Fanfic: Destiny note page 43 plz read

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys... 😊 i have 2 concepts in mind for a fanfic... u guys have to choose one... i will continue to write the fic with maximum votes... i cannot promise regular updates but will try my best to complete the fic soon... i hope u like it...

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"longing for love"

a month has passed and abhay always hesitated about asking piya out.. even though he knew his intentions are in their right place.. he just couldnt let himself ask her once..

"alright girls.. i see that we have reached the portrait level.. your assignment about drawing a person that you really love is due 2nd of Feb.. that's one week away"
"so now i can draw you?" a girl asked
Abhay smiled shyly at her "your decision.." she giggled and left "oh Piya"
"yes" she walked over to him
he waited until everyone was out the class "i see that you still are at first position.." he pointed at the wall
she looked at the wall then smiled at him "yes"
"um.. i was thinking that.." his heart was pounding and he was a bit shaking
"that?"
he looked at her, took a deep breath "go out for lunch?" piya's smile faded "its not far.."
"i cant" she interrupted him looking down
he looked at her "can i know why?"
she held her bag tight "im married.." she said softly, Abhay felt his heart stop.. he wanted to say something but he couldnt even open his mouth
"bye.." she greeted him not looking at his face and left the class

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"Destiny"
Abhay grabbed the phone and called for room service. He ordered a set of cheeseburger and some spaghetti for Piya. They even got some cheesecakes for dessert. Once the food arrived, Piya had changed into a tank top and shorts.
They sat on the couch in front of the TV with the food on the coffee table. Abhay was engrossed in the action movie as he took a bite of his cheeseburger. Piya just stared at him.

"What?" asked Abhay, noticing her stare.

"Nothing. I just wonder how you can eat like that and still have that amazing body," said Piya, smiling.

"I just have high metabolism, I guess. I work out too, you know," said Abhay smiling at her.

"I know. But even Jeh worked out but he was really cautious of what he ate," said Piya. When those words came out of her mouth, she wondered how abhay would feel talking about her husband who was her first love. She was afraid she might be a little insensitive to bring Jeh up.

Abhay sensed the change in Piya's mood and he knew it was still weird for her to be talking about Jeh to him ever since they were married. He brushed his hands off of the burger crumbs and turned to Piya.

"Hey, you can talk about Jeh to me if you want to. I understand and respect that he was your everything and I want to know everything about you. I am still your best friend even after everything, right?" said Abhay.

destiny index:

chap 1: page 6
chap 2: page 11
chap 3: page 17
chap 4: page 22
chap 5: page 26
chap 6: page 32
chap 7: page 39

this fanfic is being continued by snigzie on the link given below
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2378448
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prerna26 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Tamanna , How are you? Both of them are really very nice. Ok my vote goes to the second one-"Destiny" FF. Continue soon.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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My vote goes to the second one. But I would really like to see piya getting over jeh and fall in love with abhay. Its great to have you back🤗. Loved your last 2 FFs. I was hoping you will be back with a new one
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Both r gud concept.I m so confused yaar.I wnt 2 know wht kind of relatonship Pia share wid her hubby in 1st FF & evn wnt 2 know wht consequences made Abhiya married in 2nd & how they will move ahead😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey,tamanna.back wd another ff,gud.i lyked ur last 2 ffs.all da best 4 dis one.i vote 4 da second one.sounds quite interesting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Tamanna , How are you? Glad to see u back!
Both of them are really very nice. But i like the 2nd (destiny) more!
Continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thats not fair tamanna ! both r so good . i want both . but my vote goes to 2 no no 1 no 2 no u decide
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey long time tammi!🤗both r awesome i can't decide~
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Tamanna
its so difficult to decide from the 2 ffs they both seem different cant u continue with both but if u want to continue 1 please longing for love I cant decide please if possible continue with both
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Both are nice Tamanna but I will go for the second one... Destiny... please continue with that 😳

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