'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#961

Awesum update.wow u included i-f.dats gr8
loved it.do continue soon

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-Alone-

@-Alone-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#962

Wow!! awesome update indu👍🏼.. you also brought IF fans here!! 🤣 n Piya's blackberry!!! 😲Hmm..that's reminded me of something😉😆... the last part was superb n enjoyed a lot reading.. ❤️

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#963

FAntastic update

Abhiya moments were superb

Both were really cute. wish what abhay asked become true n both will realise their feelings soon.

Last part wAs a surprise. abhay declared them as a couple...WOW!!! know he said it because of reporters but will wait when it will become true

I liked their views on IF, i think real vivian n suku also understand that we r their crazy fans n fans r compulsorily biased.

Edited by anjali0111 - 12 years ago

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#964

Damn good...I love Abhay for that...it was so good...

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#965

Sorry I am so late , 2 much work load at the moment and have had a really bad migraine so been away from forum ... still got it :(

but managed to read ur update , i really liked it and the IF part was really good ... liked the ending , can just imagine Abhay saying that in his tone :)

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Sheena

@Abhiya-gunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#966

Awesome Update Indu! U actually include IF fans 😆loved that😳

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#967

Such a januable upd Indu 👏 loved it all ! IF part was good too 😳

And omg abhay said him to be In relation with piya waiting o see piya outburst 😆

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pkyekfan

@pkyekfan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#968

Just read all 12 chapters in one go and I'm still craving to read more!! Honestly, felt like I was flipping through a really really good book! Hope you guys update soon because I can't wait!:) and thanks for reviving the abhiya memories!!

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#969

indu superb update
just loved the abhiya all moments
so i think piya also feel something for abhay
and now just wondering what wil piya do next if he love abhay
wow we are couple...love the line
cont soon