Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143) - Page 67

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Tanzie this update was worth the wait 👏 n thanks for giving it so quickly despite having eye problems. It was MINDBLOWINGLY SUPERB!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 Thanks a lot Manasa...🤗 i put my heart in this update... even i was happy after reading it

It was not the union of 2 bodies but it was the coming together of 2 souls n it was beautiful. Not even for one second I felt I could see the lust. True it was passionate but it had nothing to do with the needs of the body. It was more like quenching the thirst of the soul. 😳 It was mesmerising. I loved the way you described Abhay n Pia's feelings here. Trust me I can write an epic comment for this epic update but at the moment I am at a loss for words. Abhay's hesitation, Pia's surrender n finally the coming together of 2 soulmates was so wonderfully depicted that I honestly have no words. The morning after was even more beautiful. Pia's journey from being an irresponsible girl to a woman blissfully in love was spectacular 👏thank you so much Manasa... im so touched with your comment...means a lot to me. Life has really changed for both of them. They were so lone and lost.both has so much different background but at the end of the day they found each other and thats what matters to them now.

Loved the way she got scared on not seeing Abhay. I am an Abhay fan all the way but Pia stole the thunder in this update.

Loved the last part where Abhay finally found solace in the norms of a regular life which is devoid of guns, bullets, blood and death 😳

Trust me I have not read such a beautiful segment in any book also forget an FF. 👏 Tanzie u have done an outstanding job dear. Thank u so so much for giving this amazing SS 🤗 OMG.. thts such a huge complement... thankyou..thank you so much.. i cant say anything more 😳

NOTE: I hope your eye infection is completely cured n ur fine now 😊 Tanzie dear please dont get upset if your readers press you for updates. You should have realised by now how much we love your works. The moment you reserve a post for update all your readers will be in a race to reserve their post for comments as well. Within a min or two, more than 2 pages will already be reserved and there are many times even I felt bad coz I never got to be the first person to reserve a post Trust me whenever u say u might post an update I check the forum regularly to check for your 'res' post. I feel super happy if I get to res a post for urs or Ayshu's FFs 😃 early on. I know ur busy, u have other priorities as well n surely none of us want u to overlook all of that just so that we get to enjoy your stories. We will wait. I understand that coz I work for more than 12 hrs lately in office n its difficult for me to update my FF n SS too 😭 I know you had mentioned u'll update within 2 days but trust me when readers post their requests asking u to update fast am sure they wouldn have read ur previous posts regarding when u'll update next. Please dont get mad at us. Give us updates only when u have the time for it 🤗 My eyes infection is fine now. i know and trust me im really greatful to all because without the readers what I would write? but i got to frustrated that day and burst out i also return home after 13/14 hours so sometimes its just impossible to write being so tired... i hope i can update faster... i dont wanna make anyone dissapointed 😳

Originally posted by: ..dishu..

wow wow wow. Just wow Tanzie. That really is truly sensual, romantic and aesthetic all rolled into one update. 👏 Only you could pull off such a classic writing for something so racy. 👏

Originally posted by: _Sonu_

That was a mind blowing updare Tanzie...👏..Loved it to the core...😳...I've already read it thrice u know..and Thanks for posting the update despite having an eye infection...Both Abhay and Pia poured out their love for each other...and their feelings were depicted perfectly and clearly through your words dear..😊..be it love or insecurity or hesitation or any other emotion...I love the way you show it Tanzie..👏👏👏and for Pia..I loved the way she made Abhay understand what he means to her...😳 Thanks so much Sonu. People who have nothing to loose are usually braver. so in case of Pia. she is desperated to hold onto Abhay because right now, she has nothing left then him.

Why you have to hold back so much? I would have done something stupid after hearing my own mother feed me lies about her and my father along with my identity all my life. It's just for you I'm alive. I have been reckless, irrational and temperamental always. Only you have the perfect control over me. You are the only one I have left. Don't do this to me. I need you to stay alive.

..Loved the end part Tanz...😃

Is this how a typical man lives his life? Then I love this life. There won't be any bullets or blood in my life and I would earn, eat, sleep and love like a normal human. There's nothing more I could ask for.

I just hope Abhay gets this kind of life soon...But his past won't let him live peacefully so easily..I feel sad for him..Even when he wants to go away from the darkness...his master wouldn't let him live peacefully.

and btw..the warning you gave would only make ur readers of age less than 16 more curious to read it..😆..you really can't help that..😆

Thank u once again Tanzie..for this wonderful update..

Waiting to read what more their life has in store for them...

..continue soon..and thanks for the pm...🤗 Crime doesn't leave anyone so easily. so it wont leave Abhay so soon either. i know.. kids are too naughty this days but i had to give a warning since there was some racy moments. next update might be another 16+ too. will update soon.

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

OMG OMG OMG OMG...tanzie !

That was one hot and awesome update!

Abhiya just doesn't seem to get enough of eachother..

It was perfect..sensuous & mindblowing ... totally sizzling chemistry ...want 2 read it again & again..my PC is burning r8 now ! Lol

the morning scene was gr8 ! The way piya got scared shows how much she loves abhay.. Abhay got a job .. He wants to have a normal life with piya! So sweet ! I hope, his wish is granted !

Continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

aw what a fabulous update tanzie!'it lived up to its name...beautifully destroyed...yes,they r slowly destroying the darkness of the past and building up a beautiful present...where there is only abhay piya and their love,...they vl heal each other's scars...so much passion,and love!!its hot bt their love is jst so pure nd beautiful...of course i knw the darkness will cum inevitably,bt they vl b each other's light,right??one of the best updates in ths ss..nt coz of the scenes,bt 4 the depth of their emotns

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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tht was really a wonderful update tanzie!!! 👏 thanks a lto Indu.

the title was apt, perfctly in sync with their current emotional turbulence!! thank you so much. there will be another after 4/5 updates, that would be Beautifully Disaster II.😳

Am waitng for that turn nw where d story gets evn mre darker, and destructve... wth them paving their way thru adamant diffculties by their sheer power of love!!
Hope however dark it becomes their love will shine thru till d very end!! The story will get dark soon but I will take it slow. i have no intention to stop it so soon 😊

The pain relatd to their dark past, and their heart desparately in search of peace..ws wonderfuly described!! thank you so much. 😊

Continue..awaitng d nxt part...
Thanx for the pm..
And m really very sorry for nt being able to comment n the previous update.. :(

P.s. Howz ur eyes nw? Just saw you hd an infectn!!
Hope ur mom is better nw?
Do take care of urself... no problem dear.. i understand...its ok... im eyes are ok now. n mom is recovering very slowly. doc said, we are unsure if she will fully recover ever

--indu

Originally posted by: Monami_50

Yipee.Finally abhay told i luv u 2 pia.Their true feelings finally came out.Hope they can always be together nd happy like this

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Uff what an update tanzie. My hands are shaking now. I just don't have words to say how much beautiful it was. U just described abhay's pain, guilt, love and passion for piya beautifully. I was just out of world. Abhiya love making session was just perfect. I loved this wild love making. Abhay gave into Piya was what I love most. The bathroom part was awesome. I just loved and lived this update. Yes, I lived it. I could feel and imagine both abhiya's situation. Wow, abhay will make lunch for piya, that's gr8. Hats off to u and ur writing style. One request to u dear, pls pm me. I don't know why are u not sending pm's to me. I regularly read and comment in ur every ff or ss. Pls dear do it. Pls try to continue as soon as u get time.