'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 55

Originally posted by: anjali0111

superb update!!!!!!!!👏
⭐️it was really fantastic!!!⭐️

yippee🥳 finally abhay said something to that🤬 kate...oh i m so happy.
n what happened to pia???😕 may be that 🤬kate has mixed something in her drink...now what else she is planning to do???😡
first i was angry on abhay 😡 he once again insulted pia...but then i feel like patting his back for shouting on kate😃...that was my most fav. part...plz make her suffer more😈
and abhay said he'll do the film...yippee🥳...hope pia also agrees😍
liked th scene where pia, tora n risa met...liked their bonding😊

continue soon

Originally posted by: sweetmonaya

What an lovely update Indu , it was sooo... Good , I just love the trio princess , what a lovely bonding they share , i just love them , Kate is real witch , I hate her , m really very glad tat finally abhay left her 🥳And best thing of all abhay is doing a movie with piya " party time " and at first I felt like slapping abhay but then the guy melted my heart , he was sooo sweet , he cares sooo much , I just loved it and the ending was soo gud , beyond words to describe , lovely abhiya moments yaar , and yippee abhay supported piya and awww piya called haseena mom , in short the whole party and updated was dhmakedar , conti soon u rock :)

Originally posted by: abhiya0006

<font color="#663399">Nice update!!!</font>

<font color="#663399">abhay finally answered back kate and stood up for pia😊</font>

<font color="#663399">Pia misses Abhay soo much and his words have a great effect on her! probably Abhay would kinda behave normally now that kate is out for sometime i guess.</font>

<font color="#663399">loved Risa,Tora and Pia bonding along with Haseena.it was nice to see😊</font>

<font color="#663399">it was a good long update😆 thanks for the Pm😳</font>

<font color="#663399">continue soon</font>

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

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awesum update indu😳

evrything was decribed really very well👏

jus loved risa-tora-pia bond😳

kate😡hope she doesn't create a problem

luved haseena-pia part❤️

loved abhay ...his caring side was awesum

continue soon nthnx 4 d pm

Originally posted by: _Sonu_

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Lovely update Indu...😳..

</div>This Kate is worse than a b****h...😡🤬..She's a perfect example for a dumb bimbo..Thank God finally Abhay has seen her real face..And this Abhay...one moment he hurts Piya so badly..and other moment he's there to help and support her...His head is in a complete mess...I hope he soon realises what Pia means to him..The last part when Abhay keeps standing in the rain with Pia in his arms was so lovely...I hope this is a turning point in his life..<div>

and Thanks for the longer update Indu...it was not at all boring...

Continue soon dear...

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Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244

Loved it Indu!!👏

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Beautiful and superb update dear.
I loved the trio princess friendship. I loved the way u have brought out their friendship.
I mostly liked this update because for the first time abhay said something to kate. Kate deserves it.
wow piya called haseena mom, so cute.
I was mad at abhay when he rudely behaved with piya but I loved the part when abhay saved piya from that bloody manish and scolded tora for leaving piya alone, it showed abhay's careful side towards piya.
I liked drunk piya.
I loved the last part where abhay stood in rain holding piya in his arms.
All together superb update. Thanks for giving us such a long update. It was not at all boring. I loved it.
Pls continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Indu awesome update. I totally loved the drunk Pia!
Ok Abhay was a douche. But I did love it when he yelled at that spiteful cat!
Continue soon

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update

atleast abhay left her and i hope he doesn't go back to her again...

tora,risa,pia's bonding is really very good.