'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

Awesome update Indu!!!

The moment between Pia, Risa and Tora was nice... and really liked Haseena's part too...

I loved the way Abhay spoke to Kate... hope he dumps her now...

Well that tampered drink actually brought Abhiya close and Pia spoke what's in her mind... but who spiked it? Kate?

Waiting for the next part continue soon😊

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sonali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#522

awesm update indu...loved it..abhiya wil b 2gether na..want rainy romanc f abhiya...if u can...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#523

THAT WAS FANTASTIC...I AM REALLY DANCING AFTER THIS UPDATE!!

YEPPIE..ABHAY CARRIED PIA TO BED...SO DREAMY!!

I WANT NOW ABHAY AND PIA TO WRK ON THE FILM..HOPE PIA AGREES..

THAT BLOODY KATY..SHE IS A BIG IDIOT...

HOPE DUE TO HER NO PROBLEM CREATES BTW ABHIYA..

LOVED THE LAST SCENE..

NOTE- DEAR TORA AND INDU I AM USUALLY VERY BUSY SO CANT COMMENT ON UR FF REGULARLY BUT READ ALL OF THE UPDATES..SO SORRY!!!

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#524

Wow indu...
Its awesme dear...he insulted kate..loved pia,tora n risa bonding
gud to see affection for pia

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fatima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#525

wow...just a long n awesome...
u wrote it very well...
loved all abhiya scene,s...
wow just loved it...
continue soon...thanks 4 pm...

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..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#526

awesome update indu hey dont worry bilkul bore nai hue we love long updates...😉 i luv tora-pia-risa bonding nd also their convo with hasina...aah!finally finaly abhay ne muh khola apne headmistress kate k samne.,.😆 i hope abhay ab kate k pas wapas na jaye...continue soon nd thank u for pm😊

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Sheena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#527

Sorry about this

wrong post😳

Edited by abhiya0006 - 13 years ago

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visma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#528

The last part was awasome. Hope Kates plan back fires on her itself. And is this Toras and Risas plan. It is like of too much coincidences for a night.

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Disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#529

wow indu that's one fabulous update. loved abhay shutting kate's mouth for once and who spiked pia's drink. i think it was Kate and i think she has something else planned

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bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#530

superb update...
its awsome part yar...
first abhay insulted piya but then he shouted on kate i loved this...
he broke u with her yuieee...
piya in so bad state yar...
did piya love abhay or its just a friendship for her???????
lovely last scene of abhiya in bedroom then in rain...
cont soon

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