As I Lay Dying-Abhiya OS! Last Update-5(PG-18) - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was so sad😭 and romantic❤️
heart touching😭
well done👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Beb0

Amazing very well written 👏do cont dear 😊


Thanks dear..yes will have to continue now😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pkyekrox

amazing OS!!! there were few lines frm romeo julliet right?? I remember tht frm new moon


Thanks...yes, there are few lines...romeo's last words as he dies...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: HAFRA

that was so sad😭 and romantic❤️

heart touching😭
well done👏


Thank you so much😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
i started crying reading ur os
its painful nd beautiful
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
A very awesome os dear. It was so touchy and heart aching that it made me cry. 😭 😭
While reading the os, i felt like i was seeing everything in front of my own eyes. Very lively description. Hats off to u. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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As per everyone's request, am continuing my OS-As I Lay Dying. Below is update 1. Hope you all enjoy it.🤗

UPDATE-1

Standing like a dumb-struck spectator in a corner, Arnab Dobriyal had witnessed this terrible sight of horror. He couldn't make himself believe that Abhay was lying in front of him struggling between life and death. His face crippled in utter pain and agony'and tears roll down from his eyes. Abhay Raichand, a monster, a vampire, the world's most dangerous predator, loved his daughter beyond his own existence. It was like reality had slapped him right across his face, showing him Abhay's undying and effable love for Piya. As if, he was seeing only one person there and not two different person as Abhay and Piya, as if Abhay and Piya are one soul. And that's the moment, Arnab knew, nothing and no one in this universe can compare the love which Abhay and Piya have for each other. No one can even exist to have this kind of love in their heart. Love that is beyond time and everything.

He rushed down where Piya was sitting with Abhay's unconscious body in her lap.

Keeping his hand on Piya's head, with a trembling voice he said,

Arnab: Piya'.we will save Abhay. I promise. I will do anything, fight with anyone to save Abhay. He will live Piya, yes he will.

Piya didn't know what exactly she should feel. Abhay lying unconscious and her father, who hated every sight of Abhay as he was a vampire, was ready to fight to save her love's life. Piya was dazed. She didn't seem to have a voice to say her father, how much it means to her. She just looked at him and seeing that trust and assurance in his eyes, Piya knew Abhay will be saved.

Just then, like a storm of cold wind, Alina, Chand and Haseena banged inside the room and froze on their tracks as they saw the brutal sight of horror.

Alina with all the voice she had, screamed Abhay's name and fell down beside Piya. Her heartbeat came to a stop. Stammering and choking at her words, she said;

Alina: A...Abhay, Abhay'! Get up Abhay! Please please get up! Nothing will happen to you. No, I won't let anything happen to you. Please Abhay'!

She looked at Piya, who had almost turned like a dead soul herself.

Shaking her up to life, Alina asked: Piya'who did this! Who did this to Abhay? Tell me! Piya'

With a heavy breath and tears in her eyes, she managed to say the name.

Piya: Jeh'...

Pain, anger, disgust, hatred, and distrust. Each and every emotion spread across Alina's face as she heard Piya taking his name. Jeh! Jeh did this to Abhay! Her every hope and trust that she had kept alive inside of her heart, wishing that one day, Jeh will come around, came shattering down. She couldn't believe her ears, Jeh is the reason, Abhay is bleeding today.

Alina: Jeh'...bhai did this to Abhay!

It was like thousand draggers piercing her heart all at the same time. But it was not time for her to get weak, they have to save Abhay. Wiping the last tear off her eyes that died as her beloved brother, Jeh died inside her heart, she said to Piya.

Alina: Abhay will live. Piya you have to be Abhay's strength. It's no time to get weak and cry. We don't have much time in our hands. We have to do something quick.

All this while, Haseena felt like someone have punched a big hole inside her heart and she cannot breathe. Chand was clutching her hand tightly, but still she felt her whole being turning ice cold as she saw Abhay's blood. Her son, her only son, was bleeding. She stepped forward and dropped down touching Abhay's face. Her cold undead heart ripped apart as she looked at her son lying unconscious. Her angel- vampire son, yes that's what she used to call him, but all to herself, had been staked to death.

"Abhay'." Whispered Haseena with blood tears in her eyes.

A blood tear rolled down from someone's eye as he kept his hand on Haseena's shoulder. Haseena looked up and she went numb.

Wiping that one drop of blood tear from his eyes, with a hard-crocked voice,

"Now only one thing can bring Abhay back to life. The potion!" Exclaimed Chand.

And everyone looked up at him with that last hope in their heart.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Edited by Viviliciousgirl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

thank u so much for continuing it 😊its amazing update soon 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
awsm chandrima.ur creations r better than cvs.loved it.continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Aww...First of all thank you yaar. Even Chand was crying and Arnab realised that Abhay truly loves his daughter. Continue soon. 😊
Edited by prerna26 - 14 years ago

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