Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

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Posted: 13 years ago

#651

its amazing tanazie!!!! i loved it!!!!!!

abhay n pia finally became one!!!! i loved d passion they had 4 eachother!!!! n d way pia percuaded abhay was amazing!!! n finally abhay listened 2 his heart...

n there love making part was super howttt... n sensual... its mindblowing...

n abhay got d job... dats gr8... now both of dem can have a normal life...

n no1 cam e b/w dem... amazing update!!!!

cont soon n thanks 4 d pm

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hema

@hema_rawat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#652

beautiful update tanzie ...☺️

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Pallavi Sarkar

@pallavisarkar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#653

thnx very much for d pm

very hot awesome n gr8t 👏👏

dont worry i m 20+

updt soon

take care

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squirrel

@urmita

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#654

wow tanzie...awsome update...😛

a full romantic and passionate update like this from u is just..wow.😃

loved to see abhay accepting their love...nd pia was also gr8..

wow tanzie...

par tumhari itni romantic update ke baad i m suspicious...koi bara wala jatka dene wali ho kya next chappies mai? (😆😆)

nyway dont take too long till next update...

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#655

You know, Tanzie, I had promised myself post PKYEK that no matter how much I love a show/couple, I will never get attached to fiction ever again. But I have broken my own vow and this time it is not any show I have gotten attached to but this SS. Yes, I have really started feeling emotionally for AbhIya here because everything related to them straightaway touches my heart.

Take this latest update for example. Normally, such a steamy, hot update would make me blush and get my hormones racing but here, all it did was tug those strings which made me smile with slightly moist eyes seeing how much these two had been holding back and how much they were craving for each other, how much they NEEDED each other. That feeling of being readily destroyed if it means that it'll be in each other's love is indeed so beautiful! Not many people can find that kind of a person who will make them feel this way or for that matter, feel this way for them.

I am prepared for the fact that life will never be a bed of roses for them but seeing them so happy makes me wish nothing ever goes wrong with them

Is this how a typical man lives his life? Then I love this life. There won't be any bullets or blood in my life and I would earn, eat, sleep and love like a normal human. There's nothing more I could ask for.

^^Aww, Abhay. This is soon going to shatter so don't get your hopes up🥺

I really missed this SS, too, Tanzie. I feel really connected to it and AbhIya here bring out my maternal instincts even more than the ones in the show did.

I know what you mean by Abhay being the only 'truth' in Pia's life now. I mean, her entire existence seems like a big fat lie otherwise. Had Abhay not been there, she would've gone back to her dark, sad, depressed life.

Oh, oh, oh, I just saw you threatened to quit this SS?😳 Aisa mat karna kabhi. People pester you for updates 'coz they can't wait to know what happens next, your writing interests them. I'm sure no one here wants your work to suffer😛

Anyway, enough rants. I just love the way you write and especially this SS is very close to my heart as a reader and I know it is to yours as a writer as well😳

Hope that eye infection of yours gets perfect super quick! Take care of yourself, hun🤗.🤗

Edited by PurpleFairy - 13 years ago