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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Hi Tamanna.. Good to have you back!! How are you!!🤗

I loved both your FF's preview.. In both Pia is already married..???😲

No I cant see Abhay being sad!! My vote goes to 2nd one..!

But if you could continue both, it would be great dear!😊!

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tamanna

@tamannamalik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

hey guys... destiny has got the maximum votes so m going to start with destiny... thank u for ur votes... my fanfic is inspired from baabul...

brief introduction: Abhay and piya are best friends... abhay loves piya but piya just considered abhay as her friend, she falls in love with jeh and they get married.. Jeh and piya have a son who they have named ansh, jeh dies in a road accident... with lots of convincing piya agrees to marry abhay... jeh's dad gets piya and abhay married...

chapter 1
The cloud filled sky was bright as it surrounded the plane hurtling through clouds. abhay peered through the window and smiled. The weather was perfect. It kinda matched his feelings right now. He just married the woman he had fell in love to ever since he knew the meaning of love. Abhay smiled as he stared at the woman who was leaned against him, sound asleep, tired from the plane ride. He pulled the blanket who was covering both of them higher and piya sighed contentedly. Thank god for her small body. She could actually bring her legs up and made a little make shift bed as she leaned against abhay.

piya was a little apprehensive to leave Ansh and he even suggested that they could bring him along but jeh's parents assured us that he would be fine. After a little crying session between Ansh and piya they were finally on board on their way to Langkawi Island in Malaysia.

They were still in the exploratory phase as it was a relatively short time of the trasition from being just best friends to actually a married couple. He had said that he would wait a lifetime for her. It did not matter that she needed time to be as comfortable as she was with jeh. As long as she was with him.

The plane landed at the island's airport and still piya did not wake. She must be really tired.

"piya, get up. We're here," said abhay, running a hand on her cheek. piya stirred and lifted her head from abhay's shoulder.

"We're here?" asked piya as she looked out the window.

"Yeah," said abhay, giving her a smile. piya gave a smile of her own as she peered out the window and saw the beautiful scenery of small villages surrounding the airport. This was gonna be a trip of a lifetime.
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The next thing they knew they were in a honeymoon suite at the Sutra Beach Resort. piya pulled open the curtains and gasped with awe at the view. They had the beach view and from the suite she could see the pearly white water with people swimming and enjoying themselves by the beach.

She could feel abhay's presence by her side.

"It's pretty, isn't it?" asked piya as she leaned into abhay a little. abhay smiled at the gesture.

"Yeah, breathtaking," said abhay

"Can we take a walk on the beach later?" asked piya.

"Yeah, sure. It's a nice day," said abhay.

"Okay, I'm gonna go unpack," said piya, with a giddy smile. abhay just laughed at how excited piya was. He would give anything to her if it meant he got to see that smile on her face.
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The sun was starting to set as they walked along the beach. The waves crashed against the shore and tickled their bare feet. It was nice to feel the sand between their toes and the wind caressing their faces.

"Can I have some?" asked abhay, indicating the ice cream they bought at one of the stalls along the beach.

piya just rolled her eyes.

"I thought you didn't want any," said abhay.

"I want it now, you make it look so yummy," said abhay.

"Okay," said piya. She fed the ice ' cream to abhay but instead of letting him lick the ice ' cream, she smash it on his nose. There was ice ' cream everywhere, from his nose to his mouth. abhay looked at her with wide eyes, stunned. piya just laughed.

"Oh, you're gonna get it from me," said abhay, wiping off the ice ' cream. piya knew he had something up his sleeve. Before he could do anything, she took off running and abhay chased after her.

piya looked over her shoulder, laughing. It was hysterical to see abhay running like crazy with ice - cream on his face. Finally, abhay caught her and they stumbled on the sand, laughing.

"That wasn't very nice," said abhay as he trapped piya who was lying on the sand.

"Well, you said you wanted ice ' cream," said piya, laughing. abhay could not help himself. piya's laughs were infectious. They laughed and piya pushed against his chest and abhay laid flat on the sand next to piya. They admired the setting sun in silence. Both content just being in each other's presence.

"We should go, it's getting dark," said abhay

"Yeah."

abhay got up and helped piya up.

"Man, you're heavy," said abhay, jokingly. piya just poked him in the sides.

"Ow, sorry. I was just kidding. You can't be fat even if you wanted to,piya ," said abhay. piya just smiled and they walked towards the hotel. As they walked, piya took his hand in hers and abhay smiled at their linked hands. This was a start of something amazing.

Edited by tamannamalik - 13 years ago

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Beautiful Update Tamanna!😊

Jeh's parents are so sweet. Not many people treat their daughter-in- law as their own daughter.😃 Abhay is a darling. He not only accepted her with her past but is ready to give whatever time she needs to adjust with him. Loved Abhiya moment. ❤️ Thanks a lot for Pm dear. Continue soon.👍🏼

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tamanna

@tamannamalik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani
Hi Tamanna.. hey dear😊 Good to have you back!! How are you!!🤗m sooo happy to be back... m fine jus busy with col... wat about u...?

I loved both your FF's preview.. In both Pia is already married..???😲thank u sooo much, yes she is married in both...

No I cant see Abhay being sad!! My vote goes to 2nd one..!okay sweetie...But if you could continue both, it would be great dear!😊!i wish i could but m really busy... sorry...

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

aww...awesome..loved it...they are best frnds..and for any relation to be successful...its good if ur partner is ur frnd...their relation is so pure and serene..and loved it..beautifully written...update soon..thanks for pm..

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anjali

@adnilover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

awww

I loved the first update. Nice start. I had really liked the story of babul. Glad to see abhiya fit in that story. Update soon, and this time, no sad endings😛

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cuteteddy

@cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

awww they r so cute . tamanna it was amazing . so they r on honeymoon hun ? thanks for the pm n update soon
take care

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Nice cute start Tamanna!!

Abhay and Pia's naughtiness are too sweet! Jeh's parents how sweet they are.. They remarried her!! How sweet..

Continue soon dear.. Thanks for the PM..

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

lovely update tamanna i loved it abhay accepted pia with her past and also giving her time for adjustment that was awesome and hope soon pia also feel for him . i loved u r story description u first part written very well .and i m waiting what happened next thnx 4 pm lvu tc.

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sweety_crazed

@sweety_crazed

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

hey!!!

awesome update🤗...i sooo luvd d concept👍🏼...its really intresting...i lked both ur ff's...wish u continue both...n pls do pm me ...i would luv 2 read more😊...

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