'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Beautifully written Indu 👏 It was superb ⭐️ Kate is out 😃 n I hope Anik leaves Pia as well. Dont want anyone come between them now 😊 I am so glad that Tora, Risa n Pia are back together n I cant wait for the day when Abhay will be with them as well. The best part of this update was the last part where Abhay carries Pia to his car n its starts raining 😳 It was written in an amazing way.

thanks a ton mansa..🤗
me too hope abhay joins them soon! 😊
the rain scene is my fa8 part too!!😊 I just tried nd really happy to knw dat u likd it!! Though i ws nt sure wethr i wrote dat part well or nt!! 😕
will b updatng soon!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Beautifully written Indu 👏It was superb ⭐️Kate is out 😃n I hope Anik leaves Pia as well. Dont want anyone come between them now 😊I am so glad that Tora, Risa n Pia are back together n I cant wait for the day when Abhay will be with them as well. The best part of this update was the last part where Abhay carries Pia to his car n its starts raining 😳It was written in an amazing way.

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: TeDylove
wow!!! amazing update..👏👏
finally pia burst out 😳 her filling and thank god abhay also melt down..😳
i am sure kate is planning something to dp with pia..hope that not effect on abhaiya relationship again.

continue soon..⭐️

thanks a lot chanu..😳
ya..thy both feel 4 eachothr..so it had to happn! 😳
hm..ya she is!! Well lets see wat happns...
Ya..will update by tmrw! 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: ilove99
yeppe...finally kuch acha hua...it took my breath in every word!!!abhiya were awesome...but it was kate na!who put drug in pia's drink?and now what's she gonna do...now abhay got her real 🤬 image😆
Risa tora and haseena r too good!!!!love them!and the rain part was fabulous!
update soon!

thanks a lot for liking meera..😳
hm..to knw tht u hv to wait 4 d nxt update!!
Hm..ya abhay knws kate's real face nw!
Well kate is planning sumthng horrible!
yep! They are! 😳
Aww..once again thanks fr ur sweet words dear..glad u likd it..😳
ya.. Will try to update by tmrw!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

thanks alicia..😳 ya..wil continue soon..u'r welcome! 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: taz90
Awesome update Indu!!!
The moment between Pia, Risa and Tora was nice... and really liked Haseena's part too...
I loved the way Abhay spoke to Kate... hope he dumps her now...
Well that tampered drink actually brought Abhiya close and Pia spoke what's in her mind... but who spiked it? Kate?
Waiting for the next part continue soon😊

thanks a lot for ur lovely words tanu..😳 hm..lets see wat hapns nxt..
Ya..thts ryt! It brought abhiya closer!
Hm..mytb! U wil knw dat n d nxt chappy!
Ya..will try to updat by tmrw! 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: --sonali--
awesm update indu...loved it..abhiya wil b 2gether na..want rainy romanc f abhiya...if u can...

thanks a lot sonali..😳
hm..hope so dear..lets see!
Hm..sorry dear bt hw cn there b romance nw! Pia is sencelss na?!!
Bt will try to give later.. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: flora212
THAT WAS FANTASTIC...I AM REALLY DANCING AFTER THIS UPDATE!!
YEPPIE..ABHAY CARRIED PIA TO BED...SO DREAMY!!
I WANT NOW ABHAY AND PIA TO WRK ON THE FILM..HOPE PIA AGREES..
THAT BLOODY KATY..SHE IS A BIG IDIOT...
HOPE DUE TO HER NO PROBLEM CREATES BTW ABHIYA..
LOVED THE LAST SCENE..
NOTE- DEAR TORA AND INDU I AM USUALLY VERY BUSY SO CANT COMMENT ON UR FF REGULARLY BUT READ ALL OF THE UPDATES..SO SORRY!!!

thanks for liking nafi..😳
haha..ya..abhay is ready to do the film..cnt say abt pia.!lets see wat she says!!
Hm..hope so!!
Thanks dear..😊
its ok dear.no worries.we hav seen ur likes.comment wenever u cn..😊