Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Amazing dr... i loved dis update... finally abhay confessed his feeling ... i loved d last part...
noe pia knows d truth about her real mother.. i hope she knows about her father soon... i m feeling dat ots chand...
Abhay n pias jelousy was amazing... both can do nything 4 eachother ...
i loved abhays passion...
next chapter has a disaster kya??
Cont soon n thanks 4 d pm...

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sonali

@--sonali--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

awesome update tanzie!👏😍

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

Chapter updated page 78 🤗

and please read the note...

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

Beautifully Destroyed.

I cant sit or sleep properly in anticipation of this chappy.

So many questions arised as I am sure u intended it like that. If Madhu is Pia's daughter then who is the father I have a feeling its Chand aka Abhay's boss. Scary

Jealous Abhay or jealous Pia cant say who was more adorable.

Last part was simply outstanding

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navnit

@sukusnavnit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

marvellous update. it was superb the way u described their feeling for each other. i felt sorry for pia becoz the one she loved her mother betrayed her and the one abhay she was loving was not accepting his feeling for her.jealousy card again worked as abhay finally accepted his love for her and pia got what she wanted. 😍 waiting to know who is her father and more abhiya moments.do update soon . 👍🏼

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#556

fab update...with amazing twists...🤗...

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neetu

@sweet_neetu

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#557

brillant tanzie👍🏼loved when pia got jealous..

finally abhay broke down his barriers...

the kiss in last was just perfect..👏

thnxx for pm

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#558

it such a beautiful update that i am really speechless...u portrayed so many emotions ranging from jealousy to emotional state of pia to the anger and lastly the passion...

so many things have happened here...pia loves madhu more than anything and she lied to her all her life..the only person she could believe has betrayed her trust.

loved how both got jealous of each other getting attention from other guys and gals.😊

even i feel that may be chand is her father but then why does he want to kill her??does he know that she is his daughter???

last part of the update was very hot and the next chapter heading has only fuelled the curiosity as to what will happen...

outstanding job by both of u guys👏👏👏👏

all the best to heena for her exams 👍🏼

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#559

awesome update

loved it

So Panchhi is not Piya's real mother its Madhu

Pata nahi why I am feeling that Piya's dad would be Chand?

How could u stop at a very crucial point

I hpe u cont from there itself

cont soon

thanks from the pm

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Sulagna

@SheIsTheOne

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Posted: 13 years ago

#560

Awesome update...👏 The whole greenroom and jealousy part was awesome...😳

And Pan-ki-chee is Piya's mom...😲 ..🤢 ...And everyone thought that Abhay is a model..😆..not his fault...itna handsome jo hai ..😆 😳...And whose Piya's dad...Chand?? 😕 And poor Piya is so disturbed..😔 Koi nahi...Abhay hai na..😳 And Abhay was so protective when Ferine was insulting Piya...If I was in Abhay's place na..i would have actually killed him..😡 And Abhay tore Piya's dress...😲 Ore baba re...😲 ☺️ And finally Abhay wasn't able to control his feelings and...you know ☺️...

Please continue soon...Waiting madly for the next update.😍..And once again...Fantastic and Romantic update...you guys are awesome writers...🤗

P.S--- By the way...My name is Sulagna...I always forget to tell my name...😆