark figure perplexed by the old woman-U haven't seen the last of me...I will come back

Just like this he had vanished with her birth mother. Then one by one death consumed each of the circles parent to tragedy. Diana's mother was lost to her forever in an accident.


Another time warp to a flying visit to the sunny side to Manhatten where Sonia and Nathan were leading an ordinary life had found themselves in a predicament. Pixie at 4 months old was faced by an anomaly. She was facing life and death. Grams made an urgent call.

Grams cradled the lifeless infant huddled looking blue whispering something in her ear. Then as if by some miracle the baby had come to life again. Pia held her breath understanding little about her life.


Grams handed her over to Sonia-Don't be afraid of Pixies condition. Its the doings of an ...I think she was torn out of her previous life...unexpectedly and this is the price she'll have to pay until...This little one is faced by some old ghosts haunting her in this lifetime. I'm afraid there are traces of some unfinished business for the soul in this vessel.

Nathan was now relieved to see the baby breathing again-We thought we'd lost her. Pixie doesn't deserve this. Sonia is having nightmares about them taking her away.

Sonia quizzed her Mother about her sister-Is she still around? Is he still...Will i still be able...

Grams weakly nodded in a saddened tone-Yes. Its happening. The infants have all lost one parent just as i'd feared leaving them all open to attack. He won't rest until he has full control. Sonia don't worry about losing Pixie she'll always be your daughter no matter what. Its U she will always call mother not...Just take her away and rest.


In solitude Nathan and Grams have a heart to heart discussing about any potential attacks-I'm worried about them. She's growing weaker as Pixie grows stronger in power.

Grams confides in her son-in-law-I must bind her powers. This is the only way they'll never find her. I should have done this then..Nathan U are a good man. Anyone else would have shied away from responsibility but you've surpassed all expectation. Just beware of the signs. My powers will weaken with age. I fear what will happen then.

Nathan agreed with his mother-in-law. He was opposed to the use of magic. This preconceived notion of a child shouldering so much burden, misfortune, was no life for Pixie-I concur but Sonia might have some reservations.

Sonia with a heavy heart felt her daughter had a right to defend herself using magic-Mom, Pixie has an obligation to the craft she was born into. If they find her how will she know right from wrong? How will she protect herself against them? She deserves a right to choose what she wants.

Grams determined to win had argued back-Pixie will do this when she is older, for this she'll have us but let her have a normal childhood. Its what we all owe her. Who knows what the future holds for her but if i can help it she will be protected from the truth. It will damage her forever to learn how her Mother and Father used their greed for Power to obtain her gifts for who knows what purpose. Do U want this legacy fr Pixie? To grow up living in shame, guilt of what was never in her control. We can never control the action of others but of our own.

Sonia shook her head in defeat-I am all for it then.

This was the moment the infants power was bound by magic. Nobody ever mentioned magic, the past, Grams. It was predominantly all about the future.


Pia regained some memory she'd repressed upon viewing a downward slide in her Aunt/Mothers mentality dwindling fast blaming her for all of this-Mum was afflicted by them. They manipulated her. My own Father to use them to flush me out...She...was...being..and i misjudged her. It wasn't Mum who killed Dad. It was them. They did this to her. (Pia was enraged by such a heinous act)

Nathan lay lifeless while a younger version of herself stared back at them-Sonia!!! U must gain control. Don't let them...

Sonia screamed as her Mother came back to claim Pia-Help us...We're going to lose her forever!!!!! She mus die!!!!!!!! Or she'll kill us all...


This was the last time Pia had ever seen of her Mother who was actually her Aunt. She was strapped and taken away by a psychiatric team of witches to a facility Pia had never heard of. Sonia's mind was filled with hatred towards Pia. Dark powers had worked against her slowly taking over. It eventually took everything she loved. They'd found her. Used her love for Pixie, for her husband against her. Pia finally understood what went wrong with her Mum. They had got to her. They'd succeeded in their attempts to ruin her life. Sonia had begun hearing voices with ill intent on the daughter she'd raised with so much love little by little resenting her until the child was emotionally scarred for life. They'd poisoned Sonia's mind pummeling her beautiful soul with doubt seeping through eventually paranoia had enveloped her beyond any reasoning. All Sonia saw was destruction and Pixie was at the heart of this. Sonia had the misfortune of killing Nathan which only brought the end of a sound minded witch's end.


Diana was back to her home where she had overheard her Father with Grams about a pact they'd made to remain a secret-Pia and the youngsters must never know. We have all lost someone we love because of him. Of them...!!!!! They are Power Hungry. Who knows what they'll do if they ever find them. I need us all to protect the children. We can't bind their powers forever.


Just like this Pia, Abhay and Diana were back to their time loop. By now Pia was a bundle of hurt as she huddled in comfort to Abhay's embrace.


