::SEQUEL BOOK 2::ETERNALLY YOURS::June 2013 pg 55

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

amazing update

can't believe pia's parents want her for their evil purpose and her grams actually killed her own daughter to protect her...that really takes a lot of courage. i feel that may be pia might offer herself to them to protect her friends.

intriguing chapter..

thanks for pm

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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Superb update

Piya past is really sad

I hope puts the puzzle together n realizes this is his piya and that why she dies when when his children are born

It must be hard for piya to accept the harsh reality truth of seeing her grandma kill her mother

She did it thinking it was the best way to save piya' with good interest

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Amazing update
so pia's biological dad is the villain
gram was in so much pain
pia died every year the teens were born?
confusd on ths part
continue soon

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Ayshu I felt I was watching a Hollywood flick while reading this 👏 It was superb 👏 So Pia's biological dad is the big baddie here? I have a question. Is Pia's biological mom dead? Her dad took her away but what happened to her? Pia's foster dad is dead n her foster mom cum aunt is in an asylum. Gramps isn't to be blamed here coz she always had Pia's best interests at heart but for her to do this to her own child? I can imagine how painful it must have been for her 😭

But why was Pia dying every year and then coming back to life? Is it bcoz grams resurrected her when she was a 4 months old baby? 😕 I am confused here.

Coming to the hybrids, some of them want to go their own way? Its natural after a certain point in time that they would want to explore the possibilities before them as u cant keep 12 teens all holed up. It was only a matter of time when they decided to move out n explore life on their own n make new bonds but I feel bad for Abhay 😭 I am sure he will be heartbroken if his kids leave him 😭 Brilliant update Ayshu 👏 Do continue soon coz I cant wait for this mystery to unfold 😃

It felt more than a high octane DRAMA when i finshed writing up the update. Pia's biological Mother isn't dead just AWOL for now. Pia's father left her to make good on his own army of POWERED witches. So good job U felt like it was some Hollywood Supernatural film. Movie Movies Making Film Films Director Producer Actor Actresses Smiley Smilie Smileys Smilies Emoticon Emoticons Animated Animation Animations Gif

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Why does Pia die every time on the HYBRIDS birth its her SOUL speaking to Pia in some way to wake up and remember the life she'd left behind. Pia's birth was against nature itself. There is more to the story to explore when U find out the mystery behind the hooded man in the upcoming updates. I know i am full of suspense and dare i say i am making all of this as i go along. To obtain a PURE SOUL a sacrifice had to be made but with repercussions. Old Pia and New Pia are working in a partnership of sorts as a higher order. Without giving anything away lets just say i am going the STARGATE route which hasn't been taken by any FF writers. There a an act of selflessness leads to ascention. Don't shoot me i am using inspiration from where i find inspiration.

As for the teens they will be pleased to discover how far their parents are close to a reconcilliation just by being absent. They will act as Pia's guardian Angel of sorts. She'll need one sooner than later.

Edited by matwamango - 13 years ago

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Awesome update Ayesha. Waiting fr the past to reveal!

😆😳❤️

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

comment updated on pg 36

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: .rumki.
awesome update ayesh
u have described beautifully
now pia know the truth but she is very hurt right now
who was the hooded figure there in hall?is it any evil wizard?
at last para u said they r about to find her...what will happen now?cant wait 4 next part

This could take a few weeks because i am yet to decide on what to write next...

The hooded person is someone Pia will find to be a revolting and a despicable person WATCH THIS SPACE.

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

superb upate😃 piya's part was so sad
why does piya die every year?? old piya & the new piya are the same right??😕
lots of mystery's😆
continu soon😉

Edited by shria - 13 years ago

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: dumas
awesome update the flash back was heartbreaking awesome update finally pia knows the truth about her birth and her family and the destruction to get her loved it well written perfectly done thanks for the pm

This is nothing. Its just a small glimpse of what Pia has got to expect. Wait till Pia visits her aunt in the Asylum then you'll get the real Danger.