'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 57

Originally posted by: Yumna786

wow...just a long n awesome...
u wrote it very well...
loved all abhiya scene,s...
wow just loved it...
continue soon...thanks 4 pm...

aww..thanks a lot for ur sweet words dear.. 😳
ya..will try to updat asap..most welcome! 😊

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

beautiful update <div></div>

thanks for liking hema..😳

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

awesome update indu hey dont worry bilkul bore nai hue we love long updates...😉 i luv tora-pia-risa bonding nd also their convo with hasina...aah!finally finaly abhay ne muh khola apne headmistress kate k samne.,.😆 i hope abhay ab kate k pas wapas na jaye...continue soon nd thank u for pm😊

thanks a ton juhi..🤗
haha..ya..abhay opend hs mouth finaly! Wel he had to! Aftral its abt pia na!! 😉
hm..dnt think he wil go bck to kate lol !
Will update tmrw..most welcome..😊

Indu fantastic update.😳 👍🏼 Im happy abhay is back to her & left her they way he show his cares & love for pia...so wseet.😳❤️

i liked last part than Abhay carries Pia to his car n its starts raining'..its so romantic.❤️😍 i loved it

Continue soon

Originally posted by: kuttu

The last part was awasome. Hope Kates plan back fires on her itself. And is this Toras and Risas plan. It is like of too much coincidences for a night.

thanks dear..😊
Ya..hope so! Nope its nt their plan !!
Hm..ya..bt it had too! Nd dats y it ws d turning point of d story!!

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

<font color="#ff00ff" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">wow indu that's one fabulous update. loved abhay shutting kate's mouth for once and who spiked pia's drink. i think it was Kate and i think she has something else planned</font>

thanks a lot dishu..😳
yep! You'r ryt! Hm..ya i'm afraid,she has !!

Originally posted by: bellaaa

superb update...
its awsome part yar...
first abhay insulted piya but then he shouted on kate i loved this...
he broke u with her yuieee...
piya in so bad state yar...
did piya love abhay or its just a friendship for her???????
lovely last scene of abhiya in bedroom then in rain...
cont soon

thanks lot bella..glad you likd it..😳
ya..aftral pia matts to hm a lot! 😳
Ya..pia is broken n sad! :( You will got to knw dat soon! 😳
thanks again dear..😊

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

<font size="2" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#660099">That was a blasting update Indu 👏</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#660099">Gosh, Kate is a bigtime b****, hate her so much. glad Abhay finally shut her mouth. she needed that badly. though im sure now she will try even more to create trouble for Pia. </font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#660099">The vulnerable Pia and Abhay were touchy. Glad Abhay is shedding down from his ego and opening his heart. It seems his ego was the biggest obstacle in mending up the relationship with Pia. I hope now they will be more open to each other again. n their friendship with Tora and Risa was beautiful. </font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" color="#660099">Continue soon... loved reading it...</font>

thank you very much tanzie..😳 its a big compliment for me and it means a lot to me!! 😳 thank u once again..😃
yep! She is! Yes you'r right! I'm afraid ,she is planning sumthng big!
ya..finally abhay is realising wat hs heart wants...😊 ya..he had ego prblms...the reasns will b disclosd slowly.
Hm..ya...bt there's stil many things mre to b settled btw them!😕
glad u likd it..me too love their bond! 😊
will b updatng today! Thanks again tanzie for giving such a big comment! 🤗 😳

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Awesome update.I Loved it.So finally Abhay broke up wid Kate but wht actually Kate did wid Pia ? & Why Abhay left Pia?.Oh I feel bad 4 Abhiya..Tora & risa sound gud frnds.Plzz cont..😳</font>

thanks a lot shrish..🤗
ya..abhay brokeup wth kate! Umm..wat kate did u wil get to knw dat in d nxt update! There's a reasn behind abhay's anger 4 pia! Tht too wil b disclosd soon!! Ya..tora,risa n pia share a very beautiful nd strong bond! 😊
ya..wil try to update tdy!