Abhay held Pia close but he was troubled by the past. Pia's history had brought more questions on why Pia had faced death every year on the day his teens were born. Pia's identity raised eyebrows. He saw how deeply disturbed Pia was by the way she was clinging on to him like he was all she knew was good in her life.


While Pia refused to be subdued by her tragic life. If anything it had made her more resilient, more fired up to unearth the mystery behind her friends murders and if this was all tied up to her birth parents. Were they searching for her? If so why kill innocent witches when they could have come to her.


At Abhay's residence his hybrids were now settling themselves back to their old routines. Vedhant had decided to be succinct about the course he wanted to take on at UCLA because he would prefer to take a computer engineering course and maybe even go on a comic con with all the nerds for the summer break. His siblings had given him their permission but it was all down to their father. Unfortunately the residual feelings they were picking up from this place was very bad.

Khushi ribbed her brother on his choices as being a joke aggravated his plight-I can't believe my brother is a geek. Computing, going on conventions to meet weird people. Dad is going to love this. (Ruffling her brothers hair in a mocking fashion) Don't we have to stick together forever?

Vedhant muttered back retorting grouchily-Khushi i'll make sure U frown for the rest of your life if U don't cut it out. I am serious about doing my own thing than follow what's in. This isn't a trend nor a fad. I am passionate about computing. Dad is a whizz at this and i want to take it up professionally as my main business, creating my own web pages, colour schemes, i already know everything there is to know about this. Its all about producing a certificate. (Put away his clothes) Why did U think... (Pauses for a brief second) I'd be doing this social service for the faint hearted? I am only following whats in my heart.

Arohi sat down on her brother bed watching his mood change-U won't find any hot girls there to swap every other...

Vedhant firmly reiterated his beliefs-I am sick of girls right now. Sisters included. Don't U just want to venture out there on your own without the Raichand army as your shadow? (He sits next to Arohi holding her hand) Dad has been using us as an excuse to fill some void in his life. I know this sounds selfish but he needs to get a life.

Arjun admitted he felt the same way-We love him but he needs to cut the apron strings. We are his safety net and its time we all bailed so he can find his way back. Karan has let Nidhi go despite how much he loves her. We cannot be a distraction for him.

Preet understood their dilemma but something big was going to kick off feeling his inner instincts guiding him-Looks like we won't have to wait for the dust to settle because the storms coming our way.


Jeet on his motorbike was dropping off Pooja over at her place-I'll be waiting for your call tomorrow. We have lots to discuss about our future.

Pooja planted a lingering kiss to Jeet with a huge grin on her face-I can't wait. See U later. (Turns around to see her brother peeping out the window) Best be off before he marches outside.

Jeet from the corner of his eye gave him a nod and saw the curtains from the window fall back in place-He's not looking at us any more. Want to prolong our kiss a little longer. I'm still not over my long drives with U.

Pooja blushed at the memory of their antics from their trip-Maybe when we are alone we can continue from where we left off now get out of here before i drag U in my home.

Jeets flirted back playfully-Maybe i should take U up on the offer of staying over, It would be interesting to see how my future brother-in-law takes us being together.

Pooja walked away leaving Jeet with a wave-See U tomorrow.


Prem and Urvi were visiting Reina about an impending late night call to get to know the family. He was laconic about what this would entail. Urvi entwined her arm around Prems for moral support. Reina sensed Prems nerves from a mile off. Good. It meant he truly cared about Urvi. She'd make this pain free for him.


Grams with Henry were vigilant. There was no other choice. All roads led to this moment. Her time was almost up. Her granddaughter would soon discover the past was anything if not complicated. Pia was torn from the fabric of time. Right now her soul was at stake. They would find her. All the sacrifices would be in vain. Evil sought out Pia and it was drawn to her like a moth to a flame. Would she ever forgive her???

Edited by matwamango - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ayesha👏
i felt bad for pia...her past is really tragic...
so is she somehow related to our old pia????
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Ayshu I felt I was watching a Hollywood flick while reading this 👏 It was superb 👏 So Pia's biological dad is the big baddie here? I have a question. Is Pia's biological mom dead? Her dad took her away but what happened to her? Pia's foster dad is dead n her foster mom cum aunt is in an asylum. Gramps isn't to be blamed here coz she always had Pia's best interests at heart but for her to do this to her own child? I can imagine how painful it must have been for her 😭

But why was Pia dying every year and then coming back to life? Is it bcoz grams resurrected her when she was a 4 months old baby? 😕 I am confused here.
Coming to the hybrids, some of them want to go their own way? Its natural after a certain point in time that they would want to explore the possibilities before them as u cant keep 12 teens all holed up. It was only a matter of time when they decided to move out n explore life on their own n make new bonds but I feel bad for Abhay 😭 I am sure he will be heartbroken if his kids leave him 😭 Brilliant update Ayshu 👏 Do continue soon coz I cant wait for this mystery to unfold 😃
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