'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 50

Originally posted by: anjali0111

nice update!!!👏

so both abhay n pia feeling a kind of pull towards each other but not understanding it.
the description of the party was very good...i can imagine the whole scene.👍🏼
that kate😡😡😡...hate emoticons cant express my hatred for her.
n chand...he doesn't dislike kate like abhay's mom n sis...no wonders abhay is so dumb...afterall like father like son😆😆😆

thanks a lot anji ! 😳
yep! Bth miss eachothr! Pia kinda knw it bt she hs her reasons! Though Abhay is messd up nw bt he does too!! Bt there's a kind of barrier btw thm,thts keepng thm bck! Reasn u wil get to knw soon!!
Haha..ya..i gues same is d case wth evry1 !!
Haha..no anji nethr abhay nor hs dead r dumb!! Chand is a simple man who dsnt look at thngs r ppl frm a deeper perspectve! And he is a nyc man! Abhay do behav lyk an idiot sumtyms bt thn he is a bit immature nd u knw sumtyms relatnshps r cmplex!! So hs lyf is goin thru tht phase!! Bt he wil b bck n hs track soon!! 😊

Loved it Indu 👏 Brilliant ⭐️ Love the way u portray human emotions. Also loved the way u had described Pia in her attire. I could imagine her in a green gown with her hair tied up n her ringlets hanging about. NIce 😊 Abhay's feelings were depicted wonderfully. The pain, the guilt of having lost his friend and sister as well was shown well. Chand also likes Kate 🤢 Haseena seems to be sane n hopefully Abhay heeds her words 😊 N for wat r u apologising? 😕 U gave us a brilliant update 👏 Waiting eagerly for part 2 😃

Originally posted by: taz90

Lovely update Indu!!!

Liked Abhay's flashback with Pia... he misses her so much but makes no effort to make it up to her😡 but again when you describe his pain so well it makes me feel bad for him...

And Chand approves Abhay and Kate's relation😒 doesn't matter at least his mom and sister know Kate's truth...

Waiting for the rest of the party cont soon😊

thanks for your lovely comment tanu! 😳
ya..he dsnt! Bt There's sumthng tht's keepng hm bck,u wil knw d reasn soon !!!
Ya..bt he stil dont knw abt kate na..thts y!
Yep! Thts ryt! Thy knw! 😊
yes..will try to update soon...😊

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
thanks for the pm

thanks alicia..ya..will try to update soon..😊

Originally posted by: TISA07

<font color="#cc0099">amazing update.felt bad for abhiya. . .katy. . 😡😡</font><div></div>

thanks a lot dear..😳

ya..abhiya r in pain! :( Bt dnt worry, thngs will get bettr.. :)

Originally posted by: bellaaa

lovely update yar...
loved the way abhiya feel 4 each other...
cant wait to see abhiya conversatn
cont soon

thanks a lot bella..😳 glad you liked it..😊
thanks again..ya..will try to update soon.. 😊

Originally posted by: kuttu

Now Abhay is in a dilema. He wants answers for what. Its quite strange that he had such pleasent memories with her and all of a sudden he seems to have lost everything. Only Chand seems to be oblivious to things around the family.

Now waiting to see the confrontation between Abhay and Pia.

yes dear you'r right !! Its lyk he is aware of the trouble yet cnt identify the solution!!!
Yep! Nxt updat will hv lots of abhiya! Hope u will like it!! 😳
thanks for commenting! 😊

Originally posted by: Yumna786

party was awesome.
luv it...
thanks 4 pm...
abhiya scene was nicee...update soon...

thanks yumna! Glad u liked it..😳
yep!will try to update soon..
Welcome!
Thanks again for liking..😊

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay

<font color="#0000FF"><font size="5">Mind bowling chapter and very exciting for next up date ...thanks for pm </font></font>

thanks a lot dear..😳
will b updatng soon..
Most welcome! 😊

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Love the abhiya moments! It's brilliant Indu! Oh that Kate... Bhagao use! 😡

thanks a lot for your lovely words shreya..😳
haha..no worries! She wil b gone..just wait !! 😉