'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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@Trouble.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesum update indu😳

evrything was decribed really very well👏

jus loved risa-tora-pia bond😳

kate😡hope she doesn't create a problem

luved haseena-pia part❤️

loved abhay ...his caring side was awesum

continue soon nthnx 4 d pm

Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 13 years ago

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bubble_

@bubble_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#512

Lovely update Indu...😳..

This Kate is worse than a b****h...😡🤬..She's a perfect example for a dumb bimbo..Thank God finally Abhay has seen her real face..And this Abhay...one moment he hurts Piya so badly..and other moment he's there to help and support her...His head is in a complete mess...I hope he soon realises what Pia means to him..The last part when Abhay keeps standing in the rain with Pia in his arms was so lovely...I hope this is a turning point in his life..

and Thanks for the longer update Indu...it was not at all boring...

Continue soon dear...

Edited by _Sonu_ - 13 years ago

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#513

Chapter updated on pg-68 😳

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#514

Beautiful and superb update dear.
I loved the trio princess friendship. I loved the way u have brought out their friendship.
I mostly liked this update because for the first time abhay said something to kate. Kate deserves it.
wow piya called haseena mom, so cute.
I was mad at abhay when he rudely behaved with piya but I loved the part when abhay saved piya from that bloody manish and scolded tora for leaving piya alone, it showed abhay's careful side towards piya.
I liked drunk piya.
I loved the last part where abhay stood in rain holding piya in his arms.
All together superb update. Thanks for giving us such a long update. It was not at all boring. I loved it.
Pls continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#515

Indu awesome update. I totally loved the drunk Pia!
Ok Abhay was a douche. But I did love it when he yelled at that spiteful cat!
Continue soon

Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 13 years ago

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#516

amazing update

atleast abhay left her and i hope he doesn't go back to her again...

tora,risa,pia's bonding is really very good.

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#517

Beautifully written Indu 👏 It was superb ⭐️ Kate is out 😃 n I hope Anik leaves Pia as well. Dont want anyone come between them now 😊 I am so glad that Tora, Risa n Pia are back together n I cant wait for the day when Abhay will be with them as well. The best part of this update was the last part where Abhay carries Pia to his car n its starts raining 😳 It was written in an amazing way.

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago

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chandni

@TeDylove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#518

wow!!! amazing update..👏👏
finally pia burst out 😳 her filling and thank god abhay also melt down..😳
i am sure kate is planning something to dp with pia..hope that not effect on abhaiya relationship again.

continue soon..⭐️

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ilove99

@ilove99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#519

yeppe...finally kuch acha hua...it took my breath in every word!!!abhiya were awesome...but it was kate na!who put drug in pia's drink?and now what's she gonna do...now abhay got her real 🤬 image😆

Risa tora and haseena r too good!!!!love them!and the rain part was fabulous!

update soon!

Edited by ilove99 - 13 years ago