'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#531

That was a blasting update Indu 👏

Gosh, Kate is a bigtime b****, hate her so much. glad Abhay finally shut her mouth. she needed that badly. though im sure now she will try even more to create trouble for Pia.

The vulnerable Pia and Abhay were touchy. Glad Abhay is shedding down from his ego and opening his heart. It seems his ego was the biggest obstacle in mending up the relationship with Pia. I hope now they will be more open to each other again. n their friendship with Tora and Risa was beautiful.

Continue soon... loved reading it...

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#532

Awesome update.I Loved it.So finally Abhay broke up wid Kate but wht actually Kate did wid Pia ? & Why Abhay left Pia?.Oh I feel bad 4 Abhiya..Tora & risa sound gud frnds.Plzz cont..😳

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#533

Comment upd on pg 69

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Diya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#534

superb upd indu finally abhay is ready 4 d movie wid piya hate dat kate... she is gud 4 nthin & dat manish ah!!!!!! dirty mind party ws superb thx 4 pm:))

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-Alone-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#535

Amazing update indu... loved the abhiya scenes...

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517072

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Posted: 13 years ago

#536

Lovely chapter.❤️ Want Kate to suffer more!!😈

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Ankita

@Fly_high

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Posted: 13 years ago

#537

superb update Indu and Kate feeling like to strangle her 😡

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Sulagna

@SheIsTheOne

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Posted: 13 years ago

#538

It was a really nice update...Kate...god..she's so mean...I think she has spiked Piya's drink...how cheap...she's a bad girl...i don't like her...😡 And Tora-Piya bond is also very adorable...just like Risa-Piya...😳 And Abhay...finally that donkey shooed Kate away like a fly...😆...well-done Donkey Abhay...😆 but he's still a bit fool now...he was so rude to Piya...😡 Idiot Abhay...but finally she revealed his real feelings for Piya...that was sweet...😳 Overall...awesome chapter...liked it a lot...Please continue as soon as you can...😛 and ya...thanks for the PM...😃

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-sakshi-

@-sakshi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#539

beautiful storyline... pl. pm me whenever you update the next part.

Edited by -sakshi- - 13 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
woww!!!fab indu..in fact i was wishing dat da chapter wud b a lil longer..haha take that kate!!!serves u right...luv da way u brought out da friendshp of the"princess trio"and nw hoping abhay vl complete the group...at first i was angry at him wen he was so rude...bt then hw long wil he suppress his heart..it beats 4 pia..!!!aw pia calld haseena mom,that was a sweet thng u added..n loved how in the end abhay was carrying pia nd the rain came dwn..matches the theme:-)p.s.thanx 4 taking pia to bedrum

thanks a ton sweetheart..🤗
mre lnger??!!😲 U wnt to kill me r wat?!!😆
thanks dear! I added it as i thot it wud help to shw hw close she is to haseena..😳
ya..the rain thng just strkd n my mind n midnyt u knw!! 😆 Actualy i wntd d end to b intence!! Glad u likd it!😳
plz dnt get mad at abhay! He isnt wat he seems frm outsyd! Ryt nw he is distrbd nd cnfusd nd wen pia cald hm loyal to kate he ws hurt, lost cntrl nd the angr ws just d outburst!!
My pleasure!! 🤗 Well tht ws wat princes wishd!! So i hv to!! 😉 😛

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