'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 107

awesome update

so finally abhiya finding it difficult to ignore their feelings being together.
the dance sequence was beautifully described
it will be interesting to read further about the movie shots and their real feelings mixed up with the scenes😆😉

nice chappy ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

You guys are MEAN!
gosh this actually makes me think of ViSu...oh that part where you guys wrote about their fandom coz of their show...oh gosh! that is the reason why we did...😆 😉
Anik is perceptive indeed...loved his and Piya's convo... thanks! 😳
And what a beautiful description of the dance! I know its difficult to write dances- for me at least- but honestly you guys nailed it perfectly. dear the entire dance part was written by tora so credit goes to her..😳 na hole am not good at these things...😆
This is one of my favourite FFs...please continue soon :P

thanks will try to update soon! 😊

awesome update
love protectivelly nature of abhay toward pia & also jealous feeling -its really treat
both were already feeling for each other inspite of that both ignored his/her feeling for each other
hope someone help them for accepting true feeling
thanks for pm & continue soon
*first time i read this abhiya story , it really intresting , comment on basis of update 14
rest comment after reading previous all chapter , it will take time ( mujh jaise lazy reader ko read karne ke liye )

Wow a beautiful update

amazing n marvellous update Tora n Indu.such a real n beautiful peice of writing.
reminding me much of ViSu.
egarly waiting for abhiya talk.update soon.

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

res

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damn it!! why am I always so late in resing😭 its alrite dear...i know u'r busy. 😊

anyways...the update was super amazing...👏👏 thank you! 😳

so is anik by any chance knows about abhay's feelings towards piya???? or is it just what abhay's face says...? hmm...just wait a little bit more. things will unfold soon.

oh god what is this idiot kate planning now????😡

nothing good for sure!!

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

After long but a sweeet update...Indu I'm in Abhiya dreamland where they dance together...u remind me pkyek Abhiya danceLove it dear🤗Love Abhay jealous also,Anik understand it,but that Kate😡wish get a punishment...Continue soon dear😊

thanks for reading dear! 😳 we are glad you like it. 🤗 well credit goes to tora. she wrote the dance part. 😳 will try updating soon. 😳 and thanks for being with us...🤗