'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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diana

@vampireking

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Posted: 12 years ago

#981

awesome👏 story!loved it😳 btw i have not read your whole just read the cs ,last chappy 😉!but from now plzz pm me😉 whenever you update !cant wait to read abhiya conversation😉 after what abhay did😳!plzz update soon😳 😳 👏 😉indian forum fans 😆

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#982

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
OMG that IF wala part 😲 🤣 it's just like ViSu lovestory and they talking about what people talk about their chemistry 😈 😉 😆
anyways, i didn't expect Abhay would be joking about Anik. he seriously needs to be serious because clearly he has feelings for Pia which are more than friendship. Maybe like Pia said he jusn't understand it or he isnt serious about anything. but clearly he doesnt like when Anik calls Pia or she talks to him. it would be great to see him more jealous if thats what would take for him to understand the feelings clearly.
the scenes in their secret venture and wonderful journey was beautifully described like always 👏 I loved it.
Last part - so Abhay spilled they are couple. media coverage and what not. now IF wale and media wale will make them a couple anyways 😆 Im waiting to see Pia's outburst 😆
[DIV]superb job Indu.

ya tanzie u got that right! Its their story!😉 abhay has hs cnfusions true bt plz dnt get hm wrong. It is nt becz he isnt serious bt rather it is his care n love and the beautiful friendship they share thats making hm mask hs feelings for pia.he isnt aware of wat she feels,n he dsnt want to hurt her more.
😆 Ya nw they are in big trouble! Media choro IF ne kabhi un dono ko chora hay kia?😛
and thanks for liking n this wonderful comment tanzie.🤗

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#983

Originally posted by: shria
Awesome update indu👏 waiting to see what piya will say to abhay😆

thanks shria.😳 update will b up by tmrw.😃

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#984

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
awsum update
</div><div>abhiya scenes were beautiful ...can't wait to see how would pia reprimand him now?
thanks for pm

thanks for appreciating megha.😳 u will see soon!

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#985

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal
super awesome update..
loved it..
thanxx for d pm..

glad u like it dear. Welcome!😳

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#986

Originally posted by: SheDevil
Awesome update indu
I loved it
Abhay eagerness to know Pia reply
Pia confusion
So Pia is actually wid anik or not

Abhay reply to media was awesome & now wht will b Pia's reaction

Plz cont..

thanks shrish.🤗 mm..wat do u think? 😉 let us see..

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#987

Originally posted by: meerubzara
awosome update
finally abhay confess his love
thanks for pm

thanks meera. But do u really think abhay has confessed his love??

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#988

Originally posted by: captainplus
great update
tanks 4r including us i.e. abhiya IF fans in ur update

tanks 4r pm

wil b waiting 4r the next part

well all of us..want it. Dnt we? 😉 u'r welcome dear.
Will update sooner n sorry for the delay.

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#989

Originally posted by: luckdiya
IF fans 🤣 🤣 🤣 bst prt of d updt ...v r really crazy abt abhiya
couple 😲 😲 hw cute ... well done indu 👍🏼

hey na? Han tabhi toh I added..😆😉 thanks diya.🤗

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#990

Originally posted by: ..dishu..
wonderful indu. tht was really beautiful. the way you describe a scene and surroundings make it so picturesque that one can actually feel them.

and wow abhay said we are a couple 🤣

thanks for appreciating dishu. That really means a lot.😳 ya he did!Quite a shocker.isnt it? 😆😛