Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#641

Ahem..really nice update Tanzie.😳. Very very nice...😳😳❤️

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..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#642

OH MY GOD TANZIE!! FIRST LET ME *BRETHING HARD* OK NW THIS WAS FABULOUS FANTASTIC MINDBLOWING JITNA KAHEN UTNA KAM HAI...*BLUSHING SO HARD* U KNW AFTER READING IT 5TH TIME I GOT OUT OF DREAMLAND AND THEN M COMMENTING...IT WAS REALY AWESOME! HATS OFF! <3

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ilove99

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Posted: 13 years ago

#643

Read the full story its awesome👏

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megha sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#644

fantastic, superb and awsum update...

its one of the best i ever read...it was hot,sensuous and too romantic and at the same time emotional too. u really portrayed their emootions so well.👏👏👏👏👏👏

m happy to see abhay staying back and accepting their love...i really luvd the last lines that how he was happy to get a job and wants to live a life away from his dark past...its beautiful writing.

this ss of urs would definitely be one of ma fav's and m really gonna miss it when its get over.

thanks for pm.

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visma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#645

This was one passion and longing filled update of two people. So now the story is going to get arker. How come all your fancfics are going through the dark phase now. I have a strong feeling that Chand is on his way and he has something for Abhay that will shatter Pias life.

Just hope they both will with stand the test of time.

But this was on emind blowing update. More passionate than the Till the end of time.

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--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#646

OMG! Tanzie.. Was that completely your writing or Heena helped you??

If Heena helped, I can understand after all she is queen in that! If that was completely by you then I'm shell shocked.. Woman, you have grown a lot in this section.. A full whole update on passion and love! I really can't believe it's you!! Great work Tanzie!!

The whole update was sizzling, i had goosebumps at several places! Their love for each other and how you put it in words were amazing!!

It was a bliss to read.. The update is going very romantic.. And I hope u would deftly plan to kill that, aren't u?? After all u r the author of Beautiful stranger! You wont allow me to relish in their love for long.. Are those evil guys coming back??

Thanks for the PM dear!

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sonali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#647

Tanzie...m 😲speechless...is this u hv written...AKELI?OMG..!

it was d ☺️most romantic ☺️update u hv written ever..loved it very much..😍.!thanx for pm.waiting for next...what about chand & all...!thank u tanzie!🤗

hope u r well.take care!

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Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#648

tanzie..it was beautifully written. Love, passion, their undying bond...i cant describe. Truely amazing part! Now that u have written this, i m sure we are going to soon witness some shocking things! Am i rite?

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m-g19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#649

wow that was rely good n hot.

i love der passion 4 eachother.

u portray their feelng n emotions rely wll.

good job n thumbs up 4 u.

n thnx 4 da pm

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bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#650

loveddd it tanzie...
what a hawtt scenes byw abhiya ufff...
superb update...
piya is such a wild cat na hahhahha
abhay is so protective...
liked the scene when piya scared and hugged abhay from back...
hope never bad happened to them...
ohh abhay got a job wow
lovely update...
cont soon

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